Date: Sep 28, 2018 2:59 pm Title: ~Part II: YOUR STUDLINESS~
Lindsay is all kinds of repulsive! Not surprised she had Gus to use as a pawn for her plans for a heteronormative life. As if Brian would ever agree to all her delusional thoughts! I was right. Gus is a smart kid, and knows exactly what has been going on. I was right again about Sam. What a sleaze ball. I can't believe Lindsay brought him with her. Brian is going to be so pissed when he hears Sam is in the hotel room that he's paying for. I hope they are aware that by tomorrow they will be kicked out of there. And them having sex in her and Mel's bed, with the kids in the basement, is just all kinds of wrong! I'm glad Gus stood up to Sam and wouldn't take his crap, and then left. Because I was wondering if Sam got mad enough at the 'little shit' if he would have slapped him. If that happened, Brian would have destroyed that man. He would have been left homeless and pennyless, without a career. Hmm... Maybe he should have... NOT! Besides Brian is going to be infuriated enough when he finds out the way Sam has been treating Gus. And Lindsay take on the case, Gus was being a willful stubborn brat! Boy I wish Brian could hear her true thoughts on how she viewed his son! She better quit calling Brian, Peter. She long since abused that term for him.
Very happy Ted and Emmett (with some input from Justin) have opened Brian's eyes to the true situation with Lindsay and Michael. (still don't know why Brian forgave Michael). But he's taking a step in the right direction to have Lindsay and Michael banned from Kinnetik, and by blocking their numbers on the PBX system. Now that Lindsay doesn't have Gus to use as a bargaining chip, I don't think her WASP manners will come into play, and she will show everyone just what a hissy fit she can throw when denied access. But Mel better hurry and get back to the Pitts. If Brian doesn't have any legal rights to Gus, couldn't he be charged with kidnapping? Or will Lindsay be too scared to call the police, knowing the wrath of Kinney? And she has a PI following Brian? What for? What did she hope to find out? Very good thing she left before that last report came and she found out about the house.
So Lindsay's been up to some unscrupulous activity. Did she take out another withdrawal before leaving Toronto? How much has she actually siphoned out of Gus' college fund? Lindsay's ass-is-grass. What did Ted mean when he said, Your ass and assets need to be protected at all costs. Why would Brian need to protect his assets? Who would have access to them other than Brian or Ted? So, Ted is trying to get Mel to give Brian back his Parental Rights. I sure hope she does, as Lindsay needs her's stripped. Michael needs his revoked too. Shouldn't be too hard since he hasn't ever paid child support, and doesn't show any interest in her. Good thing Harry is around the corner. I hope Brian and Mel become good friends and can co-parent the kids.
Ben also needs to do some housecleaning, and throwing clothes out the window. Why does Ben think Brian would have seen his husband more than him lately? He apparently isn't aware that Michael hasn't seen Brian for the last few months, so what has Michael been up to? Has he been seeing someone on the side? Is he even opening up his shop anymore? And what's his beef with Hunter? It was interesting to hear Michael tell Debbie that, Ben's not going anywhere. No, mybe not, but I think you are, Michael.
Em, "You don't think that this is just some ploy to..." Brian, "Get in my pants again," Must be another backstory there some place. It sounds like Brian, Emmett and Ted don't have any secrets between them. That makes me happy. I loved Emmett's analogy of the girl's relationship. Who do you think is Freddy Kruger in this shit?
What are they all going to do with Gus tonight? Will Emmett have to miss the dinner in order to stay with Gus? Totally love the idea of a 'real relationship' between Brian and Justin. WOWZA! I love the idea of everyone sitting around Debbie's table having dinner, and Brian and Justin putting on a PDA... But I have to wonder how far Lindsay and Michael will go to break them up!
Great story so far. I'm loving it!
XOXO ~ Cathy
Date: Sep 28, 2018 2:34 am Title: ~Part I: LIONS AMONG MERE MORTALS~
I can't believe you posted a new chapter today. Must be Karma. I was going through plot bunnies yesterday, and saw you made a response about Jack Kinney being Michael's father. Although I have read SLA, I've never started AC or LS. So, I decided today I would. Then I saw an update to LS, and decided to start with this one. Don't know why I've never started them. The only thing I can think of, is the fact that they were started in 2016, and neither had that many chapters posted. But, I plan to change that now, starting with this one. Anyway, I already love the direction this story is taking.
Michael is one delusional idiot. I couldn't believe the ramblings going on in his head. I have to wonder why Brian ever forgave Michael? Didn't he realize he was just enforcing Mikey's delusion? And, apparently Brian never told Ben. I mean, Michael's married to Ben, shouldn't Ben know what's his husband is up to? I wonder if Brian ever told Em or Ted? They seem like good supportive friends. I always liked both of them. Glad Justin talked down to the little man, and texted Brian about it. Well, Michael has settled himself on the stoop in front of the loft, so I hope he has a very warm coat, because it's going to be a long night.
Lindsay... WOW! Remember your promise to always be there for me after he was born? Well I need you now. Well, he's setting her and Gus in a 5-star hotal, so she can't whine. I have to wonder what's really been going on in Canada. I hope Brian talks to Mel and gets her side of the story before he actually talks to Lindsay, as I'm sure Lindsay is the problem, and all she will do is spin a lie of deceit. Is this like canon, and Lindsay slept with Sam, and that's why they moved to Canada? Otherwise, I don't see any other reason to have had them move. Gus appears to be a very bright kid. If he could see their problem three years ago, I'm sure he knows a lot more now. Maybe Brian should talk to him alone, away from Lindsay's ears.
Poor Cynthia. threatening to quit if she was going to be subjected to the whining and demanding Novotnys and the harridans from up north anymore while she was away. And good Lord, his calls are being forwarded. Look out Brian. He needs to lay the law down with all of them tomorrow, and tell them in no uncertain terms they are forbidden to call him or Kinnetik, or he will put restraining orders on all of them.
Craig. Another hated character. You even painted him in a worse light here than in canon. And Marlene. She's a vile creature too. I hope Marlene is still in jail, and I hope a restraining order is in place for Craig, since Justin will be living full-time in Pittsburgh now. I have bad vibes about Brandon, too.
Loved Casey, Glenn and Harry. So happy the kids had them to go to. Although I don't know why Justin chose to live on the streets, when they woulld have paid for a bed for him. And Molly... How did she survive after what she went through, and Just Where Is She?
LOVED the instant connection between Brian and Justin. The both have troubled pasts and neither one are willing to get close and open up to people. I can see where they can form a tight bond between them because of it. The scene inside the door in Justin's loft, was very hot... HOT! I'm so looking forward to the week at Chartrez Resort. Whatever are they going to do all week while having to share a room? :)
XOXO ~ Cathy
[Report This]Date: Sep 28, 2018 12:50 am Title: PART XIV ~DO NOT COLLECT~
Tut tut. Lindsay got played but good. I actually like Sam and I didn't think I would.
Date: Sep 28, 2018 12:14 am Title: PART XIV ~DO NOT COLLECT~
Thank you so much for this update. I love this story .looking forward to more.
[Report This]Date: Sep 27, 2018 11:15 pm Title: PART XIV ~DO NOT COLLECT~
Sam May be A Sleaze But He An Honest Sleaze.
Lindsay on the other hand is a Hoe and No Matter What She Will Always Be A Hoe!!
With A Hole So Wide Or Makes The Holland Tunnel Look Tiny!!! ;)
Lindsay over played her hand and now she is sitting in a cell enjoying the sound of Michael's Scintillating Voice until someone stupid enough comes along to bail her out or rip out Michael's voice box lol
Brian getting a restraining order is good because now that Lindsay's plan has imploded she will be coming after him, which helps the case to get her more jail time when she violates the order.
Perhaps Mel should get one for her and the kids?
Sam is saving himself from the fallout of Lindsay's games and realizing that love should never be a game.
Guess even Sam can grow up at some time and apologizing to Mel was a good start to achieving adulthood.
Thanks for the Update :)
Date: Aug 20, 2018 3:28 am Title: PART XIII ~DO NOT PASS GO~
i hate it when i reach the end
Date: Apr 10, 2018 7:48 pm Title: PART XII~EXACTING A POUND OF FLESH~
Super great chapter. Been at the end was awesome.
Date: Apr 10, 2018 6:01 pm Title: ~Part I: LIONS AMONG MERE MORTALS~
Craig and Marlene are caught finally and will be dealing with the crap they've done to themselves all while trying to lay blame on Justin, molly and Brian. They are in for a whole world of trouble. Can;t wait to see what's going to happen to them.
Marlene is particularly caught up in her own net of deceit by contacting Laurent on her own, behind Craig's back. What will come of that I wonder? What will Laurent do or rather try to do? At least that whole conversation was already overehard and something can be done ahead of time hopefully. Love the angst, but don't like it when Justin of Brian are actually physically hurt.
L & M are without a doubt completely off the wall with their delusions. I mean, they are not even remotely near reality. Michael actaully thinks that after so many years as friends, Brianis going to suddenly profess his undying love and realize that there's always been a physical atrraction (yuck!) That they are boud to be together.
Lindsey is no better. Thinking that since Brian is going fo rJustin, that he's simply a place holder for her. I mean holy shit. How dumb do you have to be?? Also, her thinking she can get and use Justin's secrets against him. Wesll, that should be interesting. Let's see how far that gets her shall we. Again, will be most intersting and lots of fun to read.
Excellent and thank you for an update!!!
Cheers
Elaine
[Report This]Date: Apr 10, 2018 1:25 pm Title: PART XIII ~DO NOT PASS GO~
Craig and Marlene's days are numbered. Lindsay is looking for trouble and plans to leave Michael behind.
[Report This]Date: Apr 10, 2018 3:34 am Title: PART XIII ~DO NOT PASS GO~
Well Craig and Marlene are out of the way they will be too busy trying to figure out how to get out of this mess.
Laurent will either be smart and leave Molly and Justin alone or he can go down with the idiots too.
Michael maybe delusional but Lindsay is so lost that she can't see that Justin is out of her league along with Brian.
Michael and Lindsay share the same thought Brian is theirs and no one else is allowed to have him without their permission.
Too bad they never realized that Brian was always strong enough to walk away and forget they ever existed.
Guess they will soon be learning that lesson with painful long lasting results.
Thanks for the Update :)
Date: Jan 11, 2018 2:38 pm Title: PART XII~EXACTING A POUND OF FLESH~
You create such intricate plots - I have no idea how you keep all the threads from unraveling. Kudos. TAG
Date: Jan 07, 2018 10:39 pm Title: PART XII~EXACTING A POUND OF FLESH~
'The fuckery of Michael & Lindsay.' LMAO That says it all! Nevermind the great interactions with Brian & Justin but all of Ben & Mel....fabulous! So proud of Ben! Finally having the last word & last laugh on Michael.
Date: Jan 07, 2018 2:08 pm Title: PART XII~EXACTING A POUND OF FLESH~
Whoa! What a firework! Ben finally grew a pair or did he borough Mel's?
Talking of a pair: Brian just officialized one with Justin with burning heat! I bet the Liberty mill will go in overdrive in the coming hours.
Date: Jan 07, 2018 4:47 am Title: PART XII~EXACTING A POUND OF FLESH~
Awesome story! Just read all the chapters! Can’t wait to read more 😊
[Report This]Date: Jan 07, 2018 4:16 am Title: PART XII~EXACTING A POUND OF FLESH~
So nice to see more on this. And what fun to see that Ben finally has a clue and is doing what needs to be done. Great job!
[Report This]Date: Jan 07, 2018 2:23 am Title: PART XII~EXACTING A POUND OF FLESH~
Damn when Ben Bitch Slaps He Doesn't Hold Back!!!! lol
Michael doesn't deserve nice because he wants what he will never have....Brian Aiden Kinney
Brian would cut off his own dick with a dull knife before he would sleep with Michael.
And as for 'Open For Service, 24/7 Lindsay' Brian would rather join a monastery of his mother's choosing before he would go down that dry and overused road again.
They both want what they can't have and it drives them up the wall that out of millions of people on the planet Brian would stick his cock in a wall socket before he would let them near him.
Thankfully Justin is better than a wall socket ;)
So which one of Michael's Fuck buddies knocked up Lindsay or is it Michael's spawn she is carrying???
He spent $15000 on a private eye and his toys but his daughter got a lousy three hundred dollars??
For that I want to kick his Ass until my foot gets tired then I will switch to the other one.
Ben has woken up and he is taking his life back and every cent he gave that little worm (Sorry worms you actually have a purpose) he ever gave in one form or another.
Michael is going to hate jail no one there to cater to his whims, he better hope he has a private cell cause his whining will get him killed.
Wonderful Update, was just thinking about this and some of your other stories :)
Happy New Year!!
[Report This]Date: Jun 25, 2017 2:25 am Title: PART XI ~IN FOR A PENNY~
Sapperstein being nice and Brandon going insane were unexpected twists, lol! TAG
[Report This]Date: Jun 25, 2017 1:55 am Title: ~PART X: DESPERATE MEASURES
They really are falling into this relationship fast. Nice to see how they automatically stand up for each other. TAG
Date: Jun 20, 2017 8:09 pm Title: PART XI ~IN FOR A PENNY~
Sooooo....Brandon is a wee bit of a loon now isn't he?! WOW! completely off the rails. Hopefully Gary follows through and get him the help he so obviously needs. Talk about a complete meltdown. Have to admit I was giggling a bit imagining Justin and Gary chatting away, Gary making sure that Justin would be OK, all teh while Brandon drooling and mumbling in the background. ;) Do they still use straight jackets?
I'm hoping that Gary is being legitimate in his concerns for Justin and best wishes. I think he is. So used to him beng a slimeball that this is abit refreshing. nice to know that not evryone is out to get justin 1 way or another.
Brian's description if "surface-friends" is spot on. Very accurate sadly. It's difficult to come to that realization that those you assumed were your friends, adn wanted the best for you, are really only interested in themselves. It's a harsh reality.
Well done!! And thank you thank you thank you!
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Jun 20, 2017 5:41 pm Title: PART XI ~IN FOR A PENNY~
Hmmm I have this nagging feeling that this isn't over with Gary. He was way too cooperative and agreeable. I don't think I've ever read Gary as a good guy so I shall wait and see 😊. As for Brandon, good grief the boy has lost it! I love the easy banter between Brian and Justin. They are so perfect for each other and together. Thank you for the update and looking forward to the next!
Date: Jun 20, 2017 3:51 pm Title: PART XI ~IN FOR A PENNY~
The way they tease each other is fabulously written!
I don't know why, but I don't trust Garry to let go Justin this easily.
Date: Jun 20, 2017 1:00 pm Title: PART XI ~IN FOR A PENNY~
Wow Brandon is a crazy mofo! I never thought I'd see the Sap being half way decent, great chapter!
Date: Jun 20, 2017 6:52 am Title: PART XI ~IN FOR A PENNY~
Omg ty so much for this update I love this story. I am looking forward to more. Again Thank you so much for sharingwith us.
[Report This]Date: Jun 20, 2017 3:19 am Title: PART XI ~IN FOR A PENNY~
Gary Sapperstein is actually nice and just wants Justin to be happy, Brandon needs to be away from Justin cause he is making Michael and Lindsay look normal.
[Report This]Date: Jun 20, 2017 1:58 am Title: PART XI ~IN FOR A PENNY~
So much happening in such a short time. I'm liking that Gary is okay with Justin being Happy.