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Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 07, 2020 9:33 pm Title: Chapter 2: Let's Finish This

great story



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Deb

Reviewer: Frosty70 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 19, 2019 1:19 pm Title: Chapter 2: Let's Finish This

Forgot about the 3 way phone convos.

Author's Response:

LOL! Yeah those were always fun to watch.

Deb

Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 30, 2018 5:44 am Title: Chapter 2: Let's Finish This

Very good story... I'm glad you wrote one of your own Plot Bunnies.  I read another story where Michel had hired a hooker who looked like Brian, and they were meeting up at the loft when Brian was out-of-town, and on Wednesday mornings, when Kinnetik had their standard weekly meeting.  Brian arranged video cameras in the loft to catch Michael.  Anyway, is there anyway to find out if an author has written a Plot Bunny story?  For your #5 Bunny, NoChaser made a comment that she wrote stories for #2 and #13... I looked through her stories, but couldn't figure out which ones they were. I wrote her a personal message, but received no response...

Thanks much, Cathy



Author's Response:

Thanks, Cathy! I'm glad you liked this. I have written a few of my bunnies, this one, The Less the Merrier, Surprise and a couple others as well. Sometimes it just takes me a while to figure out how I can work a bunny into a fic. But I really enjoy reading other's fics based on bunnies I've posted.

I read the one you mentioned, too, and really enjoyed it. I can't think of the name of it right now.

Not all the plot bunnies are mine. The ones that NoChaser commented on are from another member. Usually the author will mention in the Story Notes section or Summary that the fic is based on a plot bunny from (insert name here). I don't think I've read all of NoChaser's fics yet but there is a good chance that the ones mentioned are within a story or maybe the stories just haven't been posted yet.

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Deb

Reviewer: sandid Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 05, 2018 6:03 pm Title: Chapter 2: Let's Finish This

At last, Michael seeks help....good story.  Thanks



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Deb

Reviewer: Azabeth Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 27, 2017 6:59 pm Title: Chapter 2: Let's Finish This

I must have read this story half a dozen times already- truly a little piece of perfection... that punch and everyone’s reactions was so satisfying :)



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! I found it very satisfying when writing it! LOL! Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Deb

Reviewer: Calliesky Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 13, 2017 8:56 pm Title: Chapter 2: Let's Finish This

Finally Michaels true colors are seen by all. His selfish mindset out in the open. But I’m not sure the counseling will work ... will see 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed it. I always hoped that the true personality of Michael would be seen by the others in the series, but alas that didn't happen. At least we can do so in our fics. Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Deb

Reviewer: starlight Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 25, 2016 3:38 am Title: Chapter 2: Let's Finish This

I love this story. Well I like all of your stories, but this one made me cringe and laugh at the same time.



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it and all my stories and that you could laugh and cringe at the same time! :)

Thanks for the review!

Deb

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 22, 2016 7:38 pm Title: Chapter 2: Let's Finish This

Deb didn't take too much time to see her son was at fault.

I would have had the same reaction as Justin and Brian: I couldn't be able to go back where Michael has spent too much time naked and doing what very few people would want to imagine. Eww...

Emmett is really great in this story.



Author's Response:

I think it would have taken Deb a lot longer to believe Michael was at fault if it hadn't been for Emmett and Ted confirming what happened.

I know I wouldn't be able to go back in either! To be honest, every time they showed Michael naked on the show I closed my eyes!

I always loved Emmett and felt he was actually a very strong person; one who would stand up not only for himself but for others as well. Michael never really did that unless he was going to benefit in some way.

Thanks for the review and I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Deb

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 21, 2016 3:48 pm Title: Chapter 2: Let's Finish This

I am so glad that Emmett knew better then to try and excuse Mikey.  You gave us a perfect ending.  If you ever want to expand your epilogue I'd certainly enjoy reading it.



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it! I figured once Emmett and Ted saw Michael's manipulations in the works that neither of them would defend Michael. I always believed a lot of their impressions of Brian came from Michael's comments and manipulations at playing the best friend martyr.

*You gave us a perfect ending.* Another wonderful compliment! Thank you!

Again, I'm glad you enjoyed it and thank you for the great review!

Deb

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 21, 2016 12:15 pm Title: Chapter 2: Let's Finish This

This was good... I wish it had been a bit longer... but I still enjoyed it quite a bit :) 



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the review!

Deb

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