[Report This]Date: Jul 21, 2023 8:16 pm Title: ~PART XV: ~YOU GO TO DIRECTLY TO JAIL WHILE I COLLECT TWO MILLION DOLLARS~
Well, another one under my belt. This story is starting to be very gripping. How do you keep coming up with all these intriguing plots for your stories?
It's kind of early in the story, for both Lindsay and Michael to already be in jail. LOL.. and it doesn't look like they'll get out for a while.
Why is Michael's bail so high? And if that's the case, what, pray tell, is Lindsay's going to be? She definitely has more charges against her.
That was really lowdown rotten that Lindsay said the babies were Brian's. But thank god, that Melanie found the paprwork. What is Lindsay going to do with having twins? Pregnant and being in prison! We can only hope that Sam will come and take them away from her. But if Sam wants the babies, Lindsay can get a test at the hospital, where they can do a prenatal DNA test as long as she's around two months. At least he will be able to plan on it actually happening.
And now with Lindsay only having $300, there's no way she can post bail for the new charges. So, sad... NOT!
It sounds like Brian and Justin have good people for their cases. Between Janice Morgan and Judge Napier, maybe he can make it a little safe for them. Although Antonio sounds like a loose cannon. Scary.
Thanks for this story. It's very good.
Hugs,
Cathy
Date: Apr 27, 2021 7:45 pm Title: ~PART XV: ~YOU GO TO DIRECTLY TO JAIL WHILE I COLLECT TWO MILLION DOLLARS~
did read it again. Hope for an update
Date: Dec 07, 2020 7:37 am Title: ~PART XV: ~YOU GO TO DIRECTLY TO JAIL WHILE I COLLECT TWO MILLION DOLLARS~
read it again
Date: Aug 14, 2020 11:06 am Title: ~PART XV: ~YOU GO TO DIRECTLY TO JAIL WHILE I COLLECT TWO MILLION DOLLARS~
Please please please post more chapters
Date: Jul 24, 2019 12:13 am Title: ~PART XV: ~YOU GO TO DIRECTLY TO JAIL WHILE I COLLECT TWO MILLION DOLLARS~
Love it, hope there will be an update
Author's Response:
Hello Angelika,
There will definitely be an update very soon. But right now as you can probably tell, BILG and JT2U have me in a VERY tight grip. SOWK and AI2 are also disturbing my sleep in way that you cannot imagine. Strangely, or in some ways gratefully, each of the characters from my numerous WIPs have their own personalities, which are very strong and makes my life... interesting.... LOL Just call little ol' me, your resident Literary Schizophrenic!
~Nichelle
Date: Jun 22, 2019 11:38 pm Title: ~PART XV: ~YOU GO TO DIRECTLY TO JAIL WHILE I COLLECT TWO MILLION DOLLARS~
I have spent all day rereading this in it's entirety as it's been almost 9 months since I read any of it. I swear I should have a spread sheet outlining all your stories on it.
For Janice to take it upon herself to have Laurent tailed, that's really something. I mean, they are not related, although she knew Justin in school, that's still sticking your neck out for someone you are not even close friends with.
How, pray tell, how could Lindsay go free, if she was arrested for stalking and CHILD ENDANGERMENT?!?!? Yes, it's good to separate her and Marlene... but...
Carl saying that Laurent is always getting off, maybe they need judges that apparently Laurent isn't lining their pockets.
Good... Craig going to state pen... maybe without funds he will have to forget his vendetta against Molly and Justin. He should be happy he's out of sight of Laurent... although I would presume Laurent can reach him even in prison.
Will Laurent help set Marlene free?
$2 million - Is that solely Justin's, or Kinnetik's campaign cost?
$500k - was that MICHAEL's bail??? Either update - or drop me a clue. PLEASE! and if that was MICHAEL's - what the hell will LINDSAY's Be? Although, I have to go back to child endangerment... he shouldn't be given bail... she should be in prison.
UGH!! (still love ya, though!)
HUGS ~Cathy
[Report This]Date: Jun 20, 2019 1:13 pm Title: ~PART XV: ~YOU GO TO DIRECTLY TO JAIL WHILE I COLLECT TWO MILLION DOLLARS~
Craig and Michael together: it's a recipe for a huge disaster.
On the other hand, Brian and Justin together: it's a recipe for amazing success, both personal and professional.
[Report This]Date: Jun 20, 2019 1:03 pm Title: ~PART XV: ~YOU GO TO DIRECTLY TO JAIL WHILE I COLLECT TWO MILLION DOLLARS~
It is so wonderful to see how your mind works and updates on your fabulous stories. This one chapter has given us a lot to look forward to.
[Report This]Date: Jun 20, 2019 2:25 am Title: ~PART XV: ~YOU GO TO DIRECTLY TO JAIL WHILE I COLLECT TWO MILLION DOLLARS~
Justin deserves good fortune coming his way and a strong partner to stand by his side and help him when everything gets a bit overwhelming while also rejoicing in his triumphs.
Having Laurent followed is a good idea need to know what he is doing and who he is talking to besides Marlene.
Brian and Justin finding a security team outside of Pittsburgh could prove useful seem they need protection for Molly and everyone who can be used against them.
Craig and Marlene do need to be kept from Michael and Lindsay for as long as possible but Craig and Marlene need to be kept from each other so they can't come up with a new plan to get back at Molly and Justin.
Lindsay and Michael can do Stupid All By Themselves.
Thanks For the Update 😃