Date: Apr 24, 2017 8:31 pm Title: Chapter 11
Ben is great, Michael is too self absorbed
Date: Jul 20, 2016 8:22 pm Title: Chapter 11
Aww, Gus has a crush on Daphne. That is just adorable.
Date: Jul 10, 2016 7:18 am Title: Chapter 11
Gus in love with Daphne: that could be fun to watch in a few years...
Good that the girls had fun and quiet with the kids.
And Ben is really patient!
Thank you for the update!
Author's Response:
Should have next chapter up tomorrow.
Date: Jul 10, 2016 4:31 am Title: Chapter 11
Hi,
I wanted to say I'm really enjoying this story. I've sat here and read the chapters been posted so far and I'm in love with the story. I'm so proud of Brian, Justin, Ben and everyone else. I love Gus as an older brother, I love he is making sure JR is taking care of too. I'm not happy with Michael. Michael is treating JR horribly and I'm so glad that Lindsay and Mel are getting help. Everyone else is acting like adults and putting Gus and JR first. Michael isn't putting JR needs above his own. Brian, Justin, and Ben are putting the children's first and making sure they are taken care of. Brian cares so much for JR and wants her needs to be met too. Please post more soon!!!
Author's Response:
First thank you for reading this it's only the second thing i have ever written. Second I think that when a children have to deal with things like parent's fighting it brings them closer together. Michael isn't trying to be a bad father but he really isn't a good one remember Hunter taking off. I was thinking of how Mel and Lindsay just said bomb we need each other and nothing was solved.
Because you want another I'm posting in a couple minutes.
[Report This]Date: Jul 10, 2016 3:44 am Title: Chapter 11
Michael is acting like such a baby! He honestly believes that he is still in competition with Justin. He is acting more like a drop-in Dad then Brian ever could, it is not surprising he is acting jealous and spiteful he always did that when no one was paying attention to him. Nice to see Deb not playing his game anymore the apron strings had to be cut sooner or later.
The girls are finally acting like adults and they are coming to realize that their actions do have consequences for Gus and Jenny Rebecca.
Glad Brian is refusing to play along with Michael the time has come for everyone to stop coddling Michael he is a grown man who should be more concerned about his daughter then himself.
Author's Response:
I think if the kids weren't involved he would try to help. The next chapter is going to test everyone's patients. Thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: Jul 10, 2016 2:47 am Title: Chapter 11
Love how fast you post. This story is one of the highlights of my day. Why is it Ben was the one that met them at the airport? If Mikey isn't going to make an effort just why is he even in the picture at all?
Author's Response:
Mikey is doing something stupid that is all i am going to say. Thanks for reading.
Date: Jul 10, 2016 2:42 am Title: Chapter 11
So glad to see another chapter!! And I'm glad that Mel agreed to move to the caretaker's cottage. It was a really good decision for all involved.
Michael is- as ALWAYS- a selfish prick. He can't see to his daughter's need for fun and normalcy because he is so damn worried about his own. I'm glad that Ben said what he said to Michael about the camping trip and hopefully he and his sour self will STAY HOME! SMH... I'm also glad that Carl stood up to the whiny brat and for once, Deb did not automatically take Michael's side. That was certainly a refreshing change!
Looking forward to MORE! Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
Carl to me is practical and Deb erratic they work he keeps her in line. Michael isn't getting his need to be right(I think that we saw that with Linds and Mel) met. I alway thought when Michael is acting like an ass everyone on the show was Oh poor Michael, Brian did it it was Asshole. thanks for reading