Date: Oct 06, 2018 6:21 pm Title: PART XII~EXACTING A POUND OF FLESH~
I have to wonder about Lindsay's thoughts earlier when she seemed to think it was Sam's baby when she woke up in the hospital. I shudder to think what the genetic makeup of a child would be born from Michael's and Lindsay's genes.
$18,000 - $300 = $17,700. It's always a fun read when Ben realizes what a truly horrible person Michael is. Good to see him take out the trash. And funnier yet was Michael trying to blame Melanie for making trumped up shit because Lindsay left her! Did Michel not get the memo from Lindsay that Melanie kicked her loose, over-used twat out of the house? And that she is pregnant? And not sure who the father is? Happy to find out Michael filed for dissolution of their marriage six months ago. Now, Michael really doesn't have a leg to stand on.
Glad to see Hunter discovered the goods in the attic and garage. But a VAULT? Were they able to get the vault opened? That ought to be interesting. What could be so important it's in a VAULT instead of being in the attic or garage? And going after the entire contents of Red Cape Comics? Certainly the best thing Ben could do. But delighted to know they are already reaping benefits of the eBay sells.
XOXO ~ Cathy
Author's Response:
LOL! Soooo, where did the rest of the money go to? Or should that be whom? Well, now you'll just have to keep tuning in to find out...LOL Don't worry, I didn't miscalculate. So really, Ben asking for the $15K is pretty much right on target; he's leaving the other $300 alone because it went to J.R.
Happy Reading!
Date: Apr 10, 2018 7:48 pm Title: PART XII~EXACTING A POUND OF FLESH~
Super great chapter. Been at the end was awesome.
Date: Jan 11, 2018 2:38 pm Title: PART XII~EXACTING A POUND OF FLESH~
You create such intricate plots - I have no idea how you keep all the threads from unraveling. Kudos. TAG
Date: Jan 07, 2018 10:39 pm Title: PART XII~EXACTING A POUND OF FLESH~
'The fuckery of Michael & Lindsay.' LMAO That says it all! Nevermind the great interactions with Brian & Justin but all of Ben & Mel....fabulous! So proud of Ben! Finally having the last word & last laugh on Michael.
Date: Jan 07, 2018 2:08 pm Title: PART XII~EXACTING A POUND OF FLESH~
Whoa! What a firework! Ben finally grew a pair or did he borough Mel's?
Talking of a pair: Brian just officialized one with Justin with burning heat! I bet the Liberty mill will go in overdrive in the coming hours.
Date: Jan 07, 2018 4:47 am Title: PART XII~EXACTING A POUND OF FLESH~
Awesome story! Just read all the chapters! Can’t wait to read more 😊
[Report This]Date: Jan 07, 2018 4:16 am Title: PART XII~EXACTING A POUND OF FLESH~
So nice to see more on this. And what fun to see that Ben finally has a clue and is doing what needs to be done. Great job!
[Report This]Date: Jan 07, 2018 2:23 am Title: PART XII~EXACTING A POUND OF FLESH~
Damn when Ben Bitch Slaps He Doesn't Hold Back!!!! lol
Michael doesn't deserve nice because he wants what he will never have....Brian Aiden Kinney
Brian would cut off his own dick with a dull knife before he would sleep with Michael.
And as for 'Open For Service, 24/7 Lindsay' Brian would rather join a monastery of his mother's choosing before he would go down that dry and overused road again.
They both want what they can't have and it drives them up the wall that out of millions of people on the planet Brian would stick his cock in a wall socket before he would let them near him.
Thankfully Justin is better than a wall socket ;)
So which one of Michael's Fuck buddies knocked up Lindsay or is it Michael's spawn she is carrying???
He spent $15000 on a private eye and his toys but his daughter got a lousy three hundred dollars??
For that I want to kick his Ass until my foot gets tired then I will switch to the other one.
Ben has woken up and he is taking his life back and every cent he gave that little worm (Sorry worms you actually have a purpose) he ever gave in one form or another.
Michael is going to hate jail no one there to cater to his whims, he better hope he has a private cell cause his whining will get him killed.
Wonderful Update, was just thinking about this and some of your other stories :)
Happy New Year!!