Reviewer: cakdg Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 18, 2016 4:53 am Title: Chapter 10

I didn't realize that E was tasteless. I was wondering why Ben went with it willingly.  Wow, I think he has every reason to be royally pissed -- the potential risk to his health, not to mention his job, Mikey's lies, attitude regarding JR, and Mikey is more concerned about having to face Mel!  I'm glad Ben didn't let this slide.  I hope this is the wake up call required to get Michael out of his life. It could only be to his benefit.

Michael's been rooting through the loft and B/J don't know?   Ewwww.

Lol, Lindsay keeps showing clearly why she couldn't effectively manage the gallery, the poor dear.Lovely how Brian is taking care of Deb and Carl. How wonderful that they are going to Hawaii.

That was a good conversation between Justin and Mel.  If all Lindsay can talk about in their counseling sessions is Justin's career, I think the marriage is a partnership of one.  I mean, how do you work with that?  Actually, I'm kind of surprised that the counselor isn't recommending a different type of therapy for Lindsay...

Loved the Yoda comments!

Michael called Ben a drama queen? That's adding insult to injury. 

Justin strikes again with the perfect response to Michael. Lol.

Great chapter!

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 05, 2016 5:04 pm Title: Chapter 10

I'd like to know if ther eare any ulterior motivations by Linds and Michael, or is it really just as they appear? Lindsey is tranfixed on furthering Justin's career, but is it just because she never made it or is it because she wants Justin away from Brian? I know she's has this idea that she's best equipped to look after his carreer (BAHAHAHA) but is that her only thought? Does she still want Brian to herself?

Brian is right in that Mel needs to shit or get off the pot. No more trying...just end it already. Lindsey isn't going to be who she wants as a partner. that's been proven over and over. She stated that she knows it's not about Brian, but about justin. I waonder if Lindsey is maniplative enough that she can fool Mel into thinking that. Perhaps I'm just looking too much into it. lol

Michael michael Michael......what he doesn't get is that this investigator more than likely saw he adn Ben at the bar. Saw their behavior etc. Michael has so severly screwed himself, but his ego adn pride won't have him back down. (thankfully cause I really want to see him burn!! lol) Ben has every right to be really pissed off! Glad he left! I wonder how he's going to be with the lawyers. He really can't be foolish enough to stand by Michael, even if guilted into it. Stand stron Ben!! Stand strong. Michael needs to see that nobody is going to stand by him. He's been given plenty of opportunities to change his behaviour adn attitude, but he thinks nothing is wrong. that's he's just fine in his actions adn attitude. Real life is going to come as a shocker and he realizes that he can't fit the storyline to his own ideals. This ain't no comic book story!

and WTF was he doing in the loft? that's just........yeesh! Brian is going to freak out when he finds out!! and he will as the investigator will more than likely inform him. While I know he's been yelled at numerous times, I'm wondering when any of it will really compute.

Cheers,

Elaine

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 05, 2016 1:04 am Title: Chapter 10

I agree with Brian Mel shouldn't think about getting out of her marriage she should just do it, Lindsay won't care because she is too busy chasing Justin and trying to micro manage Justin's career.

It is time that she put what is best for the kids and herself first and leave Lindsay to fall on her face.

I also agree that they all need to stop trying to put a band aid on the cracks happening in the Liberty Family just to keep the fake peace, ignoring the problem doesn't make it go away it just makes it worse.

So The Donkey has been spending his time at the loft instead of selling some comic books or spending time with his daughter...WHAT AN ASS!!!

It is a shame that a five year old has more maturity than her father, stepfather, and stepmother. *Shakes Head Sadly*

I thought Ben was smart but when it comes to Michael he is an idiot with the same level of maturity as Michael, he lets his husband act like a child then is surprised that unless it effects Michael he doesn't care. GET A CLUE BEN...HELL GETT SEVERAL!

I bet the investigator knows about that and a lot of other stuff too can't wait for the reveal in court Brian and Justin are going to be so pissed!!

So we now know that while Lindsay was working at the gallery all she did was sit on her fat Ass reading the paper, and now she is upset that the gallery might actually turn a profit? IS SHE TRIPPING?!

I wonder if Mel's investigator is also following Lindsay too?

I get the feeling this person us about to earn every cent they are being paid if they are following Lindsay.

This is one reviting story that I can't get enough of :)

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 05, 2016 12:15 am Title: Chapter 10

Justin is a firecracker!!! God, I just LOVE him! I wonder what he and Brian are going to do when they find out that Michael has been spending his mornings snooping around the loft and napping. Might I suggest they make good use of that picture I left at the end of Chapter 7's review, LOL!

Ben really needs to leave his trifling ass. I mean come on! How many more ways can Michael show him that he's a worthless, sniveling, conniving, inconsiderate prick?? Slipping a drug into Ben's mouth without thought to his health or career was just soooooo beyond standard asshole-ish behavior. And then to blow off Ben's concerns like they were insignificant was the epitome of the standard Michael Novotny operating procedure- if it doesn't concern him directly, it's unimportant. Mel needs to stick it to him in court and Ben needs to leave his trifling ass alone.

And now we turn to Captain Pain in the Ass and her latest antics... yep she is like a Stage Mom but like many celebrities, Justin needs to ditch the bitch. I'm still wondering exactly how she figures that his career is any of her business. He has been successful thus far and wonder of all wonders, other than her initial manipulation for Justin to go to New York, he has done WELL leaving that Ditz in the Dust. Brian needs to have custody of Gus and then Lindsay needs to be kicked out of their lives too. This is one of those instances where trying to keep peace within the family by ignoring the churlish and childish behavior for a long time is actually causing it to implode (yep...that's a theme I'm writing about in a few fics at the moment, LOL).

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle