Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 05, 2017 4:30 pm Title: Chapter 5

Justin's tirade was priceless and so spot on... Ben is pathetic at this point... always finding a way to place blame anywhere but with him or his hetero wannabe husband

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 27, 2016 9:11 am Title: Chapter 5

So happy that Gus asked if he could call Justin Papa.

Michael's reaction when Mel asked about Ben being JR's papa: what a jackass.

The whole scene at the zoo; too many things are happening to comment but the lashing out at Michael and Ben was the best of all.

Thank you for sharing your talent with us.

Reviewer: Tasha Terrilyn Tania Roberts Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jul 27, 2016 2:26 am Title: Chapter 5

YESSS LOL GO JUSTIN THIS WAS AN AWESOME CHAPTER. BEN IS AN IDIOT

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 27, 2016 12:43 am Title: Chapter 5

HOLY SH!t!!! I So Love Justin!! He laid the verbal Smack Down on Ben and their snobby friends and I am rolling lol.

Justin had to do it because Ben had no right to put the blame for why JR did not want to hang with her father or the Fakes on Justin, if Michael doesn't call to find out about his daughter (Surprised he remembers what she looks like) then everyone is just supposed to wait? Bump that he wasn't worried about JR until he saw her with Justin, then all of a sudden he wanted to get loud and draw everyone into the conversation (Ass!!).

JR exerting her independence at four is good because a child can tell the difference between genuine kindness and someone being Fake.

Justin throwing out the reason why Michael follows Monty was Hilarious I was not expecting that to happen, well at least Eli can now say his relationship is exactly the heteros he so wants to emulate, Monty most be so proud I bet Ben is? :)

You threw away true friendship to hang with a group of people who are Pretentious, Egotistical, Glorified, Social Climbing Snobs one of whom is sleeping with your husband...Way to Go Ben!!!

You tossed Hunter back out into the streets because of what these two idiots said? 

You let them bad mouth your mother-in-law, criticise Brian, Justin, Emmett, hang on Drew's celebrity status, ignore Blake and Ted so you could feel important and it all crashed in burned!

I can't feel bad because Ben walked into this with his eyes wide open, Ben let this happen.

 Ben Bruckner gave Michael free reign to act however he wanted and now it has come back to bite him in the ass!!

I can't wait for the next chapter I want to know how long Justin has known about Michael cheating?

 

Reviewer: Jazzepoet Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 26, 2016 9:28 pm Title: Chapter 5

OMG....WTG SUNSHINE!!!! I absolutely loved every bit this! Ben deserved the truth after trying to excuse Michael of his wrong doings.

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 26, 2016 8:31 pm Title: Chapter 5

OMG!!! OMGGGG!!!! OMGGGGGGG!!!!!!!!!!! I'm laughing so damn hard right now! Well now we all know WHY DDS was hanging on Mutton-mouth's tip so much...it's because he's been sucking it too! YIKES! Michael topping? Personally I prefer to think that he's a eunuch and only uses a tube to pee....*shivers and blech* I now NEED Brain Bleach! 

As for Captain Denial.... Ben really did deserve having all that self-righteousness thrown right back in his face. Can't understand why no one wants to be around you? Well I don't think there is a misconception left since Justin put it all plainly. While his new friends and his husband are busy being hypocrites, he's too busy attaining the perfect level of snobbery to receive a SMACKDOWN- WASP style, which Justin delivered in spades!!

I'm with Brian....Never Piss Justin Taylor OFF!!! LMAO! I know there is more coming soon from Planet Delusion. Ben has had a lot of revelations at the zoo and will have to decide what to do with Monkey...oops I mean Mikey, LOL

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle 

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 26, 2016 8:01 pm Title: Chapter 5

O!!!M!!!!G!!!!!!!!!! That was so AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!! I read and re-read that a couple times. Completely blindsided! Did not see that one coming from a mile away. I'm with Brian on this one. Do not piss off Justin! Will Ben FINALLY see things as they are now? Will he take his head out of his ass and see exactly what kind of people Mondy and Eli are or will his sismply comiserate with Eli. Blame everyone else because he and Michael were never included? I mean according to he, Michael and their 2 newest friends, it's always someone else's fault. 

I'm almost bouncing n my seat wanting to find out what happens next!! LOL.

Typical Michael blaming Ben. I can't wait to see what Deb's reaction is going to be!! 

Hunter ran away??! No wonder if shit like that is going on in their home. He'd feel completely unwanted around the likes of those 2 being influenced by M&E.

good for JR standing up for what she wants. Even in her 4 year old mind she knows that the other "adults" aren't fun for her.

Terribly excited to see what bring to this in teh upcoming chapters! 

I'm still cackling over Justin's take down.

Cheers,

Elaine