[Report This]Date: Aug 19, 2021 8:27 am Title: Chapter 2
Something different. I love it. More please????
Date: Aug 19, 2021 2:02 am Title: Chapter 2
Oh this is very interesting such a different arc
Date: Jul 04, 2020 12:15 am Title: Chapter 1
Justin has been naive and trusts to easily. The decision to go on the program is just another example. Who would think the show producers would book a would be murderer. Please., please update. I'm so intrigued
Date: Jul 07, 2016 4:56 am Title: Chapter 1
Sorry to hear about your daughter. That's a sad thing. I will wait till the next chapter and decide for myself. I don't care for a game making lite of hate crimes though. I do agree that Laura the character is a little odd. She is a little to over the top and to noisy, and to hands on. Justin has enough mother figures in his life and if he was going to confide in anyone it would be Brian or Daphne, not a perfect stranger. She needs to not pry in peoples personal business. She would be okay if she turned it down a bit and was less emotional and less prying. I mean crying more then once because of a total stranger? Maybe she can work on her relationship with her husband and end up back in his bed. Lol
Date: Jul 06, 2016 6:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
How would Justin not of known that people from his past would be there. He had to know what the game was about and he signed a contract ,that's the confusing part. Don't know how I feel about that Hobbs and Justin being in a game together and reliving the hate crime that occured. Hate crime is not a game!
The character Laura is she suppose to come across as not normal? She seems to know Justin for not even a couple of hours and she cry two times already about Justin.She seems needy and to clingy maybe or touchy feely. Asking for a hug? She's a mother with children but even if she has children Justin age ,Justin is a stranger to her , maybe somethings off about her. I not sure if I will continue to read. Maybe I try one more chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review. I totally understand this story isn't for everyone. As for Laura is is based on a real woman named Linda. She is a won dreadful woman who from the first moment she met me was there for me. When my daughter was born still born she paid for her headstone. I barely knew her. Was she needy? No. Is Laura? Maybe. But all people are different. It's what makes us unique.
Date: Jul 05, 2016 4:04 am Title: Chapter 1
Don'tlike a hate crime being used to make money in a contest. Justin would never put his personal life on display for money, he would never do that. An agent would never do that because they protect their investments and make money off of their clients. Even if he thought it would be Ethan he wouldn't put money before Brian. He entered the game before Brian broke up with him and Justin would never ever purposely hurt Brian by having all of that brought up again. He knew he really hurt Brian with Ethan. I agree with that other reviewer on some points. Not sure if I will read this. Sorry!
Author's Response:
Totally understand. Some stories just aren't for others. I love when people like my story but I understand not everyone is going to like or continue. Thanks for posting a review.
Date: Jul 05, 2016 12:31 am Title: Chapter 1
Sorry that this isn't for me. Having a hard time thinking about this one! I love all your other stories but find that the victim and criminal of a hate crime should not be made into a game and put on public display and forced to be trapped under the same roof. The victim should always be put first. Also even if Justin thought that it might be Ethan and not Hobbs, he would never have been talked into airing his dirty laundry in public and knowing it would get Brian angry because he wants to get him back so why get him angry.Don't understand the point to the game. Forgivness? Friends ?What Justin did with the gun in Hobbs mouth was so he could feel that he stood up to him.There's nothing left for him to feel towards Hobbs but to move on, unless he wants to forgive him which is a terrible thought. Hobbs should never be forgiven for the hate crime especially that he never even was punished for his criime. Being on TV won't embarrass that kind of mentality of that character so what's the point then? I'm sure Brian would feel like he is being tortured watching Justin go through that and not being there for him. Not to mention Justin torture. Like I said, I love your other stories and are looking forward for more updates on those but I will just have to let this one go.
Author's Response:
Thank you. I understand this story isn't for you. I have the next chapter of this and Be Good to Him ready to post. My internet is down and I won't be having it back until at least Friday.
[Report This]Date: Jul 04, 2016 8:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
How can Justin be so stupid. He had to have known something like that would happen. Now I have to know what ya'll have planned next!
Author's Response:
It wasn't a great choice. Thank you for reviewing.
Date: Jul 04, 2016 1:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
i think this will be a very interesting story. I look forward to updates!
Author's Response:
Thank you.