Date: Jul 15, 2016 11:08 am Title: Chapter 6
We need the next chapter quick! LOL....Lindsay is going to be in for a very rude awakening.
[Report This]Date: Jul 15, 2016 11:03 am Title: Chapter 6
Oh no! Linds knows where the kids are. Not good. But it seems the slap down is going to commence. Yay.
Date: Jul 15, 2016 6:30 am Title: Chapter 6
Now Lindsay knows where everybody is: let's have some fun...
I loved (and all the rest as well):
- Brian said we should scrape the cum off the backroom walls and send it to her, for her baby.
- I look at Justin and tell him to get a fountain of nymphs spraying water out their asses if he wants.
Date: Jul 15, 2016 5:11 am Title: Chapter 6
The gloves are about to come off and I CAN'T WAIT!!! Justin's assessment of Sam and Lindsay was dead on. I LOLd at the Justin mentioning her to the artist and the hairy asshole not remembering her. Wouldn't she be in for a rude awakening if she tried to use him in her quest for Brian...LOL No help there! Also Deb and Carl had me lauging!!
I wonder if Nancy will keep advising Lindsay on how to tame Brian- the most Ho Ho HOMO in the WHOLE WIDE WORLD! Maybe she will cut her losses and by that I mean Lindsay/ There's no way to win this... at all! I hope that by the time the harridan arrives that Brian and Justin would have signed the LDP papers. I'd love to see how Lindsay would try to circumvent those.
Great Update as usual
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
P.S I hope that Lindsay DOES try to talk to Daphne about B and J. I'm looking forward to the possibility of Lindsay getting SLAPPED to sleep. Lindsay betta recognize!
Date: Jul 15, 2016 3:06 am Title: Chapter 5
great fun- i love the penis trees
Date: Jul 14, 2016 3:32 pm Title: Chapter 5
Brilliant updates!! On and off laughing my ass off.
Justin and Micheal's exploits, (and apparently blake now) with the bushes are hilarious! Fun to see Micheal and Justin getting along in this way. While I'm r eally not a big Micheal fan, and I AM huge anit fan in fics, there are times when, in a story like this that they get along in a way that's fun. Just like ben said, they're like little kids together and it gives us all reason to giggle at them. Really well done!!
Really curious to see how Lindsey is going to react now. What her next step is going to be. She's already dug herself into a big hole claiming that gus misses Daddy, when in fact Gus is in the back yard.
She has obviously been discussing the whole brian issue with her mom, and figuring out how to move forward. That.......is freaky! Her mother giver her advise as to how to tame the gay father of her child. I get the impression that she's not nuts, but that her issues are more geared towards her selfiishness, her obsession with Brian and the way she grew up. The expectations her parents have for her have influenced her. She feels she's owed. Just my impression.
Looking forward to tonight's update!!!!!! Can't wait to find out how Lindsey reacts and all the fall out.
Hopefully Mel sticks to her guns. she definitely has everyone's support and typically she's a very strong woman. She just needs to be reminded. Get that monkey called Lindsey off her back.
Guss seems to be adjusting OK. He knows and is aware of his mom and seems thrilled to be with dad and Justin. As long as JR has her mommy and of course Micheal, I think she'll be OK.
Like I said, Brilliant story!! Really liking your take on this.
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Jul 14, 2016 10:13 am Title: Chapter 5
This is soooooooooo goooooooooood!!!
Lindsay is going to lose it in gigantic proportions and it's going to be ugly.
I love the cat and the Prada boots and also the red bushes the gardener planted.
Date: Jul 14, 2016 9:45 am Title: Chapter 4
Damn it, the penis trees are going to go? That was fun.
As for the rest, it's going pretty fast and Lindsay isn't even trying to stop Mel from leaving.
This is so good!
Date: Jul 14, 2016 5:43 am Title: Chapter 5
Thank you, thank you, THANK YOU for having mercy on me!! This chapter was so GOOD! Lindsay is a truly deranged BITCH and yet from the looks of it, completely sane. And then she thought to force Brian's hand using emotional blackmail...bet she didn't think her little rant would have that effect. Either her uterus will fizzle out or go into hyperdrive. I wouldn't put it passed her to find some clueless schmuck, get pregnant and then try to pass the baby off as Brian's. But Justin is on to her and hipping everyone to the ways of the WASP. Good Boy, Justin; you get an A+! Go to the head of the class!
Blake, Justin and Michael are a trip! I can't wait until the bushes are finished and the neighbor's head spins around with possibly green crap flying out of it. No doubt that her husbamd has already told her to tend to her own garden and leave other folks' alone but I doubt she'll listen, which makes this even MORE fun for us! Sanctimonious Shrew!!
Back to Lindsay for a moment: I seriously CAN'T wait until she finds out that Mel and the kids are staying with Brian in the manor she thought should be hers. Her plans are backfiring big time and everyone is going to sit around and watch while she implodes! If it were me, I'd probably help her do just that. I am, after all, just as bitchy!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Jul 14, 2016 5:04 am Title: Chapter 5
God I love that Justin and Michael upped their game with the neighbor. ROFLMAO!!!
How fast will Lindsey's broom get her to the Pitts?
Patiently waiting for the next update.
Sandy
Date: Jul 14, 2016 4:38 am Title: Chapter 5
Lindsay doesn’t really have a clue does she? She just screwed up big time
[Report This]Date: Jul 14, 2016 4:09 am Title: Chapter 5
Blake helping Justin get back at the neighbor is Hilarious I also like Emmett's idea and the strobe lights will really make it POP *lmao*
Lindsay seriously thinks she is going to marry Brian? 😅😅😅😅😅 Dream On Crazy!
She has lost everything and she doesn't even know it yet Brian is not going to let her continue to play these little wasp games with him.
Gus is one smart little boy and sees the truth of Lindsay and he is also not playing her game.
Now that she knows about the baby she is on her way to the Pitts to fight for her fantasy, I wonder if everyone will be there for the show?
I can't wait to see what they come up with to annoy the neighbor next? (her husband likes it, probably making his year lol).
[Report This]Date: Jul 14, 2016 3:58 am Title: Chapter 5
Lovely, lovely, lovely. Ted and Blake are really there for Mel. Blake managed to one up the penis project and watch the kids. It would have been funny if when Linds said Gus would be hurt because Brian didn't think of him that Brian said "Why don't we ask?" and handed off the phone to Gus. So much for her treats. Thank you, thank you, thank you for posting.
Date: Jul 14, 2016 3:31 am Title: Chapter 5
Love the new and improved penis trees. LOL
Linds is such a beotch. She's lost everything and doesn't know it yet.
Date: Jul 14, 2016 2:16 am Title: Chapter 4
Talk about a trifling heifer!!! I'm so glad that Gus is on to Lindsay. That is one smart kid! And I'm happy for Mel. She's finally gotten her backbone back. If it were up to me, I would keep the penis trees. The kids really wouldn't know what they symbolized unless someone told them. But then again, I'm a vindictive bitch with a warped sense of humor! Perhaps the neighbor would finally mind her manners and her own business- highly doubtful but hey it might happen. I just hope that she doesn't come across Lindsay who will no doubt stalk and show up at Britin demanding entry. But then again, perhaps a nosy neighbor could be useful in that instance. They are more apt to call the police for any and all things they consider a disturbance. *rubbing hands and evil grinning* It's time for me to get back to work on "The Lion and the Stud" now but as soon as I see this updated, I'm there!!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
Blake helps on the trees. I finished a chapter but will hold it hostage for an update I love that story.
[Report This]Date: Jul 14, 2016 1:01 am Title: Chapter 4
Mel is being a good parent and getting those kids out of bad situation that is getting ready to escalate because Lindsay just let Gus go and sadly he is her pawn to get to Brian, I have a feeling she is on her way to the Pitts which is probably what she wanted so she could be closer to Brian.
I think Sarah deserves a raise along with Cynthia because she is handling Lindsay wonderfully.
Mel and the kids staying at Britin is good because Lindsay can't just barge in like she could the loft, Mel finally acknowledging that Brian is not her enemy is good because they are going to need to work together to handle Lindsay, while also protecting Gus and JR.
Why is Lindsay's mom is all of sudden talking to her and trying to give her advice about Brian? What is Mrs. Peterson up to?
Sorry to see the penis trees go they sounded interesting and hilarious can't wait to find out what Justin thinks of next.
I have a feeling this is just the calm before the storm of the century hits The Pitts, everyone better prepare.
Author's Response:
Lindsay wants her mother to approve of her. In this one I changed Lindsay reasons for what she did. I see her going to her mother because Brian would be someone they could show off. No one she knows would help her. But her mother would if Lindsay married Brian.
Date: Jul 14, 2016 12:44 am Title: Chapter 4
The fallout is near....it won't be pretty
Author's Response:
Its going to be ugly. I usually end it on a light note. I can't redeem Linds.
[Report This]Date: Jul 13, 2016 11:36 pm Title: Chapter 4
Jumping up and down for joy. Another chapter!!! So Mel is finally leaving Linds. About time. Shame Brian, Justin, Mikey and Ben decided to leave Rome. Shame about the trees. Love how Emmett spiked Lindsay when she called. Also Sarah managed to tell her off and deserves a raise.
Author's Response:
The trees are still there Michael and Justin get a surprise when they get back.
Date: Jul 13, 2016 11:04 pm Title: Chapter 4
Nooo! Not the penis trees... LOL
This is good stuff. Keep those updates coming! :)
Author's Response:
I couldn't let them go completely. Next chapter is done just waiting for beta.
Date: Jul 13, 2016 3:36 pm Title: Chapter 3
Really enjoying this take on it all. Mel really seems to be realistic and not so angry at Brian. glad she's leaving and is talking to Brian about it. That she's putting the kids first. Will Lindsey even care the Gus is going with Mel or will she only see it as losing her tool for manipulation? Can't wait to read about all teh drama that you'll have happening!!
HA! so going to enjoy Lindsey's smack down!
Very excited for the boys to having this new little one.
saw your note that it'll be late today or even tomorrow. You realize you have completely spoiled us, getting at least one chapter a day. LOL. Now this short wait is going to seem torterous! lol
Hope all is well. Thank you for sharing yet another story with us!! Glad you seem to be enjoying thie process as well.
Cheers,
Elaine
Author's Response:
I almost wanted to let Justin and Michael go Pink posse on her. My vacation ended so my writing anytime will be limited. I have new chapter done. Will post it when Lorie finishes beta. I will try to post once a day if possible till this is done. Thank you for sticking with me.
[Report This]Date: Jul 13, 2016 10:44 am Title: Chapter 3
At least Mel is thinking about Gus and not just JR. This is getting exciting. We don't know what Lindsay will do once she finds out.
Date: Jul 13, 2016 7:11 am Title: Chapter 3
The plot is thickening... Poor Gus, well aware that something is definitely wrong with her mother.
I loved:
- Emmett said Mom has permanent PMS.
- She wants to be her mother.
- I was kind of listening, but you know looking at Justin naked is distracting.
Date: Jul 13, 2016 6:51 am Title: Chapter 2
So delicious: the bitch is fishing and nobody helps her; she is going to do something drastic and she will be all by herself.
Even her son is wary.
Date: Jul 13, 2016 5:24 am Title: Chapter 1
Justin may not have thought it was funny but I thought the cat's name and the meaning behind it hillarious! LOL
Author's Response:
My sister's cat peed on her monitor and it the name came from that.
Date: Jul 13, 2016 5:12 am Title: Chapter 3
And let the fireworks begin! Lindsay isn't going to be a happy camper.