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Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 21, 2016 9:52 pm Title: Loss

Life is not easy on Justin. But Brian broke one rule for him already.

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 21, 2016 4:53 am Title: Loss

Poor Justin and Daphne. Although I think that Daphne is right and a separation is probably the best for the two of them I'm still sad that they are both in pain.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 28, 2016 2:52 am Title: Loss

Well, unlike Mikey, Daphne knows when to call it quits.  I hope the new roommate is Emmett.



Author's Response:

I didn't write Michael as bad as I do in my new fanfic. This one he his actually nice.

Reviewer: eureka1 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2016 4:11 am Title: Loss

This is such a heart-wrenching chapter. The situation between Justin and Daphne reminds me of the friendship between Brian and Michael, with one person needing the other far more, more greatly fearing being abandoned. That Justin used sex with Daphne to keep her close is so awful, even if Daphne was complicit. Brain may have come close with Michael, but he never crossed that line. In this story, Justin and Daphne need to grow up and develop a healthy relationship rather than an unhealthy codependency.

The Sap is such a slimy bastard. I hope nothing awful will happen to Justin.

I like Debbie as Justin's potential stepmother; he could do far worse. I'm curious when Justin and Brian will realize that they're connected in more ways than one.

Who will Justin's roommate be? Emmett?



Author's Response:

This chapter was difficult to write. I didn't think most would like it.

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