Date: Jul 13, 2016 4:29 am Title: Chapter 3
I'm glad that Ben gave Mel all the info she needs to FINALLY be free of Lindsay. That bitch is certifiably INSANE! I know that there will be some angst once Mel takes Gus (aka Lindsay's Loophole for getting to Brian) away. Hopefully it won't count that she is the birth mother especially since it's evident that she has no one's best interests at heart except hers. If Lindsay wants her mother's life so much, perhaps she should go live with the shrew! Also glad that Michael is using his vocal abilities for good this time and giving Brian the neccessary information to deal with his baby mama. Perhaps a reward for him would be to have Lindsay locked up in a cell where she can't escape and let the masters of Whine (Michael) and Screech (Debbie) loose on her...LOL Now THAT would definitely straighten her out!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
I keep writing to try to make your muse out do mine. Thanks for all the encouragement.
[Report This]Date: Jul 13, 2016 1:08 am Title: Chapter 2
WOW You Amaze Me, Congratulations on Story 3! Read both chapters and I must say it is nice to have a Michael that isn't annoying and has smarten up so he could accept Brian band Justin together.
Now on to Lindsay funny how she is so excited for Gus to get a sibling when he already has one?
Brian and Justin are doing this the smart way by not asking the either of the g to be surrogates, Brian has had enough problems with those two and the way he was treated when Gus was born.
Lindsay is living in La La land thinking that either Brian or Justin would ask her, she us already acting like a witch because Justin has come back to Brian and because he more successful than she could ever be, glad you addressed her sleeping with Sam I know that it was about Brian.
Lindsay listening to her mother who thinks Brian can change his sexual preference as fast us Lindsay is laughable, when I read that I wanted to ask her was she high or just stupid, Brian loves Lindsay as friend no way is he giving up dick just so she can have her 'Hetero-Fantasy'.
Mel is going to have to put on her big girl pants and deal with Lindsay because she is going to go off the rails when Lindsay finds out the baby is coming sooner than she expected.
As swear you are so becoming my favorite author :)
Author's Response:
That is so sweet. I just wanted a story to go my way. Lindsay is defiantly in her own universe. I thought we could have one to change why she went to Brian all those times. I'll hopefully keep everyone interested with my writing. Thank you for sticking with me.
Date: Jul 13, 2016 12:47 am Title: Chapter 2
I like this Michael...after two chapters I'm already hooked. I love Brian and Justin raising kids together. Can hardly wait for the next update.
Author's Response:
I needed to let him have a good story. Thanks for the review.
Date: Jul 12, 2016 11:51 pm Title: Chapter 2
You've got me hooked already...can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response:
I can tell you it's not going to get better. Thanks
[Report This]Date: Jul 12, 2016 11:25 pm Title: Chapter 2
I'm liking this Mikey. It's going to be fun watching you take Lindsay apart. I feel sorry for Melanie. Did Michael and Ben talk about the baby in front of JR? That could prove a problem when Lindsay decides to interrigate the small child who doesn't know she should talk about certain things.
Author's Response:
Yep they might need to be careful Jr is about 4 I think. She can talk.
[Report This]Date: Jul 12, 2016 11:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
Another story!!!! This one looks to be good, really good. That's saying something since your last two were fantastic. Love how they are going to have a little Justin. Mikey seems to be more likable. Lindsay is going to be the problem, but they've got her number.
Author's Response:
I tried to stop I really did. I just needed to tell you. Thanks
Date: Jul 12, 2016 11:00 pm Title: Chapter 2
Jealousy and Envy thy name is LINDSAY!! Glad that Michael has learned to use a muzzle for his mouth and that he is NOT speaking everything he knows for once. Ben has certainly been a good influence on him in this fic. Mel is going to have hell to deal with especially since she has access to Brian and Lindsay is constantly being thwarted. Good for both Ted and Cyn, giving that harridan what she deserves. I laughed out loud that Cynthia told Lindsay that she needs her own job and that the role of Brian's keeper is filled by Justin. That must have burned Lindsay's ass but good!
Amazing work! Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
P.S. I'd better start writing so that I can keep up with you! May the MUSE continue to be with you!!
Author's Response:
I was hoping to get you to write. I thought Michael deserved some rest.
Date: Jul 12, 2016 10:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
Already on your third story. You write fast and it's good.
I love this story.
Lindsay needs to be bitch-slapped.
~Lorie
Author's Response:
Thanks I thought we could mess with the WASP.
Date: Jul 12, 2016 8:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
Love that you are on your third story. Keep going!!!
Now on to Lindsey, I take it her inner crazy b*tch is going to come out?
And I want to see what Mel's reaction will be to Lindsey.
Sandy
Author's Response:
Michael needed the rest. Plus Lindsay was getting to much piece.
[Report This]Date: Jul 12, 2016 8:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
This.... First, congratulations on starting your third fic!! So excited for you and look forward to your updates.
Now onto the main event: I LOVE Justin's war with the neighbor. It will provide much comic relief amid what's to come. I can just about imagine Lindsay's bitchdom when she finds out (from Michael of course) that Justin and Brian are already expecting. Somehow the evil that's going to come out of her is going to make Linda Blair's role as the devil in "The Exorcist" look like Barbie. HEHEHE I can't wait!!!!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
I plan to take over the world next. I needed to be mean to anther character.
Date: Jul 12, 2016 6:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
OOOOOOOOOOeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!! this is gonna be another good one!!
I see you're taking it easy on Micheal in this one. lol. Going for broke on Lindsey tho! LOL. Can't wait to see how you brong this pretentious bitch down!!
Great start.
Cheers,
Elaine
Author's Response:
Glad you still want to hear from me. Thanks for the review.
Date: Jul 12, 2016 6:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
Nice beginning!
Now, we have an anti-Lindsay story: yeah!!!
I loved the "baking baby".
Author's Response:
I was going to stop but this took over.