Date: Jul 28, 2016 5:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
I waited anxiously for this update all day and was thrilled by it.
Michael trying so desparately to hold onto his place in Brian's life. I don't think he relaly cares one hoot about the others in all honesty, but they come as a package deal with Brian. His delusional thinking that Emmett or Ted would sympathize with him is funny. (pathetic too) His constant "Brian is my best friend" diatribe is falling on deaf ears, yet he can't seem to get a clue. This downward spiral is wonderful to watch. LOL.
Ted is a joy to behold. He's realized the meaning of real friendship and won't let Michael colour it. He knows that Brian looks out for his friends and has really "grown up" into an honest to goodness good man and true friend. His relationship with Blake is great. blake won't let anyone push ted around or try to manipulate him. Great partnership!!
Justin of course was awesome! funny as hell. Pulls no punches and loves playing with the timy mind of Michael. All of Michael's attempts will fall with a resounding "klunk". Justin is just far to smart adn will recognize Michael's machinations for what they are. Let's face it. Michael just isn't smart enough to challenge Justin in this playing field. Justin is far too self assured.
Am sooooooo enjoying this and aticipate every simgle update. Can't wait for the next one!!
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Jul 27, 2016 4:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
Loved everyone's reaction! Lindsey is reight in this one...why is anyone surprised? I guess, since she grew up WASP, it's something she was more than likely expecting at some point. An Justin just being so non-chalant about it afterwards. I think it will take time for Mel to get used to this side of Justin. I love how they both were so impressed that Justin stood up for the group, not just Brian
Brian of course was completely turned on. No surprise there. LOL
Ben Ben Ben...I really don't know if he'll be able to come back from this. He's burned alot of bridges. His behaviour has been comopletely inexcuseable and totally unforgivable ESPECIALLY when it comes to Hunter and JR. Justin can handle Ben and Michael's attitude towards himself, and even the others. but when it comes to the kids......look out! JR is too young to really understand, but hunter! OMG...my heart broke at that. I get that Ben is only now realizing his behaviour has been beyond reproach...but still. To take that attitude with your child!! To put your husband and your frigging friends before the needs of your own kid?!?! I don't know. I think perhaps maybe possibly he and Hunter can at asome point become tentative friends, but hunter will never completely trust Ben I don't think. I honestly felt sick to my stomach at that point of the fic. so well done!
Michael as usualy looks everywhee else to blam rather than looking at himself. He'll get no sympathy from anyone and his plan to have himself adn Brian find new partners.........yeah...like that's gonna happen. there's no way Justin will fall for his crap. There are too many others to support him, who will derail anything Michael has planned. I'm really looking forward to reading what you have up your sleeve in that regard. and can't wait to see the outcome! LOL. will he and Moany keep hooking up?
another great chapter and really really really looking forward to the next chapter(s).
Cheers!!!!!!!
Elaine
Date: Jul 27, 2016 11:43 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow... Mikey is awful, but not quite in the way I expected... he doesn't want Brian, but doens't want Justin for him...
Now nobody is good enough??? ugh, Mikey makes my skin crawl!
Date: Jul 25, 2016 8:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
I see Michael is up to his usual amount of BS. He really needs to butt out of everyone else's lives. His manipulations will only cause him more damage to his already tenuous friendships. I get the feeling he's going to learn a hard lesson.
Hopefully Brians sees through Michael's games, adn that Michael doesn't do anything too diabilical. I had visions of him dropping something into a drink of Brian's or something. At least Ted and Emmett will be there to keep too much from happening. None of them seem overly thrlled with Michael's "fun-filled" plans for the weekend. This new chap is going to be sorely dissapointed and more than likely very upset with Michael's shenanigans once he understands how loyal and devoted Brian is to Justin.
Justin will, I'm sure fire off his own style of retribution once he discovers what Michael is up to.
Terrific start! Eagerly anticipating the update. How quickly will Michael get his ass handed to him or at the very least have the wind taken out of his sails.
Cheers,
Date: Jul 25, 2016 7:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
Liking this so far. XD Can't wait for the next chapter.
Can I trust you, Brian, to behave yourself and rant to Justin when Michael trying to set you up with that new single friend of his? *glares at Brian.*
Date: Jul 25, 2016 7:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
aaarrgghhh i loathe Michael so much he is a whinging, whineing, pathetic little man. I just want to slap him!!!!
Really looking forward to the next part of this but i have a feeling i'm gonna want to do more than just slap him as the story moves forward. x
Date: Jul 25, 2016 4:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh poor naive little Michael, he can't see the forest for the trees... Brian would never be friends, let alone lovers with any friend of Monty and Eli's...
Hugs ~ Kathleen
Date: Jul 25, 2016 1:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
Interesting beginning!
Michael is like his mother: only the job title and the bank account are important. Like the good Dr David. If Kevin is the same type, that will be fun.
What a goofball this Michael!
Date: Jul 25, 2016 12:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
Nice string anti-Michael start. I'd rather stay home than hang with Mikey too...lol
Date: Jul 25, 2016 10:47 am Title: Chapter 1
Hmmm....I think i'll hold my tongue for now. I am in serious danger of saying something not befitting a lady.
Date: Jul 25, 2016 4:28 am Title: Chapter 1
Another great anti- Michael story. Never get tired of them. I do hope that Brian finally sees through the friendship and knocks Michael out on his ass and kicks him out of his life for good. Hope Ben comes to his senses and joins Brian in that task. Justin hopefully will get his satisfaction and shove it in the winy, delusional, moron'so ass lol. Awaiting next chapter!
Date: Jul 25, 2016 3:53 am Title: Chapter 1
Shucks!!!! My blood is BOILING already!!!! This little narcissistic mofo!!!! LAWD HAM TURKEY!!!! No one wants to be around Michael and I don't blame them. I hope Brian peeps Michael's ultimate game and drops him like a bad habit and fast. Ted should drop Blake; Brian should drop Justin....Ben should drop him!!! Hell Debbie should have dropped Michael on his head and perhaps it would have given him some damn sense!!
Looks like Dumbass Denial Stupid has started his own show separate from the "Young, Old and Ridiculous." Yes! We can expect me to pull my Robin Leech voice back for the commentary on this one!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Jul 25, 2016 3:51 am Title: Chapter 1
Once Justin finds out what Michael is up to, he is going to be going medieval on Michael's body.
Great start on a new story, I'm loving it.
Sandy
[Report This]Date: Jul 25, 2016 3:42 am Title: Chapter 1
What a selfish, self-absorbed, asshole he wants Brian to dump Justin so they can hang out with his friends, he is planning Brian's life and totally disregarding that Brian loves Justin...What A Dick!!!
Michael has the audacity to plan an affair for Brian? He is a child and Ben is way too much of a saint to put up with his childish behavior, then again Brian doesn't help because he lets him get away with it too just to preserve a friendship that has gone run its course.
When Justin finds out I think Michael better start running because if it was me and a suppose friend did that I would be out for blood, Justin might just snap and everyone might want to duck and cover cause no one will be able to stop him.
I can't wait!!! lol
Date: Jul 25, 2016 3:36 am Title: Chapter 1
OMG Mikey is such a jerk.
Great start to another story! Looking forward to more.
[Report This]Date: Jul 25, 2016 3:27 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow. I'm so glad to see your new story. You've got Mikey down to a T. Nobody can really stand him anymore and I'm sure his plans are going down the drain. Can't wait for more.