Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 05, 2017 6:14 pm Title: Chapter 10

Ha, david finally gets to see an inkling of Mikey in action lol

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 29, 2016 6:41 pm Title: Chapter 10

Great to see Justin supporting Lindsey with her art, just as she supported him. Nice touch. Good to have Linds and Mel supportive of each other in this one, as well as supportive of B&J. All one big happy family except of course for ..........Michael.

David is going to either train him of give up entirely. That way he ends up either a puppet once again, or alone. either one works. LOL. To what end though will Michael go just o have David in his corner adn supporting him? Would he actually give up on his daughter? Or would he do that anyway? I know David doesn't want to raise another kid, but he does believe that Michael should take on the responsibilities of fatherhood. I never saw them as a good pair in the show. Way too far apart from each other in too many aspects. I have to say...there are so many option for you with this little twist with David.

Michael's attempts at embarassing Justin flopped in a big way. And pissed off David as well. 2 birds with 1 stone! lol. I wonder what Michael will do now that DAvid is forbidding him to hurt Justin. How sneaky will he be? How underhanded? 

I wonder if David's opinion of Brian will change especially if he figures out all of Michael's unscrupulous dealings. Never mind if he ever finds out about Hunter!

Looking forward to tonight!

Cheers,

Elaine

 

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 29, 2016 4:40 am Title: Chapter 10

This update was so nice I had to read it TWICE!!! Michael, your village called and they want their idiot back- you should GO HOME!!! Good for that rat-bastard! Michael wanted to talk slick and got his ass handed to him...in front of EVERYBODY!! David really should just cut his losses right now and move on but he probably won't. Michael is what David needs: someone who is weak-willed, easily influenced, childlike and has about as much thinking capacity as sand on a beach. It will be interesting to see that article in print and how it affects David. Justin turned those insults back to Michael and around so fast that Michael will be reeling from them for lonely years to come. And the little fuckwad had the nerve to think that Justin would be intimidated or embarassed at the sound of Ethan's name? Wasn't he surprised to hear that Brian ran into him in New York of all places and that he had a conversation with the violinist...LMAO IDIOT thy name is Michael!!

He should really learn NOT to come for Justin unless the blond sends for him!And since that will never happen, Michael should just set his ass down somewhere and give his non-existent brain a much needed, well-deserved vacation. He has to see what kind of trouble thinking is landing him in! So painful to watch because my stomach is hurting from laughter!!!

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 29, 2016 3:57 am Title: Chapter 10

*LMAO* Michael tried to embarrass Justin about winning King of Babylon and ended up embarrassing David instead!

David doesn't want a partner he just wants a Bitch he can keep around to make him look good (Why He Chooses Michael I Will Never Understand!), he could hire a made for less and just have some tail on the side.

David wants to present to his friends someone who is his intellectual equal and has the kind of money to travel as he and his friends do, Michael will never fit that description he likes comic books and can't even hold an utensil right and he will never have the money or the intelligence to fit in with David's elitist friends...Hold Up!...I am getting Deja Vu...where have I seen this happen before?...Wait Don't Tell Me, I know it will come to me *scratches Head*

David looks down his nose at Brian while trying to make an impression by using Justin and his status as an artist, who by the way makes more more in one show than Michael can make in an year (Hell Brian makes more money than David in an hour lol).

David is getting exactly what he deserves by keeping Michael around, I think David deserves some more embarrassment. Wonder if the reporter will have pictures of David dancing around Babylon? *rofl*