Reviewer: cakdg Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 18, 2016 6:51 am Title: Chapter 12

That whole conversation between B&J about the Oreos and the girls was made of win. And Brian's delivery of more cookies made me love Brian too.

I wonder if Michael will get arrested for violating the restraining order before or after the custody hearing?

I think I feel rather sorry for Michael's lawyer...no, not really.  The hearing should be a slam dunk for Mel.

I, too, wonder why Ben stayed so long, but now he can get on with the rest of his life and move forward.

I don't think Lindsay is just a budding stalker anymore, not with the internal monologue she just had in her head. 

Gus' perspective on Lindsay's visits as being drive by or like a drive thru is spot on, if a little sad.  Although truthfully, the less time he spends around her the better.

Great chapter!

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 06, 2016 4:22 am Title: Chapter 12

Michael's lawyer is going to be so pissed when he finds out Michael decided not to mention the arrest and restraining order *LMAO*

Michael is such a dim bulb that he insults all the other dim bulbs in the world, he honestly believes that he has a chance at getting custody of Jenny Rebecca (only in his comic universe could that happen), the man barely spends time with his daughter, dumps her on other people so he can chase Brian, has never paid child support and is basically a Drop-in Dad...Yeah Father Of The Year Ladies and Gentlemen!

I so want him to get smacked down in court because he isn't even taking this seriously, the dumbass hasn't done one thing the lawyer asked him to, he will have no one on his side when they go to court and soon he will have no financial support to help him either, Ben has finally woken up from his stupor and took off the rose colored glasses this put himself first for a change instead of Michael.

I think Michael just might go fetal or I at least hope he does, but I doubt he will gotta hear more whining from the Biggest Baby In The World!! (Everyone is going to to need super strength earplugs lol)

Now on to Lindsay she is so self absorbed that I am surprised she can get up without putting on her diamond tiara and congratulating for every second of Justin's success.

She honestly thinks Justin would want some pathetic hanger-oner riding his coattails and basing in his success, Lindsay wasn't good enough to be an artist so she wants to be the woman behind the man, or better yet she wants to be the woman beside the man eewwwwwww *Shutters* Justin wouldn't touch those old cobwebs between her legs with a hundred foot pole lol

I want to see Justin go off on her so badly it would just make my day or night so much, her self righteous assumptions that she knows what is best for Justin's career is so sad.

Mel needs to kick Lindsay to the curb she has played at being a lesbian long enough and Mel has played at thinking she is in love with Lindsay long enough aswell.

It is time to put the marriage out of its misery once and for all.

 

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 06, 2016 2:53 am Title: Chapter 12

We now join Fantasy Busting Day already in progress...

First, I'm happy that Ben wised up and realizes that Michael is a lost cause. I often wonder what the hell he ever saw in Michael.... That is something I really have to explore on my own but I digress. Needless to say that Michael will NOT be a happy PITA when he finds out that not only is his best friend through with him but his husband too.

Secondly, Lindsay....Captain Pain in the Ass is REALLY in need of medication!! Raised WASP or not, what on earth is making her believe that her simpering, spurious and snotty ass would fit in with the people Justin is meeting? Justin's career is soaring for three reasons: 1) He's talented, 2) He's driven and 3) He has more charisma in his pinkie nail than Lindsay has in her entire body. There is no damn way someone who is as counterfeit as Lindsay could make a favorable and lasting impression enough to build a lucrative career. <singing in my Steve Tyler voice from the Skittles commercial> Dream On! Dream On! DREAM ONNNNNNNN!!! Better yet Bitch, WAKE UP!!

Looking forward to MORE!

Write ON!!~Nichelle