Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 05, 2017 6:45 pm Title: ~PART X: DESPERATE MEASURES

Jeebus! Craig and Marlene...there are just no words to describe how evil those 2 are! They really need to get the scoop on that Laurent character. Nail them all to the wall and let them languish in prison!

Had to chuckle at the apt description of Michael and Lindsey as chimps. so very appropriate. Unbelievable that they are so delusional that they actually thought Brian would come to help them!

Terrific update!! Was really happy to see it as well as all the others.

Cheers,

Elaine

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 04, 2017 5:29 pm Title: ~PART X: DESPERATE MEASURES

So many enemies and bad people around Justin and Molly.

The funny side was the chimps in the cells! It goes well for Michael who has quite the same manners.

Thank you for the update!

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 03, 2017 11:38 pm Title: ~PART X: DESPERATE MEASURES

How Michael and Lindsay can imagine Brian being their to rescue them is beyond me.  Getting protection for Molly is paramount.

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 11, 2017 12:45 am Title: PART VIII: ~YEARNING TO BE FREE

Love how well the boys mesh together. TAG

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 10, 2017 10:59 pm Title: PART VI: THIN LINES...

Very nice . . . Probably shouldn't be reading smut like this at work though. Lol. TAG

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 07, 2017 5:57 pm Title: ~Part I: LIONS AMONG MERE MORTALS~

Love Harry and Ava. they are the kind of people that give hope for long lasting, healthy and very ...active relationships.  

thank goodness it seems that Justin has been talked into not giving in to Sap and Brandon! That he's going to fight it. 

So which person is the most important in Brian's life according to Lindsey? Her or Gus? That whole scenario was great. enjoyed it thoroughly. I think Cynthia may have enjoyed it more than anyone! lol.

what are Craig and bitchface up to really and what will Justin, Brian Harry and Ava do to stop them in their tracks? 

Getting exciting!!!!!

Cheers,

Elaine

Reviewer: tataniastorm Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 07, 2017 12:57 am Title: PART IX: ~DESPERATE TIMES~

Omg I am so happy you updated this. I have been waiting for this one to. I have to thank you and the many great authors  on here for the great stories you post . I am disabled and fighting cancer  on top off it all so I am bed ridden. In and out of the hospital  all the time and most times the TV does not work so I read fanfiction . Your story's pull me in and for little while I feel relaxed and free. So again I ty for you hard work and dedication .

Author's Response:

Tonia,

I had to take a minute to collect myself before typing this response. YOU and others who are like you are the reason that I do what I do. Money, fame, popularity take a firm backseat to everything else... they will come or not. They are nice to have but in the grand scheme of it all, it doesn't matter as much as knowing that I'm using my gift of writing to bring solace, peace, an escape, joy and laughter- emotion in its purest form- to people from all over the world, is an amazing treasure. Even as I sit here with tears in my eyes for the gift you have given me with this review, I reaffirm my commitment to my craft and an audience that means so much to me. I take NOTHING for granted or as my due and am so appreciative of the people who validate that this what I was meant to do.

Now, it is my turn to speak positivity into you. With every breath you take, through every treatment, every thought good or bad, know that I am with you in prayer and in spirit! My dad went through this as well so I know the struggle you are going through and what you have faced thus far. YOU are so strong! I want you to remember that because it is extremely important. I also want to impart a life lesson my dad always gave me: NEVER let your fear outweight your FAITH! Langston Hughes, one of my literary heroes spoke of holding onto dreams for if dreams die, life is but a broken-winged bird that cannot fly. Keep your faith, Don't stop dreaming Darling for they keep your spirit and will to fight alive. Know that I LOVE YOU!! And that I will never forget this very special gift you have given me.

HUGS, LOVE and FIGHT ON Love,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 06, 2017 8:34 pm Title: PART IX: ~DESPERATE TIMES~

Yeah!!! Another chapter for this one too! Thank you Nichelle!

Double Yeah, as Dumb and Dumber are escorted out of Kinnetik; I can't imagine how Cynthia must be feeling; after all these years of filtering calls and visits, she finally is able to put an end to this pollution.

Reviewer: Deb Tanner Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 05, 2016 3:18 am Title: PART VIII: ~YEARNING TO BE FREE

So happy to see an update! And such a wonderful update, too! Hope to see  more soon!

Deb

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 05, 2016 2:19 am Title: PART VI: THIN LINES...

HOT! But also, the fact that Justin trusted Brian enough to bottom for him was so lovely.

Reviewer: Jazzepoet Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 04, 2016 8:40 pm Title: PART VIII: ~YEARNING TO BE FREE

Please try to write more soon....

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 03, 2016 6:34 pm Title: PART VIII: ~YEARNING TO BE FREE

I don't get why Justin is so hesitant to fight Sap adn Brandon. He KNOWS they don't have a leg to stand on legally. why does he want to give up so easily? He's fought for his won independence for so long, for everythign he's gotten over the years. Is he tired of it all? tired of fighting agains Sap adn Brandon, tired of knowing the fight will have to continue? tired of teh fact he still has to fight Craig and the bitch?

At least he and Brian have come to some sort of agreement. We all know any "contract" they have between them is just really a piece of paper. It does however give both of them an excuse/reason to stick together. they will ultimately support each other and grow stronger together contract to not.

Great chapter hun!!

No worries about yourwriting schedules. RL tends to creep up and kick all of us in teh ass. We can all relate. So take your time and do what you need to do. We'll all be here when you are.

Cheers adn hugs,

Elaine

Reviewer: tataniastorm Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 03, 2016 8:46 am Title: PART VIII: ~YEARNING TO BE FREE

Ty for another great chapter. I love this story.