[Report This]Date: Jul 23, 2016 1:13 am Title: Chapter 5
The land of denial must be a nice place to live since Melanie, Debbie, Michael, Lindsay and JR have taken permanent residence there, even with the report staring them in the face they will still try to blame Gus, they are children playing at adults.
Not surprised Lindsay's sex buddy broke it off and ended the relationship his sister is a smart woman, wonder if Melanie's sex buddy will drop her too?
Melanie losing her job twice because she refused to listen to the client and using the fact that she is a lesbian is to argue her position is pretty accurate, she always did think being a man hating lesbian means she was right about everything and to Hell with what anyone else wants or thinks.
David is a very good attorney to be two steps ahead of Melanie I hope he and the police will be there to make sure the girls move out in two days.
Lindsay slowly coming to realize that she is on the wrong side is typical her, staying on Melanie's side gives her no monetary benefit though I think she will do her whole pretend thing when Michael shows up with his whining and Deb arguing for her sweet innocent granddaughter.
I doubt Melanie will accept Brian's offer because she won't let him have control over her and her daughter.
I look forward to them having to pack their stuff so fast and being forced to pay back twelve years rent.
I do feel sorry but JR but I also feel she needs to deal with some consequences for her lies about Gus.
I wonder if anyone at the party used their phone to record the party that would be the proof to show the four idiots that Gus was not there and it would show JR using drugs socially, plus it might also show JR being truthful about how she feels with the situation between Mel and Lindsay??
Author's Response:
JR is Michael’s daughter you owe her. Michael is going to meet his match. Deb ineeds to see what pass the blame does. Brian will help if they accept it because the sex for drugs bothers him. He had a daughter. I gave him a family different than Debs. I always see that scene with Vic where she sat in his house and berated him taking about taking care of him and he owed her. Brian’s family doesn't keep score.
They are going by force from their house.
Date: Jul 23, 2016 1:04 am Title: Chapter 5
Well....at least Lindsay is waking up to reality
Date: Jul 23, 2016 12:59 am Title: Chapter 5
Keep 'em coming! I'm enjoying this fic a lot. :)
Date: Jul 23, 2016 12:56 am Title: Chapter 5
These MOFOs!!!! Ironically, I don't feel sorry for JR one damn bit. She knows right from wrong and if she wasn't so jealous and mean-spirited she could have been incluuded and taken care of. I do fault Mel for involving her daughter in adult business and Lindsay for standing by and doing NOTHING. Their asses deserve to have their asses handed to them. Every last one of them do! Which brings me to that waste of sperm named Michael.
JR is just like him- lacks the balls to take responsibility for his own actions. He has messed around and burned every single bridge except for those who are blinded and don't see his spiteful, petulant and childish ways. I'm glad no one with good sense is falling for his act of "Woe is Me." Perhaps when Mel finally has a look at the police report and shares it with Michael (which she probably won't), then some progress will be made.
This is what happens when narcissistic and incompetent people are allowed to procreate (Mel and Michael with less sense than a bag of M&Ms). And also what happens when a self-absorbed person is allowed to become a parent in any sense (Lindsay without the sense God gave a can of string beans). I swear....2 Bitches and a Mitch!
Great Job getting my blood pressure up and Looking forward to MORE!
HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
You posted have I said I love your stories. I would fear you if my name was Mel or Linds. Michael would just tell you Brian won't let you hurt me. Justin would buy you a new car and help you hide the bodies.
[Report This]Date: Jul 22, 2016 12:54 am Title: Chapter 4
Wow! The stuff that Gus was hiding from Brian and Justin I think we are only scratching the surface of all this kid has been through in Canada, I want to hurt Mel and Lindsay so bad right now they deserve to be in the gutter or underneath it.
Deb is living in a dream if she thinks Brian and Justin still owes her and Michael I think those two should be in the gutter along with the two witches of the north.
JR being on drugs is sad but not really surprising since Mel and Lindsay are just fixated on themselves, plus how much money they can get out of Brian, I was so mad when they asked for $8000 a month are they high!
I think Brian should sue them for all the support he paid them that they barely spent on Gus, I know they will be coming to Pittsburgh which puts them on Brian and Justin's turf *rubs hands together while smiling evilly* they are all going to learn that it's not nice to attack The Taylor-Kinneys.
Brian and Justin have the money, power and drive to crush them all I can't wait to read that:)
Congrats on your fourth story! You Truly Amaze Me!!
[Report This]Date: Jul 21, 2016 10:51 pm Title: Chapter 4
This keeps getting better and better. I'm loving Emmett, Drew, Ted and Blake. How can they prove that JR is the responsible one for what happened to her. Can't wait to see how the eviction goes.
[Report This]Date: Jul 21, 2016 10:40 pm Title: Chapter 3
So glad to see you're going to make them pay. JR is turning into a little Mikey. Such a shame.
Author's Response:
JR only knows what she is told by her family. If your mother and father tell you something enough you believe them. She is a very angry child. In the next chapter you get to hear what she has been told all her life. She is in a lot of trouble but because Michael and the others give her get out of jail free cards she views things the way Michael does. You know what happens when you find out people you are suppose to trust lie to you. Mel, Michael and Deb are going to find out.
[Report This]Date: Jul 21, 2016 10:27 pm Title: Chapter 2
Love, love, love this. Gus is getting the short end of the stick, but he's got his dads to take up for him. Deb needs to stop believing everything her son and the girls tell him.
Date: Jul 21, 2016 10:19 pm Title: Chapter 4
Well, I don't suppose they will really listen. Hopefully they will piss test JR
Date: Jul 21, 2016 7:37 pm Title: Chapter 4
This is a combined review of chapter 2 through 4 so bear with me!!!
I love that Mia calls Emmett and Drew by "Emmy and Drewsy." I mean can you really get more adorable than that?!! So happy that Brian and Justin now have a family of their own and that their careers are thriving. Definitely glad they cut ties with the dead weight in their lives and that Brian took steps to protect Gus.
And what's with that BITCH throwing shit and hitting Gus?! OH please let someone whip her ass during this fic for hurting Gus. I felt like worming my way into your computer screen to choke that ho!! And Lindsay....what kind of... you know what never mind. I know what kind of trollop Linday is- the type that's all about child support but only remembers that the child is important as PERSON when it affects the bank account. Fucking HEIFERS! And then to threaten Justin's career if he didn't get Brian to do what she wanted...REALLY Trick? Betta grab that chair and set her ass down on that one!! LOL I swear if Lindz and Mel were 'real' people, I would find the nearest elevator shaft and push them down it so that they could ride to HELL in style! SMH The road to hell would no longer be paved with good intentions but with the bodies of Mel and Lindz...oh and add Deb and Dumbass to that too!
Deb, Mel and Lindz must have matching brooms lubricated in bitchiness and delusions. Michael has no brain so I'm not sure what his broom would be covered in except whininess and bullshit...YEAH that sounds about right. I always worried about what JR would become when she hit puberty. People tend to write her as this perfect teenager but I call BS. I always thought that she had about a 98% chance of inheriting the worse of both her parents and in this story I am RIGHT!!! Right now, I want to choke the lies out of the little twit along with the adults siding with her. As for Mel, Lindsay, Michael and Deb, I just want to lock them in a room while a hidden camera is placed in JR's clothes to document everywhere she goes and what she does. Then perhaps they won't wear the "Fucking Idiot" blinders anymore.
KUDOS to Brian and Justin for telling the Negligent Novotnys and the Cunts of Canada to go fuck themselves. I am so happy that Brian is having Gus' house evicted. It was a smart move to have the house put into his son's name. I'm so glad that the Taylor-Kinneys have true ride or die family in the guise of Emmy and Drewsie (I just love that, LOL), Ted and Blake, David and Cynthia!
Did I mention that I am so HAPPY that Ben and Carl left and are living their lives to the fullest?! It amazes me that Michael and Deb can cuss out everyone in one breath while holding out their hands expecting help...SMH ALL of the family, including Jen and most importantly their former partners, needed to leave Deb and her offending offspring long since.
OMG!! I can't wait for more of this! Happy writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Jul 21, 2016 7:34 pm Title: Chapter 4
Emmett and Drew are really good as a couple, as Ted and Blake.
Brian and Justin are fortunate to have them as friends.
So happy to hear what Justin told Deb and what Brian told Lindsay.
Can't wait for more...
Thank you for this new story and for the super quick updates!!!
Date: Jul 21, 2016 7:29 pm Title: Chapter 3
Lindsay went very far to get Brian and Justin to break up for good. She discredited herself a little more with each person she contacted.
As for Deb, she got what she deserved: her son living with her and Carl gone.
JR is as jealous of Mia and Chad as Michael and Lindsay are of Justin.
What a family!
Date: Jul 21, 2016 7:22 pm Title: Chapter 2
So much happened.
So, Mel has gone crazy and bullied Gus and Lindsay didn't do anything. JR can't do wrong as Michael...
For how long Deb and Michael will demand help from Brian, using guilt to get what they want? "You owe us"...
Lindsay doesn't even know where her son is; that's unbelievable. What a bitch.
Mia and Chad are to die for.
Date: Jul 21, 2016 7:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
Whoa, what a start!!
So happy to see that Brian finally came to his senses and got Justin back and that they have a family.
So sorry for Gus and what he's going thru but he has wonderful people by his side and made the right move to get out the hell hole he was living in.
JR is taking all the good sides of her parents/grand-parents: lying, bad mouthing and cheating. She has a bright future ahead.
This is going to be fun to read...!
Date: Jul 21, 2016 6:40 pm Title: Chapter 4
I feel bad for JR. Getting into drugs at such a young age. She's on a rocky road. I do think that B&J will be able to save her in the long run. It wil take many challenges though. She may be an absolute brat, but there are definite reasons behind it. I get the feeling she'll hit bottom before any help is accepted though, and of course, B&J and Gus will be blamed until that happens. Such a sad place for her to be in. Can only hope she resilliant enough.
Brian rocks!! Put it all out there adn now will wait to see what comes of that little conversation. Nothing good I'm sure.
Mia sure has Emmet and probably everyone wrapped around her little finger. The great thing is she's not selfish about it. Sounds like a lovely little girl.
so much in 1 day! What a thrill!!
Thank you!
Cheers
Elaine
Date: Jul 21, 2016 5:55 pm Title: Chapter 3
Love love love this. I'm a sucker for anti mel/linds/michael stories. Please continue to make sure they get tgeir comeupence. Can't wait for the next chpt. Thankfully you are writing like a speed demon so I won't have to wait long
kearney
Author's Response:
Brian is only started, Justin is going to help him finish. Thanks for reading.
Date: Jul 21, 2016 5:31 pm Title: Chapter 2
OK..yup..blood is boiling. Anxiety level is high! :) Holy shitballs! Between the girls and Deb...I'm not sure who to torture first. The girls. Deb is getting infor from them.
hehehehe..JR arrested. Now THAT is funny. I get the feeling they are all screwed!
another of your fics that I see myself completely engrossed in. I will be awating the next update with baited breath. Can't wait to see what you do with and to everyone!!
Cheers!
Author's Response:
I think you could be right. I have the last chapter I have written posted.
Date: Jul 21, 2016 4:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
You are a writing queen!! Can't believe you've already started another one! I can already tell I'm going to get very emotionally involved in this one. :) I had smoke coming out my ears in chapter 1.
I hope Justin or brian get pictures of the bruises on Gus! I'm almost scared for Mel adn Lindsey...not really. I winder what Deb and Micheal will say once they find out about those bruises? Will they blame Gus or will they actually get a clue? I fear they'll find a way to blame Briand & Justin as well as Gus. At least he's 17 and can make decisions for himself now. All monies can now be stopped. (I hope)
I must say, I very anxious to read this! I'm looking forward to it. I love how I'm already emotionally involved just after 1 chapter. Glad you'll be adding a touch of hunmour here and there to balance. Otherwise I forsee Zanax in my future! LOL
THANK YOU!!!!!!! thank you for sharing your stories with us!!
Cheers,
Elaine
Author's Response:
Thank you for continuing to enjoy them. I have the next three chapters going.
Date: Jul 21, 2016 4:47 pm Title: Chapter 2
You posted chapter one again hun.... 😉
Author's Response:
fixed it.
Date: Jul 21, 2016 4:33 pm Title: Chapter 2
I think you put in teh wrong chapter hun...this is chapter 1
Author's Response:
fixed thanks.
Date: Jul 21, 2016 3:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh wow....should I be nervous?
Author's Response:
It is going to get worse before it gets better but don't worry Brian is going to protect his family.
[Report This]Date: Jul 21, 2016 1:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
I hope they get pictures of those bruises. Boy, this is another fantastic start. So different yet looks to be so good. You've got a great imagination.
Author's Response:
I am keeping the pov because it works for me. Maybe I will eventually learn to write without it but I need to have everyone telling the story. I have the next two chapter at beta and want to write the next one because I need some funny.
Date: Jul 21, 2016 6:52 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh, oh, oh... thar be angst! My heart is full of gratitude! (I'm an unabashed angst junkie.)
This is a very very promising beginning. Pins and needles here
Roni
Author's Response:
Justin and Brian are not going to let anyone off. I almost feel bad about it.
[Report This]Date: Jul 21, 2016 4:09 am Title: Chapter 1
Whoa you are not pulling punches this time I can't believe...no wait I can believe how selfish all four of those idiots are being, all they care about is themselves and what they can get from Brian and Justin.
I am so happy that Brian has cut the strings to Michael and Debbie that should have happened a long time ago.
Mel and Lindsay are a terrible couple who should have ended their relationship a long time ago, I can't believe that Mel attacked Gus and threw him out, Brian and Justin are going to kill them for hurting their son.
Everyone not standing behind Brian and Justin is going to suffer their combined wrath and they will deserve it.
I hope you don't blind on pulling any punches this a is fight that has been building for years, it is time to put the bullies in their place once and for all!!!
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
This isn't going to be pretty. Brian is going to make everyone pay. Gus is going to have a lot of help healing. He is hiding a lot from Brian and Justin. Thank you for all the comments and reading through my crazy.
[Report This]Date: Jul 21, 2016 4:00 am Title: Chapter 1
First, OMG 4th fic already?!!! GO GAL!!!!
Now onto my review: Great beginning!! I already know it's going to piss me off but I will rant happily as I leave my reviews. Already the four PITAs (that's pain in the ass for short) are tap-dancing on my last working nerve of the last working nerve. I am already looking forward to you making them pay in BIG ways (I'll be making them pay in my fics as well just to make sure they suffer A LOT, LOL).
Your writing is amazing and you never disappoint! I am always ALWAYS able to escape into the story and that is a true gift!!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
Yep I hit all your favorites anti them all. Get to writing and I'll help you want bash the hell out of them. Thanks for sticking with me.