Date: Sep 23, 2016 6:35 pm Title: Chapter 6
Poor Brian having to drill information into Michael's head!
I love the whole chapter, but the end is delightful.
Date: Sep 17, 2016 5:09 am Title: Chapter 6
I think I mentioned before how much I like the different POV's. You do them so very well.
Michael is going off the deep end because Brian doesn't want to come out and play with him. I don't blame Ben for being pissed (although what he ever saw in Michael is beyond my ken).
Lindsay is in full angst mode because no one sees the value of her opinion and won't listen to her. Why she keeps showing up to take care of the girls, when she can't even manage JR & Gus...just who does she think she's kidding? Certainly not B/J.
I like getting the glimpses of B/J day to day banter in their relationship as lovers, partners and fathers. And I think its great that Ted/Blake and Emmett/Calvin are evolving right along with them and have remained good friends.
The conversation or should I say confrontation between Brian and Michael, is a perfect example of how selective Michael's hearing is. After everything Brian said, Michael's response is that Brian is cranky. smh
Lol, I loved the conversation between Jen, Justin and Brian. Very apropos!
Date: Aug 14, 2016 6:52 pm Title: Chapter 6
That should be a role playing game... Justin is the mistress! lol
Date: Aug 03, 2016 3:33 pm Title: Chapter 6
It seems there isn't enough money in the world to buy Mr 3 brain cells a clue. As frustrating as he is....it makes for great hilarity! It seems Brian could shout it from teh mountaintops and Michael still son't get it. Argh! I'm looking forard to what ben has to say about the whole thing, yet michael still doesn't seem to be taking it seriously. Being threatened with the security of his marriage still doesn't seem to be working on him. Michael is running around like a chicken with it's head cut off hunting down Brian, yet he's not paying any attention to his marriage or his child.
finally Brian is trying to get it across to him, sadly nothing seems to compute. What will it take??!?!?
Justins was funny!! "I want to be the mistress...." Funny as hell! I can totally see him saying that with how you have written him.
AS for not seeing an ending.....that's a good thing IMO. Makes for a longer story. Longer is goooooooooooood!
Cheers,
Elaine
[Report This]Date: Aug 03, 2016 1:18 am Title: Chapter 6
Where to begin? Michael Novotny
Michael is so self absorbed that he doesn't care that he scared two sweet babies and I bet Joanne aswell by yelling while the adults try to have a conversation, Deb should have taken him in the back and spanked his Ass lol
Michael is so wrapped up in trying to get to Brian that he can't see that he has become the Drop-in Dad every always thought Brian was, he treats poor JR like she is burden to him and instead of spending time with his daughter he is true to get in Brian's business.
I feel bad for JR because it is bad enough her father ignores her but Lindsay does it too and if Mel wasn't so busy she would see that her family is falling apart, but then again this is the life you chose when you decided to pick Michael as the father and Lindsay as the mother.
These two kids are nothing more than pawns in their parents games because no adult is really paying attention or putting a stop to Michael and Lindsay's behavior.
Instead of taking care of the two she had Lindsay is trying to prove that she can be a better parent to Brian and Justin's kids, how can she do that when she can't even remove her head from her own Ass?
FOR THE LAST TIME, BRIAN DOESN'T WANT YOU! YOU'RE NOT HIS WIFE, LOVER, PARTNER or TRICK! GROW UP ALREADY!!!
Lindsay can't be bothered to drop off or pick up her kids on time so how is she going to manage two opinionated twins?
I have a feeling that even with the threat of losing their partners and their kids Michael and Lindsay will continue to act like children.
Ben and Mel need to decide what is more important placating Michael and Lindsay or walking away from the madness, what they don't want to admit is that their marriages is a one sided love, Michael and Lindsay don't love Ben or Mel they just love the control they think they have over Brian and Justin.
Everyone else has grown up and moved on with their lives while Michael and Lindsay are stuck in the past and they aren't looking to change that anytime soon.
Can't wait to see how Brian and Justin are going to react to Lindsay sleeping on their doorstep, or Mel getting called from the school about the kids?
[Report This]Date: Aug 03, 2016 1:12 am Title: Chapter 6
Brian tells Michael how it is and he still doesn't have a clue. Love Jen's description of Mikey. Had to chuckle at Justin's response.
Date: Aug 03, 2016 12:47 am Title: Chapter 6
The PITA brigade is in FULL swing!!! It looks like Michael's dumbass is not even concerned about his marriage or is thinks that Ben is bluffing. His ears turn off when he doesn't want to hear what is being said. Brian should just cut him out of his life. It's TIME!!
And I thought Michael was neglectful but Lindsay takes the CAKE!!! I'm glad that Justin is not at home. Too bad they don't have the electrified fence, security and guard dogs! That bitch is a stalker!!! They should have her arrested. Although I think the school will probably take care of that since I'm sure that her nap is going to cause her to be late picking the kids up AGAIN! Mel really needs to trade her in for a new model- one that can keep a job and be responsible; a REAL partner instead of a lazy, invasive trick who just wants to play house.
SMH....I am soooooo looking forward to the next chapter!!!
HUGS,
~Nichelle
P.S. In regards to your last comment: Great Minds think alike! I'm sure Wonder Whore is probably going to make an appearance when she meets Reed....LOL