Date: Jan 08, 2017 10:23 am Title: Chapter 12
So it seems Lindsay is finally getting what she deserves. I'm glad JR agreed to go with Ben.
Date: Aug 08, 2016 11:31 pm Title: Chapter 12
YAY... Lindsay should end up in jail!!! lol
I want Ben and his new hubby to fit into the "good" family so badly! I bet they will!!! :) And I'm sure JR will finally realize the lies she has been fed from all of her "parents" and will hopefully straighten out.
Date: Jul 25, 2016 5:36 pm Title: Chapter 12
Lindsey and Mel just can't seem to learn their lessons at all can they? sheesh! to presume they can just use Gus's credit card is pretty audasious of them. Mel especially seems to think Brian and gus "owe" her. And Lindsey is going down!! Yee ha! couldn't have happened to a better bitch. LOL
JR is finally seeing the truth. Michael had no choice but to tell her the truth adn now he's paying the price of it. Once again, his selfishness is costing him huge. Ben and Brad will do wonders for JR. Seeing Ben deal with Michael was great! Again, Michael assuming that Ben should automatically "save" him is unreal!!
Really glad the Deb is finally coming around to seeing the truth of everything. Yes...it will definitely take taime for everyone to really trust her once again. She just going to have to suck it up though. Hope she prepared to do it.
cheers!!
Elaine
Date: Jul 25, 2016 5:31 am Title: Chapter 12
Ha ha ha: I love this; Lindsay won't even get the lawyer her mother sent her because she's a liar and he learned it fast.
As for Dumb the First: his daughter hates him now and he's alone against everybody.
Maybe they will open their eyes and admit the truth, at least to themselves.
[Report This]Date: Jul 25, 2016 1:16 am Title: Chapter 12
Love that Ben is in a happy relationship and willing to take JR. Enjoyed JR telling Michael off. Linds should get the jail time. As for your next story, could you combine the two? They both sound so good.
Author's Response:
I am trying to combine it but i don't have Ben in the role yet. Maybe the second chapter i will get Ben, Blake and Drew to start hanging out together. Well see how it works on that one.
Thanks for reading my madness.
[Report This]Date: Jul 25, 2016 12:59 am Title: Chapter 12
I will be sad to see this end it has been such a joy to read because all the ones who got on my nerves are getting their just desserts.
Deb finally removed the repose colored glasses to see the truth about Lindsay, Melanie and Mama's precious little baby boy Mikey, he took that money she begged Drew for to buy a toy, he couldn't be bothered to go to work to support himself or his daughter but he could steal money for a toy? SMH
Lindsay using the credit card for her own selfish reasons is not surprising anymore, Mel joining in on the phone is icing on the cake, I agree with David it would have been nice to see the look on their faces as the movers put their stuff on the lawn for all the neighbors to see.
Michael lying to JR about Ben not wanting to see her was so him and so pathetic that the girls joined in, especially since Michael never once helped them with JR's support, but pettiness loves company so they all should get a place together lol.
Lindsay and Melanie go at each was funny because they are two spoiled children just looking for attention, of course this attention they might not enjoy so much but you reap what you sow. (Mommy and daddy Peterson not helping is Hilarious!!)
That was nice of Ben and his husband Brad to take JR in this kid needs discipline and a strong family structure to save her life.
I really liked that Brian and Justin put Debbie in her place she has years of groveling to do before forgiveness can be established, I agree with Justin I don't trust her either she needs to start thinking before she speaks.
I like both story ideas they both sound very interesting though the one about Brian running every time Michael calls has potential for a lot of angst :)
Author's Response:
Thank you for all the cheering on. I wrote to see if I could and you guys cheered me on. I am already on the next one. Michael is going to be thwarted at every turn and I want to return to a more humorous one.