Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 05, 2017 4:33 am Title: Chapter 12

Yay for Ted!

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 03, 2016 12:55 pm Title: Chapter 12

At least Deb's apology was sincere.  Poor Justin, lost his desert.  The Justin, Nick, Ted triangle is cool and funny.  It's just like Mikey to want to tattle even when he doesn't know the truth.  Now that Nick is interested in Ted what do you have in mind for Ben?

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 03, 2016 4:36 am Title: Chapter 12

Pretty okay apology from Deb she acted just the way I expected so I will let it pass, Justin might just gain a pound the way he keeps eating, the mouse scene made me smile and giggle a little, good to see Ted is going to get some lovin lol I am so happy for him. I think you should have Michael dance to the same song Justin danced to and even try for the same outfit, in his mind he should hear a lot of cheering, you could even get him to do the cabbage patch😄😄😄😄.Get him to try to do the same moves that Justin did, I was also thinking why not have Michael dye his hair blonde too?

Author's Response:

I really love Deb, but Brian still has his doubts.  The food theme is something I picked up from other stories. That is what i first thought of for the dance still work in progress on that one.  I actually looked up the cabbage patch, Interesting.  I like the blonde hair but i think he might have and accident if i go with it.  Thanks for the review and the suggestions.