Date: Apr 05, 2017 4:23 pm Title: Chapter 4
Michael doesn't even stop when confronted... he is so good at deluding himself into thinking he is so smart and can do whatever the wants
Date: Jul 27, 2016 12:18 pm Title: Chapter 4
Michael just infuriates me... I hope Kevin joins the fun group lol
Date: Jul 27, 2016 9:05 am Title: Chapter 4
Excellent chapter, as always.
Eli and Monty are so snobs; the same type as the Good Doctor David.
Yeah, the girls are coming back.
So glad Brian and Mel getting along well.
Eli and Monty clashing Brian and Michael doesn't say anything the protect his "best friend": that tells everything about Michael deviate mind.
I-800-382-5633 is hilarious but will Michael get the meaning? It seems not.
As if Justin would ever invite Dumb the Frist and the Snobs.
Date: Jul 26, 2016 9:10 pm Title: Chapter 4
That damn Michael.......
Date: Jul 26, 2016 4:05 pm Title: Chapter 4
Michael's wants to empress everyone with his friends status, yet he's embarrassed my their partners careers. I wonder if he see the irony, that he's just like them. His partner is a professor, and he sells comics...
Later Hon ~ Kathleen
Date: Jul 26, 2016 3:48 pm Title: Chapter 4
You know what cracks me up about the attitude of Monti and eli. The ytry so hard to be "like the straight people"...yet the straight people are no different. Some want marriage, some don't belive in it. Some are sluts and take promiscuity to a whole new leverl, others are more choosy. How is that any different that those who are gay? A snob is a snot is a snob. doesn't matter the sexuality, the colour or the religion.
Ben needs to realize that Michael is the problem, not the gang. He stands aside allowing Michael to have the most abhorant behavior...just lets it slide. I don't get it. He's beginning to blame the others for Michael's behaviour...that they aren't including them. well...why should they? The fact that both Michael adn Ben allowed fo rthe stotty behaviour of Monty and eli to continue...to treat Deb they way the did!! WOW...I can't believe Michael told Deb that. Glad she gave back to them the same as she got. Never....and I mean NEVER allow someone outside insult your mother! Especially some social climbing, elitist stotty assholes!
The 1-800 number was BRILLIANT!! Laughed my ass off on that one! I really have to remember that one!!
I do have 1 little favour to ask. When changing the POV's on the characters...could you go back to labeling that way? It makes reading it a bit smoother so I don't have to figure out who's talking. allows for the flow to go smoother. At least for me.
another great story. am really enjoying the approaches you are taking on each of them. also, how each one has different relationships. I mean, in this one B&J and the girls are getting along...another, Lindsey is a psycho, or Mel is...or Mel is cool. I like how you mix it up. In this one it's Michael and surprisingly Ben is being an ass. Enjoying your perspectives!!
Cheers!!
Elaine
[Report This]Date: Jul 26, 2016 12:07 pm Title: Chapter 4
ROFLMAO. Mikey is alienating everyone. HE wants to impress everyone with HIS friends. He told Ben he was going to see JR? That's going to bite him on the ass.
[Report This]Date: Jul 26, 2016 4:36 am Title: Chapter 4
Michael and Ben are so delusional that they are getting on my nerves with their snotty, pretentious attitudes, I mean you know it is bad when even Debbie doesn't want to be around her son lol.
Monty and Eli are just social climbers who are bored with their hum drum lives so they look down there noses at others who aren't like them...Fake and Wonderfully Plastic!
Ben needs to catch a clue he is an even worse snob than David (And that is saying Something!!), no one wants to hang with you and Michael because you both look down your nose and criticize them, who wants to hang with people like that?
I think I know of four people who need to be embarrassed royally and brought down several pegs.
Glad the girls are moving back but Michael is going to be such a pain when he finds out they are staying with Brian and Justin.
Looking forward to Justin, Blake and everyone else giving the almighty smack down to Michael, Ben and the Fakes :)
Date: Jul 26, 2016 4:35 am Title: Chapter 4
And now for another commentary on Planet Delusion....
First, I would just like to say that I will be passing 1-800-382-5633 out to a whole LOT of people!! That was pure genius!!! OMG! My abs are killing me right now from laughing my ass OFF!!! I think I may even get t-shirts with that number printed! LOL
Secondly, I like Mel and Brian's dynamic here. She tells it like it is and Brian in turn, receives her opinion without issue. For ONCE, he is not defending the actions of the Dumbass.
Third, is it possible that Ben is realizing the mistake it was to expose Michael to Monty and Eli? Brian should tell Ben what it was like to be around Michael during the Dickhead Dave episodes of their lives and perhaps he'll understand what kind of monster he created. Better yet, Justin should tell him since he was around then too and it might be absorbed better.
Finally, the Dumbass himself...SMH... acceptance into the "Pretentious Assholery Network" is so damn important to him that he allows someone he's known for 3 seconds to insult his mother...in his OWN house?!!! WTF! Monty would still be picking my toenails out of his throat by way of my foot- damn that- my whole LEG up his ass if his Mutton-Mouth EVER and I mean EEEEEVVVVVEEEEERRRRR said a word against my mama! I would seriously be making a Foot Track and a Dot when I walked because they would have had to replace my missing leg with a wooden stick!!! And he still wants to be friends with these idiots?!
Furthermore, he kept let them keep insulting Brian like he isn't MORE successful or MORE beautiful or MORE intelligent than his 'new found friends' and then when his own husband tells them that people are able to have fulfilling lives being parents and still having a much-needed social life, Michael agrees with those Mealy-mouth bigots?! Some best friend. Is there any wonder WHY no one wants to be around him? I'm glad that Brian, Justin, Ted, Blake, Em and Drew is not helping that pathetic little social climber. 'They need to pattern themselves after us' indeed! Michael needs to have a lobotomy and have his brain donated to science to find out what STUPID really looks like.
Looking forward to another installment for my Planet Delusional blog!! LOL
Happy writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle