Date: Jul 24, 2016 11:26 pm Title: Chapter 11
So happy to see a new chapter!! As excellent as the previous.
JR should be relieved that Ted, Blake and Ben took and will take care of her.
The munchers continue to destroy themselves as Dumb the First.
I loved:
Pop started muttering that hopefully Armani doesn’t make cat suits
I looked at Pop and said we should buy matching sweaters at the Big Q for the animals. He told me Big Q is Dad’s punishment for allowing Deb in the house.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading me and commenting it helps me change a direction if I need to.
[Report This]Date: Jul 24, 2016 10:40 pm Title: Chapter 10
Gotta love this. At least Deb is with the here and now and Mia likes her. Mikey is a dweb. JR has problems and Linds is about to be arested as well. Blake is a sweetheart to help JR. Can't wait to see your next chapter!
Date: Jul 24, 2016 10:33 pm Title: Chapter 10
JR is an evil pest and I hope she will realize that very soon.
Finally, Debbie saw the light: it was more than time. But as Justin said, she might say things without thinking. She has no filter or it's out of order.
As for "Dumbass Denial Stupid" to paraphrase Nichelle, he fell right into his old habits.
I can't wait to read how the mighty WASP and the bull lawyer will deal with the felony.
So much fun to come!!
Attn Nichelle: you crack me up with your comments on each chapter; it's almost a story within the story; it's a delight for my eyes or like a chocolate cake after a good meal.
[Report This]Date: Jul 24, 2016 11:35 am Title: Chapter 9
Gus told Deb what happened, he showed her the bruises. Will she believe him or stay in denial? I'm glad she wasn't hateful to Chad, he just told her like it is. He's awefully smart.
Date: Jul 24, 2016 10:30 am Title: Chapter 9
I can't believe even with all the evidence to the contrary, those dumb asses are still trying to blame Gus. The kids have been interviewed, tested and JR was dirty and all state that Gus was nowhere around. Then little miss addict goes and gets herself arrested because the merry munchers couldn't see fit to tend to their daughter for one night....but Brian's the bad parent right? You don't see him leaving his children home alone to go party and get laid.
I just love Chad for telling Deb like it is. The truth about her son coming from a child should make her feel ashamed of herself. Emmett and Drew rocked her boat a little too...and it was a smart move for Brian to show her the bruises, hopefully Deb opens her eyes. Both of the girls need to be arrested for child neglect and Lindsay for theft. Maybe Brian will catch on to the card use and stop the charges and report it. It would serve her right.
Date: Jul 24, 2016 7:44 am Title: Chapter 9
Maybe the truth will get thru Deb's thick head and maybe she will act according to it.
The kids and Drew/Emmett are a great support for Brian and Gus.
I love this story!
Date: Jul 24, 2016 7:20 am Title: Chapter 8
The munchers are as irresponsible as ever and JR is paying a lot for that.
Brian is going to break one more rule: getting a cat to cheer his son; OK, it will be a hairless cat but that's something.
I love "he wanted to check if my ass got any bigger from all the junk food". Brian does romance...
Date: Jul 24, 2016 6:13 am Title: Chapter 9
I hope Lindsay is held responsible and sent to jail for credit card theft andfraud. The nerve of that hussy!!!! Now we can officially change Lindsay's name from Slutty Stupid to Felony Stupid! Or Better yet, let's keep both names and add to them as we go along, shall we?
Michael as always is blind to his perfect child even when hearing what the officer on the phone said. Once again, Michael is PERFECT in his role as Dumbass Stupid but we'll add to his name as well making him Dumbass Denial Stupid. BTW... Is he really considering suing Mel and Lindz for custody of Desperate Lying Stupid (Yeah I added to JR's moniker too- it FITS)? Him who has NO job and not even his own house? What judge in their right minds would give DDS care of another human being? First he would need a lawyer but since he doesn't have ANY money, I doubt they would accept his ass for payment. Just saying! I think if he tries we should add 'Idiot' to his already long but accuate name.
Now its time for my assessment of Melanie aka Horny Stupid. We'll there isn't much I can say about her since she is pretty predictable in her arrogance and her tendency to withhold information. So just as her Stupid Family counterparts, she gets another description added to her name (which of course is subject to be added to again later). Her new name is Horny Neglectful-Ass Stupid.
Then we have the mother of all the Stupids, Delusional. How Debbie thinks that number 1: people owe it to her to fund and take care of her grown-ass BABY is beyond me. And then as usual, she talks down to and threatens all the while holding her hand out. I'm glad that Brian showed her the bruises even if all she'll do is deny that it ever happened since JR is involved. It could go either way but we still have to add to her name... Delusional Blind-personified Stupid. Will she still wear them when she goes north is anyone's guess but I doubt that she will see that all is NOT as she's been told by the Cunts of Canada. That is if she goes at all. I wouldn't put it passed her to send that shiftless, workless, worthless bum of a son she has in her stead even though Brian told her what the idiot will do if you put money in his hand. SMH
I really wished that Brian had turned Justin loose right then!!!!
That's all for now of my running commentary on the "Young, Old and Ridiculous." Tune in next time for another in depth look at the foolery! LOL Looking forward to MORE!
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Jul 24, 2016 5:33 am Title: Chapter 9
Deb is so lucky because if it was me I wouldn't even give her fifty cent to get to Canada she hears what she wants to hear and believes what she wants to believe. Up get so sick and tired of her playing that same ' You Owe Me, Us' record she needs a good smack upside the head.
Mel and Lindsay are so obtuse that they are still looking for a way to blame Gus despite the fact that evidence proves Gus wasn't even there at the party.
I wonder if Lindsay will get into trouble about using that credit card that was meant for Gus?
The next few hours are going to be quite a whirlwind for these people once Deb and Michael get to Canada, can't wait to see read the fallout :)
[Report This]Date: Jul 24, 2016 3:02 am Title: Chapter 8
One dog I could understand, but two! Brian will do anything for his kids, even getting a hairless cat, which is more then we can say for the girls and Michael. If Michael had a job, he would have money to buy his ticket to help his daughter. Lindsay trying to seduce David is soooo laughable. The police should give JR a lie detector test, then maybe, just maybe Mel would see the truth. Gus is much better off with his dads.
[Report This]Date: Jul 24, 2016 1:47 am Title: Chapter 8
Lindsay is so pathetic She put on her sexy outfit to try to seduce David and he turned her down so fast I bet her head is still spinning.
Mel left her daughter alone so she could Ho get her needs met and now JR is in even more trouble than she was before (And this is after being out of jail less than 24 Hours), I doubt she will get bail this time and even if she could get bail Mel and Lindsay don't have the money to pay for it.
Michael trying to guilt trip Brian was so pathetic typical him though, not surprised Deb got into trouble at work and is now on suspension for a week I doubt her going down there to plead her case will help it could make it worse.
They are all going to flip when they find out she has been re-arrested and this time it is for dealing, Trace is going to rat her out to save himself, she admitted that she has done this before(?), the kid wasn't nervous at all to be handing out drugs to some stranger on the street.
Mel and Lindsay haven't even started packing yet they have a few short hours before the police and David come to toss them out in the street.
Michael, Deb, Lindsay will be calling Brian non-stop for money now, I wonder how Mel and Lindsay's employers will react when they find out about this?
I hope the kids get their pets it is going to be quite a full house lol.
Can't wait to read what happens next this is a spellbinding story. :)
Date: Jul 24, 2016 1:36 am Title: Chapter 8
Please Please PLEASE write FAST!!! If this isn't the story of the "Young, Old and Ridiculous," I don't know what is! I really want to know what story the main family called, The Stupids (Horny Stupid played by Mel, Slutty Stupid played by Lindz and Dumbass Stupid played by Michael) will come up with to save the character Desperation Stupid played by none other than the incomparable JR. Delusional Stupid (Debbie) shouldn't have the suspension lifted at all. She's old enough to know better and STILL can't see the pattern of "Momma-Boy Syndrome." Apparently she hasn't lost enough allowing Michael to ruin her life.
As for the Taylor-Kinney Camp, I can't wait to find out how the Pet Saga plays out! I'm glad Ted has had enough of the shenanigans and David did right to call hotel security since they tend to keep a record of disturbances.
Anxiously awaiting MORE of this!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Jul 24, 2016 1:25 am Title: Chapter 8
Update quick! :) this is getting very interesting
Date: Jul 23, 2016 11:44 pm Title: Chapter 2
Bad Michael and the girls
Date: Jul 23, 2016 11:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hi I know I'm late starting to read this, but I love the start. I love dark place fics. I love Brian and Justin having a family. Brian is going to be pissed when he finds out what happened to Gus. I love Gus's adoted silblings already. Even though they are younger then him they want to protect him and that is nice.
Date: Jul 23, 2016 2:59 pm Title: Chapter 7
Loved, loved, LOVED this chapter! First Ted telling that bitch Linday OFF! The nerve of that heifer trying to lay guilt trips. I love this Ted! Self-confident, straight-forward and has a clear perspective of his friend, Mel!
Kennywood was a BLAST!!! The only mar in the mud was Michael. He really needs to get a grip! He and Debbie deserve the hard fall that's coming. I wonder what they will do when they find that the manic munchers have been withholding info on their precious JR.
Anxiously waiting for the implosions!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Jul 23, 2016 2:27 pm Title: Chapter 7
Lindsay is out of her mind asking for the loft to live in and for more money to support Gus who isn't even in Canada anymore.
I love "Dad doesn’t ride anything that will mess with his hair.". He can be a Princess too!
Date: Jul 23, 2016 6:02 am Title: Chapter 7
The girls are making a big mistake by not accepting Brian's offer, I guess they will have to learn the hard way.
Date: Jul 23, 2016 5:57 am Title: Chapter 6
Brian and Mia: too cute together; she can make him do whatever she wants, almost.
Emmett and Drew having 3 kids at once: what a challenge.
And yeah, Brian still got it!!
Gus obsessed with his weight can't be good at his age.
Date: Jul 23, 2016 5:35 am Title: Chapter 5
Simply delicious!
JR tested positive, the munchers will be evicted and Michael will travel by bus... and they could owe 12 years of rent to Brian, so they will have to really work!
[Report This]Date: Jul 23, 2016 5:21 am Title: Chapter 7
At least the kids had a fun day at the park. Mikey and Deb are reaping what they've sowed. Brian told it like it was. He'd practically supported Mel, Lindsay,and JR because of Gus. While Mikey did Jackshit. Then you leave us with Lindsay at the door! What is she up to?
[Report This]Date: Jul 23, 2016 4:04 am Title: Chapter 6
A nice quiet moment of family back ending and an introduction to three new people is nice and much needed before the madness starts up again.
How sweet of Brian and Blake to want to help JR but I do agree with Brian Mel is going to fight it because she doesn't want Brian to have all the control.
I like reading about the interaction between Brian, Justin, Ted, Blake, Emmett and Drew it just goes to show you that once you stop listening to others opinions you start to realize who your real friends are.
I look forward to reading about Max, Dylan and Linda they are going to make wonderful additions to this family and they will be loved by Drew and Emmett.
I know Lindsay is starting to realize that maybe JR isn't such a innocent angel, but I still think she will try to con Brian out of some money or manipulate Justin.
Looking forward to the next chapter :)
[Report This]Date: Jul 23, 2016 3:33 am Title: Chapter 6
Love your POV's. It's interesting that Mia is the princess who must be obeyed. Chad is adorable. Emmett and Drew are doing a great thing and I think that Max, Dylan and Linda will add a lot to this story.
Author's Response:
I think that the new kids are going to see this from outsiders point of view. I plan on them meeting the other clan. Emmett is going to turn into Brian if the kids have problems with Deb’s crew.
Date: Jul 23, 2016 3:27 am Title: Chapter 6
OHHHHH what a darling chapter!! I think the three kids are going to be a wonderful addition to all their lives! And Max is going to be Chad's hero since he caught the Grandaddy! I loved this bit of normalcy amid all the insanity!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Jul 23, 2016 2:25 am Title: Chapter 5
I understand that JR is only taking in what her parents have told her, but she's not happy with her life. Mel and Lindz are in denial and Mikey, rather then having his own money to get to his daughter he asks everybody for help. Even Hunter refused. I hope Mel accepts Brian's offer to help JR.
Author's Response:
II wanted to explain why she is the way she is. I don't think I can change her. She is too far in Michael’s camp. I kind of felt I left it that she was just a brat. I need to see where it came from. I still on the fence about her. I think Deb should have to deal with two kids who pass the blame.LoL.