Date: Jan 18, 2017 3:17 pm Title: Chapter 4
I'm so glad the guys are doing that for Mel and the girls. I'm sad to see the penies trees go as well. Excited to see what comes next.
Date: Jan 08, 2017 5:54 pm Title: Chapter 4
Aww, no more penis trees? I'm glad Mel finally had the guts to leave that bitch. I'm just surprised she let Gus go that easily.
Date: Nov 16, 2016 4:53 pm Title: Chapter 4
everyone rallying together is perfect. they are all protective of each other...even against "one of their own family" if need be!
Date: Aug 19, 2016 10:27 pm Title: Chapter 4
I'm usually anti Mikey, but I really like how supportive (and adult) he is in this story. He thinks before he speaks and he supports B and J and gets along well with the others and doesn't seem whiney...
thank you for making me actually like this mikey! :)
Date: Jul 22, 2016 1:02 pm Title: Chapter 4
I love the image of the trees... Justin can paint them, maybe as an archway into a private space for Brian and Justin...
Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen
Date: Jul 14, 2016 9:45 am Title: Chapter 4
Damn it, the penis trees are going to go? That was fun.
As for the rest, it's going pretty fast and Lindsay isn't even trying to stop Mel from leaving.
This is so good!
Date: Jul 14, 2016 2:16 am Title: Chapter 4
Talk about a trifling heifer!!! I'm so glad that Gus is on to Lindsay. That is one smart kid! And I'm happy for Mel. She's finally gotten her backbone back. If it were up to me, I would keep the penis trees. The kids really wouldn't know what they symbolized unless someone told them. But then again, I'm a vindictive bitch with a warped sense of humor! Perhaps the neighbor would finally mind her manners and her own business- highly doubtful but hey it might happen. I just hope that she doesn't come across Lindsay who will no doubt stalk and show up at Britin demanding entry. But then again, perhaps a nosy neighbor could be useful in that instance. They are more apt to call the police for any and all things they consider a disturbance. *rubbing hands and evil grinning* It's time for me to get back to work on "The Lion and the Stud" now but as soon as I see this updated, I'm there!!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
Blake helps on the trees. I finished a chapter but will hold it hostage for an update I love that story.
[Report This]Date: Jul 14, 2016 1:01 am Title: Chapter 4
Mel is being a good parent and getting those kids out of bad situation that is getting ready to escalate because Lindsay just let Gus go and sadly he is her pawn to get to Brian, I have a feeling she is on her way to the Pitts which is probably what she wanted so she could be closer to Brian.
I think Sarah deserves a raise along with Cynthia because she is handling Lindsay wonderfully.
Mel and the kids staying at Britin is good because Lindsay can't just barge in like she could the loft, Mel finally acknowledging that Brian is not her enemy is good because they are going to need to work together to handle Lindsay, while also protecting Gus and JR.
Why is Lindsay's mom is all of sudden talking to her and trying to give her advice about Brian? What is Mrs. Peterson up to?
Sorry to see the penis trees go they sounded interesting and hilarious can't wait to find out what Justin thinks of next.
I have a feeling this is just the calm before the storm of the century hits The Pitts, everyone better prepare.
Author's Response:
Lindsay wants her mother to approve of her. In this one I changed Lindsay reasons for what she did. I see her going to her mother because Brian would be someone they could show off. No one she knows would help her. But her mother would if Lindsay married Brian.
Date: Jul 14, 2016 12:44 am Title: Chapter 4
The fallout is near....it won't be pretty
Author's Response:
Its going to be ugly. I usually end it on a light note. I can't redeem Linds.
[Report This]Date: Jul 13, 2016 11:36 pm Title: Chapter 4
Jumping up and down for joy. Another chapter!!! So Mel is finally leaving Linds. About time. Shame Brian, Justin, Mikey and Ben decided to leave Rome. Shame about the trees. Love how Emmett spiked Lindsay when she called. Also Sarah managed to tell her off and deserves a raise.
Author's Response:
The trees are still there Michael and Justin get a surprise when they get back.
Date: Jul 13, 2016 11:04 pm Title: Chapter 4
Nooo! Not the penis trees... LOL
This is good stuff. Keep those updates coming! :)
Author's Response:
I couldn't let them go completely. Next chapter is done just waiting for beta.