Date: Apr 06, 2017 4:10 pm Title: Chapter 15
Lindsay is Michael light, but hopefully seeing Michael is full delusion mode was enough to set her straight lol
Date: Jan 05, 2017 5:22 am Title: Chapter 15
I hope it sticks for Lindsay... don't become a Michael lol
Date: Jul 27, 2016 9:57 pm Title: Chapter 15
I appreciate that Lindsay is at least TRYING to do better. I'm glad she sees that she could potentially end up like Michael if she doesn't stop now.
Happy that Mel is being so good about all of it as well.
Date: Jul 05, 2016 12:11 pm Title: Chapter 15
Omg....more please!
Author's Response:
At the beta already
Date: Jul 05, 2016 3:39 am Title: Chapter 15
Places everyone, PLACES!!!! Lindsay has surely, and FINALLY I might add, been put in hers! The nerve of her telling Justin what he needs to do for his career AND inviting herself to Paris. Mel had it RIGHT; Lindsay negated Justin's role to that of babysitter and fuck-buddy while she placed her delusional self in the role of wife. My respect for Mel went up with her acknowledgement of what Lindsay was doing, her admission that she takes it out on Brian and her vulnerabilty in seeking advice from Justin.
As for Michael.... Lawd, Ham TURKEY, he's off his rocker! As always- and unlike with Ethan- Michael went off half-cocked with the wrong info to 'tattle' on Justin. I say 'unlike with Ethan' because Michael actually had ALL the information to fix Brian and Justin's relationship before Justin left but only chose to tell Brian what he deemed important. Uh- some best friend!!! Anyway, I'm glad that Lindsay saw for herself 'what' she is becoming and that they threw the pestering prick OUT of the car. I would hope that him having to wait for the bus would do some good but unlike Michael, I choose not to live in delusions.
Looking forward to MORE! Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
I wanted to give everyone something special for the contest. Enjoy the next chapter, first then help me laugh through the contest. Thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: Jul 05, 2016 2:48 am Title: Chapter 15
Happy 4th of July to You😃 Thanks for two very interesting chapters Michael is gone and I don't think he is coming back. It is funny because now he thinks Justin is cheating on Brian with Nick instead of Ben, I am happy that Ben has finally come to the realization that he needs to move on and put him and Hunter first.
Brian taking a step.back is a good thing because he really needs to not feed into Michael's delusions or give Deb more reason to hold him responsible for Michael's actions.
Lindsay using Gus to get a trip to Paris without even caring about Mel or Jenny Rebecca is beyond rude, good for Brian to put her in her place and make her realize that this trip is for him and Justin not for her to live out another fantasy.
I liked when they told Michael off and got him to get out of the car of course this doesn't stop the madness but it needed to be done.
Author's Response:
Michael wants his man and no one is going to stop him. Hope you guys like the next chapter it is the only one left before we see King of Babylon. I used some of the ideas you had and added a couple more.
[Report This]Date: Jul 05, 2016 2:35 am Title: Chapter 15
Well, at least Lindsay sees that she's turning into Michael and stops before it's too late. Mikey has a one track mind and the train's about to hit him head on.
Author's Response:
Yes it is. I was originally going to just let Michael embarrass himself but I decided some payback is in order.