[Report This]Date: Jul 21, 2023 8:16 pm Title: ~PART XV: ~YOU GO TO DIRECTLY TO JAIL WHILE I COLLECT TWO MILLION DOLLARS~
Well, another one under my belt. This story is starting to be very gripping. How do you keep coming up with all these intriguing plots for your stories?
It's kind of early in the story, for both Lindsay and Michael to already be in jail. LOL.. and it doesn't look like they'll get out for a while.
Why is Michael's bail so high? And if that's the case, what, pray tell, is Lindsay's going to be? She definitely has more charges against her.
That was really lowdown rotten that Lindsay said the babies were Brian's. But thank god, that Melanie found the paprwork. What is Lindsay going to do with having twins? Pregnant and being in prison! We can only hope that Sam will come and take them away from her. But if Sam wants the babies, Lindsay can get a test at the hospital, where they can do a prenatal DNA test as long as she's around two months. At least he will be able to plan on it actually happening.
And now with Lindsay only having $300, there's no way she can post bail for the new charges. So, sad... NOT!
It sounds like Brian and Justin have good people for their cases. Between Janice Morgan and Judge Napier, maybe he can make it a little safe for them. Although Antonio sounds like a loose cannon. Scary.
Thanks for this story. It's very good.
Hugs,
Cathy
Date: Apr 27, 2021 7:45 pm Title: ~PART XV: ~YOU GO TO DIRECTLY TO JAIL WHILE I COLLECT TWO MILLION DOLLARS~
did read it again. Hope for an update
Date: Apr 27, 2021 4:59 pm Title: ~Part I: LIONS AMONG MERE MORTALS~
I hope you are able to finish this. It is so good, just like your other stories that I have enjoyed so much. You are one hack of a writer. Thank you for shating
Date: Dec 07, 2020 7:37 am Title: ~PART XV: ~YOU GO TO DIRECTLY TO JAIL WHILE I COLLECT TWO MILLION DOLLARS~
read it again
Date: Aug 14, 2020 11:06 am Title: ~PART XV: ~YOU GO TO DIRECTLY TO JAIL WHILE I COLLECT TWO MILLION DOLLARS~
Please please please post more chapters
Date: Jul 24, 2019 12:13 am Title: ~PART XV: ~YOU GO TO DIRECTLY TO JAIL WHILE I COLLECT TWO MILLION DOLLARS~
Love it, hope there will be an update
Author's Response:
Hello Angelika,
There will definitely be an update very soon. But right now as you can probably tell, BILG and JT2U have me in a VERY tight grip. SOWK and AI2 are also disturbing my sleep in way that you cannot imagine. Strangely, or in some ways gratefully, each of the characters from my numerous WIPs have their own personalities, which are very strong and makes my life... interesting.... LOL Just call little ol' me, your resident Literary Schizophrenic!
~Nichelle
Date: Jun 22, 2019 11:38 pm Title: ~PART XV: ~YOU GO TO DIRECTLY TO JAIL WHILE I COLLECT TWO MILLION DOLLARS~
I have spent all day rereading this in it's entirety as it's been almost 9 months since I read any of it. I swear I should have a spread sheet outlining all your stories on it.
For Janice to take it upon herself to have Laurent tailed, that's really something. I mean, they are not related, although she knew Justin in school, that's still sticking your neck out for someone you are not even close friends with.
How, pray tell, how could Lindsay go free, if she was arrested for stalking and CHILD ENDANGERMENT?!?!? Yes, it's good to separate her and Marlene... but...
Carl saying that Laurent is always getting off, maybe they need judges that apparently Laurent isn't lining their pockets.
Good... Craig going to state pen... maybe without funds he will have to forget his vendetta against Molly and Justin. He should be happy he's out of sight of Laurent... although I would presume Laurent can reach him even in prison.
Will Laurent help set Marlene free?
$2 million - Is that solely Justin's, or Kinnetik's campaign cost?
$500k - was that MICHAEL's bail??? Either update - or drop me a clue. PLEASE! and if that was MICHAEL's - what the hell will LINDSAY's Be? Although, I have to go back to child endangerment... he shouldn't be given bail... she should be in prison.
UGH!! (still love ya, though!)
HUGS ~Cathy
[Report This]Date: Jun 20, 2019 1:13 pm Title: ~PART XV: ~YOU GO TO DIRECTLY TO JAIL WHILE I COLLECT TWO MILLION DOLLARS~
Craig and Michael together: it's a recipe for a huge disaster.
On the other hand, Brian and Justin together: it's a recipe for amazing success, both personal and professional.
[Report This]Date: Jun 20, 2019 1:03 pm Title: ~PART XV: ~YOU GO TO DIRECTLY TO JAIL WHILE I COLLECT TWO MILLION DOLLARS~
It is so wonderful to see how your mind works and updates on your fabulous stories. This one chapter has given us a lot to look forward to.
[Report This]Date: Jun 20, 2019 2:25 am Title: ~PART XV: ~YOU GO TO DIRECTLY TO JAIL WHILE I COLLECT TWO MILLION DOLLARS~
Justin deserves good fortune coming his way and a strong partner to stand by his side and help him when everything gets a bit overwhelming while also rejoicing in his triumphs.
Having Laurent followed is a good idea need to know what he is doing and who he is talking to besides Marlene.
Brian and Justin finding a security team outside of Pittsburgh could prove useful seem they need protection for Molly and everyone who can be used against them.
Craig and Marlene do need to be kept from Michael and Lindsay for as long as possible but Craig and Marlene need to be kept from each other so they can't come up with a new plan to get back at Molly and Justin.
Lindsay and Michael can do Stupid All By Themselves.
Thanks For the Update 😃
Date: Oct 06, 2018 9:59 pm Title: PART XIV ~DO NOT COLLECT~
Ah, ah, ah Lindsay. You thought you were so smart. You thought you were home free after Sam sprung you. HA! You had to pay him back. Then you were arrested for harrassment and CHILD ENDANGERMENT! Hell, you might be in prison when your baby is born. And the icing on the cake, Mrs. Brian Kinney Wannabe, was served a restraining order from the husband-to-be! Only serves you right to be back with the screeching whiny man. And what a shame Lindsay, you can't contact your P.I. now. Who's your one phone call gonna be? Mommy and Daddy? I don't think they will give a rat's ass about you when they find out everything.
Did Debbie produce Lindsay's bank card at the hospital for the bill? I don't think she has enough money left for bail, just incase it's granted. Do her and Michael still owe the P.I. any money? Well, get comfortable you two. You're not going anyplace for quite awhile.
Sam's change-of-heart attitude was refreshing. It took him self-sacrificing himself to apologize to Melanie. Finally his eyes were open to the true form that is Lindsay. I think they need to get that DNA sample done as soon as possible, because if it's Sam's, he needs to make arrangements for the child, and start some legal proceedings to protect that child and get any rights Lindsay may have away from her. That's if he truly wants the child. Maybe the best friend is what he needs in his life after-all. He's not getting any younger.
It would serve Lindsay right if the child was Michael's. All her snooping and manipulations would be out the door, and she would have to live the next 6-7 months knowing that child was Michael's. Oh how funny that would be. Debbie would probably be responsible for raising the child, as Michael and Lindsay would be living in Chez-Prison.
Well I'm all caught up to this story. I'll have to start on 'The Anti-Couple' now. I really like this story, Can't wait to see what's in store for our beloved (or not so beloved) characters.
XOXO ~ Cathy
Date: Oct 06, 2018 7:18 pm Title: PART XIII ~DO NOT PASS GO~
WOW! Marlene is truly the works of a repulsive, vile, monstrous maggot! (Craig isn't far behind!) So very estatic that their conversations were recorded. I guess it's a waiting game to see how Laurent decides to play.
Brian Kinney is all about appearances... oh poor little Justin, your days with my husband-to-be are numbered. Don't get too comfortable! Yeah, delusional much, Lindsay? Wait until Sam tells you to take a flying leap, too! You will have NOBODY! Hopefully Ron and Nancy won't adhere to Lindsay manipulations. We can only keep our fingers crossed that they will be fearful of insinuating themselves into the lives of Chartrez family.
XOXO ~ Cathy
Date: Oct 06, 2018 6:21 pm Title: PART XII~EXACTING A POUND OF FLESH~
I have to wonder about Lindsay's thoughts earlier when she seemed to think it was Sam's baby when she woke up in the hospital. I shudder to think what the genetic makeup of a child would be born from Michael's and Lindsay's genes.
$18,000 - $300 = $17,700. It's always a fun read when Ben realizes what a truly horrible person Michael is. Good to see him take out the trash. And funnier yet was Michael trying to blame Melanie for making trumped up shit because Lindsay left her! Did Michel not get the memo from Lindsay that Melanie kicked her loose, over-used twat out of the house? And that she is pregnant? And not sure who the father is? Happy to find out Michael filed for dissolution of their marriage six months ago. Now, Michael really doesn't have a leg to stand on.
Glad to see Hunter discovered the goods in the attic and garage. But a VAULT? Were they able to get the vault opened? That ought to be interesting. What could be so important it's in a VAULT instead of being in the attic or garage? And going after the entire contents of Red Cape Comics? Certainly the best thing Ben could do. But delighted to know they are already reaping benefits of the eBay sells.
XOXO ~ Cathy
Author's Response:
LOL! Soooo, where did the rest of the money go to? Or should that be whom? Well, now you'll just have to keep tuning in to find out...LOL Don't worry, I didn't miscalculate. So really, Ben asking for the $15K is pretty much right on target; he's leaving the other $300 alone because it went to J.R.
Happy Reading!
Date: Oct 06, 2018 8:01 am Title: PART XI ~IN FOR A PENNY~
Gary turning out to be a nice guy was a great twist. Brandon sounds like he needs to be in the loony bin. 'Crawling and clawing'... 'Kicking and screaming'... very descriptive. Asking Justin how Brian felt about Justin screwing his brains out was pretty funny. Because that's exactly what Brian was doing to Justin when they got home from dinner. (Justin should have told Brandon just how much he LOVED bottoming!) hehe...
Really liked the passion and how quickly Brian and Justin can heat it up. And Justin getting included in adding a percentage of the company into his stock portfolio, was icing on the cake.
XOXO ~ Cathy
Date: Oct 05, 2018 7:10 am Title: ~PART X: DESPERATE MEASURES
Lindsay and Michael... Shame on you! Brian was the one who had you arrested. Why would he come to bail you put? And yes Carl. Call animal control. You could have them shipped off to the zoo to live with the other chimps, but they would drive away all of the business.
Brian... Why did you only give Justin a chaste kiss in front of the Dumbasses? He should have dipped him, and gave him a toe-curling kiss! They could have sat back and watched the dogs all come running. Brian might be filing a restraining order, but for some reason I don't think that will matter. Also Brian could demand a DNA test to be done right now. No need to wait until the baby is born. As long as Lindsay is at least two months, all they need is a blood draw from Lindsay, and a cheek swab from Brian. Let's see how Lindsay would spin her tale then.
I'm worried for Molly. It sounds like Laurent isn't gonna stop at anything until he gets what he wants. Molly needs to be totally upfront with Joel and his parents. Can Craig and Marlene be charged with attempted kidnapping? Maybe if they were, they might reveal why Laurent is Hell-Bent on getting Molly.
Justin, too. I'm worried. Brandon sounds like he could turn dangerous. At least he's got Brian, and Brian has always protected what's his.
XOXO ~ Cathy
Date: Oct 05, 2018 6:28 am Title: PART IX: ~DESPERATE TIMES~
I'm so happy for Cynthia. I bet that was the best day she's ever had since starting to work for Brian Kinney! But curiosity has me asking... How did they get past security? They were supposed to be banned from Kinnetik.
Hilariously delusional those two are! "Most important person in Brian's life" and "The best friend"... get a clue you two. He just had you arrested! Can't wait to hear them when they get to the jail.
Thank heavens Justin is seeing the situation with Sap and Brandon for what it is. With possibility that they can do something to stop this nonsense and save his money,
XOXO ~ Cathy
Date: Oct 05, 2018 3:30 am Title: PART VIII: ~YEARNING TO BE FREE
Great Chapter! I love the instant, spontaneous feelings both Brian and Justin have for each other. It's certainly bound to be confusing, because neither man has ever lived his life this way, or even had feelings remotely close to this. I love how they are willing to stand by each other and being there for each other.
XOXO ~ Cathy
Date: Oct 05, 2018 1:54 am Title: PART VII... BETWEEN LOVE AND HATE
WOW! Well we know Lindsay's baby is Sam's, or that is what she believes, so I don't think she took a condom out of the loft.
I didn't realize that 'Gary' was the Sap. Him and Brandon are crazy! Justin, I know you don't like asking for help, but you have to change your mind about signing over $10,000,000!
Loved Debbie's parting words to Lindsay. "By the way, I hope that you get out and find a job soon. Melanie cancelled your health insurance the day she kicked you out. Perhaps your cock-on-the-side will help you out." Lindsay thinking Brian will help her out, is laughable. She's not in the know about what the conversations are going on around her. Has she even given a thought as to Gus' whereabouts yet?
Great Chapter...
XOXO ~ Cathy
Date: Oct 05, 2018 1:12 am Title: ~Part V: TANGLED WEBS~
Craig is the most profoundly immoral and malevolent person on this planet! To plan to sell his daughter and confiscate her inheritance! God! Is there a proper word to describe him? I don't think I can come up with one to suit him. Are Justin and Molly aware of their inheritance? If that was the case, Justin wouldn't have needed to make a deal with Brian about college tuition. And if they aren't aware of it, why not?
What ever is wrong with Lindsay? the brunette had spent almost an hour licking and stroking her to no avail. Does she have Pelvic Inflammatory Disease? Whatever it is, not feeling sorry for her. Just glad she passed out before Debbie bought her deceitful lies. Debbie better bite her tongue when it comes to Melanie, until she has all the facts. The family is not going to take too kindly to her berating Melanie.
LEDA! You Go Brian! And YES! Melanie and Jenny are staying with Brian and Justin.
XOXO ~ Cathy
Date: Sep 30, 2018 12:17 am Title: PART VI: THIN LINES...
Cold shower time. That, My Dear, was the HOTTEST sex scene I have ever read. WOWZA! Brian's efforts towards making Justin's first time bottoming special, really paid off. I think he officially born the newest bottom boy, well as far as it is Brian on top.
I loved the speech Brian gave to Thunder-Cunt Lindsay. If that's what he said to her in the past, how does she expect him to accept her now?
I can't see why Mel is any kind of concerned about Michael's threat to get custody of Jenny. What kind of job does he have? I'm sure he's homeless by now. He hasn't supported Jenny other than a few dollars here and there, but can pay out $300 monthly for a PI to keep tabs on Brian? No judge in his right mind would allow someone like that custody.
Very good chapter...
XOXO ~ Cathy
Date: Sep 29, 2018 6:06 pm Title: ~Part IV: MIDDLE GROUND~
You Go Molly! Does Joel know all about Molly's family? Does he know what Marlene tried to do to her? And who is Marlene to call Molly a whore? Isn't that Marlene's title? Well, I think Marlene just got her and Craig checked out of Chartrez Resort. Craig can thank her by reacting the same as Molly, for all I care. I'm thinking Molly might have a restraining order against Marlene, so can she claim to have been protecting herself? Maybe Marlene will go to jail for breaking the restraining order, but would Craig bail her out? Even if Molly gets charges pressed against her, Harry won't allow anything to stick. And there's plenty of money backing her, along with family.
Michael, Michael, Michael! Did I understand that correctly, that Ben has been giving the rent money TO Michael, and instead of paying the stores rent, he was sending it to Lindsay? If he's a few months behind, can't the owner have the locks changed and keep his store merchandise, which includes the collectibles? Did Ben get a notice in the mail pertaining to the closure of the store, and that's how he found out? That still doesn't count for the fact that Brian was sending extra money to Lindsay, plus she was siphoning from Gus' college fund, JUST WHERE IS LINDSAY SPENDING ALL THAT MONEY? PI's can cost up to $100 per hour. Just how often was the PI ghosting Brian?
I hope Craig doesn't try to get Michael and Lindsay involved in his conspiracies. Or will they try to involve Craig? Poor Brian... has already been through the ringer at the of them, but I'm sure we're only scratching the future.
This story is so good. thanks, Nichelle.
XOXO ~ Cathy
Date: Sep 29, 2018 8:49 am Title: ~Part III: WHO'S YOUR DADDY NOW?~
The look of an angel with the lust of a devil. I don't think I will ever get that definition of Justin out of my head.
So Michael keep the sheets *shudders*... I'm thinking Ben is going to be doing that housecleaning pretty soon. I hope Ted set Ben straight regarding the lack of time spent between Michael and Brian. I hope when Debbie hears all about Michael's stupidity and foolishness, she will stand her guns and not coddle Michael. We all know how easy it is for her to play Mother Hen to her baby.
Craig... scum of a father. All he had to do was BE a Father, and he wouldn't be in the situation he is with his business. But if him and Marlene think they can corner Justin and have him cowering to them, they better remember Brian is right there. Besides, Justin has a restraining order, and they can also bring their attention to Chartrez'. Glad Justin told Craig just how unimportant he was to him. And Brian threatening him was classic.
Lindsay. God that she-devil! I can't wait to see what her incidentals were. If she was using Gus' college fund for the PI, the incidental money had to have gone somewhere else. If she escapes jail time, she's going to be paying back Brian for a long time to come. I wonder if she has a secret bank account? And she called herself Brian's WIFE? I'm surprised Brian didn't throw up at that moment. Or at least start gagging! I knew Brian was going to be incensed about Sam's treatment of Gus. And with the way Gus is terrified of having to go with Lindsay, things must be a lot worse than we thought. If Lindsay knew what was good for her, she's get Sam to take her FAR away!
Justin is so funny. Described Michael to a tee. I loved his response to Emmett's take of the bed scene. And the way he talked to Lindsay, well let's just say I found it quite humorous. And I loved Gus hugging Justin. Yep, Mr Kinney, you are done for.
I sure hope Mel gets there soon. Will she know to go to the Resort? Glad she plans to move back to Pittsburgh. And, if she can't afford it, we know Brian will willingly help. No Charge!
XOXO ~ Cathy
[Report This]Date: Sep 28, 2018 11:48 pm Title: ~Part I: LIONS AMONG MERE MORTALS~
So happy to see a new chapter in this really interesting story. Looking forward to the next :-)
Date: Sep 28, 2018 5:34 pm Title: PART XIV ~DO NOT COLLECT~
Lindsey lost the game she thought she was directing and Sam played her well.
She is going down big time.
Date: Sep 28, 2018 5:31 pm Title: PART XIII ~DO NOT PASS GO~
Great chapter! Craig and his wife are out for some time, so Justin and Molly should be safe.