Date: Jan 09, 2017 6:41 am Title: Chapter 1
I like this. I don't think I have read a story with Ben as the bad guy before.
[Report This]Date: Sep 19, 2016 2:00 am Title: Chapter 1
I have been meaning to read this story for a while and I just started it today. Very excited tp see what you have planned for it.
Date: Sep 07, 2016 4:50 am Title: Chapter 1
One of my guilty pleasure, Mpreg. Loved the story. I'm sure gonna check the next story out. Loved the fast update, too. Thanks!
Nadine
[Report This]Date: Sep 05, 2016 3:19 am Title: Chapter 1
I miss one day of reading and all this exciting stuff happens ;)
So Happy that Brian was there to see his daughter come into the world I just love the name Riley, it is just too cute, everyone is just going to love trying to spoil these three babies.
That receptionist is such an idiot and now because she did not verify with either Cynthia or Ted she is out of a job, can't pity stupidity.
I would like to know who started that stupid bet so I can kick their asses, don't want Brian to scuff his Prada lol
Thank Goodness Michael isn't pregnant and my guess was right he is getting fat because he is a lazy bum, I wonder if David has kicked him out yet or is he still trying to figure out what he saw in Michael? (Definitely Not A Cute Puppy Anymore)
Lindsay and Sam need to keep their little relationship games in Italy, Rome, up their asses just stay out of Pittsburgh, though if she came back to try to get Mel I would love for Leda to break her like a pretzel then turn around and put the hurt on Sam.
Bring On The Next Chapter :)
Date: Sep 03, 2016 9:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hiya,
Girl, your muse must be working overtime. Chapter after chapter hilarious fun and antics that make me crack up time and time again.
Supersperm, two pregnant eating machines, a bigger than life dufus (Mikey), an even dumber blond bitch. All in all one spectacular plot.
I particularly liked the part where Mikey and Eli got their come uppance and were really humiliated in front of their friends and neighbours. They really deserved it.
Can hardly wait for the next update to appear.
XOXO
Soirsa
[Report This]Date: Sep 03, 2016 2:30 am Title: Chapter 1
Justin going to Mass and putting Joan in her place was so funny and what she deserved, Claire is on crack if she thinks Brian would ever pay for her children's education, that isn't his job that is why those two boys have parents who should have thought about their education before they were born.
Brian and Blake sneaking their vices behind their partners back is funny of course what Justin did to Emmett had me rolling, at some point Brian and Ted are going to figure it out but in the meantime they get to enjoy their tuna subs and hohos.
Lindsay still hasn't realized that Brian is not coming to save Wendy anymore, he grew up and left her behind years ago, why is Sam trying to keep Lindsay around I would think he would be happy to get rid of her??
I really hope Michael isn't pregnant because that would just be so wrong, the poor kid might turn out to be like Michael or David *shivers* Ewwww and no child should be a boring, whiny, conceited egotistical snob.
I see David is thinking of kicking his sudo-stepford boyfriend to the curb because Michael is not meeting his expectations...Again
Paul is marrying Eli? GROSS!!!
Can't Wait For The Next Chapter:)
[Report This]Date: Sep 02, 2016 3:39 am Title: Chapter 1
Justin and Satan Kitty in a battle for tuna and Brian Kinney is trying to keep sane lol
At this point Brian might have to start sleeping in the kitchen to keep Justin away from the tuna, I know he is hoping as the pregnancy progresses that Justin develops a craving for pickles or Oreos anything but that damn tuna! lmao
Ted better be more considerate of Blake or he might get kicked in the balls instead of locked out.
So happy that Brian and Justin are having a girl she is going to be so loved and cherished just like Blake and Ted's baby will
Bravo to Justin for telling off Joan and Claire they so deserved to be hit right between the eyes, I would be surprised if this is the last we hear from those two harpies, I would love for Justin to humiliate them in front of everyone at the church. Never Piss Off A Pregnant Sunshine He Will Destroy You!!
It was nice to have a Michael Free chapter, was like a breath of fresh air, too bad it won't last. :(
Date: Sep 01, 2016 3:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hiya,
Ooh, a very promising start to a new story. Justin as a dad, I can so picture this. And with Brian and Justin as his parents it was destined to be a little genius.
Mikey breaking contact with everybody doesn't suprise me in the least, He was always a bit of a snob. Mel and Linds breaking up isn't a surprise either.
Mel is way better of with Leda. Let Lindsey be happy with her Sam. I just hate the idea of her putting Gus through the wringer. I always thought her a bit of a snob as well.
Looking forward to continue reading later on this evening,
XOXO
Soirsa
[Report This]Date: Sep 01, 2016 3:34 am Title: Chapter 1
Brian and Mel made me laugh, they can actually get along when they don't have Lindsay pulling their strings, happy for Blake and Ted they are going to be wonderful parents just as soon as Ted has his nervous breakdown lol
Gus and Jackson are going to make a lot of money being around these crazy people, Hell by the end of the week they will probably have $800.
David is so delusional he should really find it strange that Deb hasn't called to speak to her baby and Michael staying away from Brian is a big red flag that something is not what it seems.
Michael constantly sending emails hoping Brian is missing him too bad he still hasn't realized that crap only works when your a kid it just looks pathetic when your in your thirties.
Michael looking down his nose at David because he has a job and can afford to pay his own bills, that crown must weigh so heavy on his poor abused head cause no one understands him (Must be so hard to lay on your fat ass and do nothing but stuff your face and whine??)
Two pregnant men equals months of interesting moments for Brian and Ted, so looking forward to the chapter when they both have to go out in the middle of the night for those late night cravings.
:)
Date: Sep 01, 2016 3:02 am Title: Chapter 1
P.S. Mel and Brian were just too damn funny!! I really like their dynamic here. They are PARENTS not enemies. I think Lindsay cheating with Sam was the best thing that happened to both of them!! Now only if they can find a way to get rid of their 'other' mutual pest....* fingers crossed*
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Aug 31, 2016 5:00 am Title: Chapter 1
Justin's reaction to Brian's Super Sperm knocking him up for the second time was Hilarious, I knew he would be in shock but I wasn't expecting the yelling.
The way Brian and Justin handled Gus's insecurities thanks to Lindsay's actions was so beautiful to read that I got a little teary-eyed, Lindsay deserves to have her ass kicked for the way she treated Gus, Thankfully Gus has a family who love him completely and have his back.
Ted made me giggle he is so proud to be the one to tell the family this wonderful news, that he is even willing to incur the wrath of Emmett, Daphne and Natalie.
I do wonder how the Gruesome Twosome are going to react when they find out about the baby, I could hope for maturity but I am not in La La Land so this could bring them back in warp speed or cause their heads to explode? (I am so wishing for the latter)
Nichelle Thanks for the Compliment it just made my night :)
Star You have Astounded Me Again :)
Date: Aug 31, 2016 2:06 am Title: Chapter 1
NOTE to ECH aka BlueMyst: Honey you just left the BEST comment to sum up this chapter!!! ROFLMAO! OMG! YOU ROCK!! I sit in awe of you!!
HUGS,
~Nichelle
P.S. Star, GET TO WORK!! LOL
Love ya!
[Report This]Date: Aug 31, 2016 1:00 am Title: Chapter 1
Now surprised Michael has David in his back pocket Michael would settle for a squid just so long as someone is there to clean up his mess and coddle him.
David is settling for the familiar without really looking for someone who wants what he wants, David wants a sophisticated, educated partner who thinks he is wonderful and makes the 'Perfect Little Woman' just in make form, in other words he wants a Stepford Husband.
Stepford Husband Qualifications for Dr. Dave
1. Good Education
2. Perfect Hostess
3. Cute
4. Speaks Only When Spoken Too
5. Always Cheerful, Gracious, Kind, Thoughtful, Considerate
6. Must Be Able to Follow Directions
7. Loves Doing Housework
8. Fantastic Cook
9. Stylish, But Always Willing to Defer to Master...I mean Husband's Taste.
10. Knowledge of World News, Politics, Fashion, Literature, Art, Wine, Travel, Classical Music, Opera, Plays
Basically David wants a male version of Donna Reed, Mrs. Clever, Alice and Claire Huxtable instead what he is getting is a child who whines, throws tantrums, loves comics, has the intelligent span of a flea (Apologize to Fleas), is inconsiderate, lazy, thoughtless, rude, self-absorbed, witless, moronic, inept, predictable, selfish etc. (Writing Michael's qualities just gave me a headache)
Peace from Michael is a Blessing just wondering how long before David regrets waiting for Michael and bringing him back to Oregon??
Brian and Justin are too cute
Can't Wait for the next chapter :)
[Report This]Date: Aug 30, 2016 3:50 am Title: Chapter 1
OMG!!! It went better than I imagine it would!!!
Michael and Eli might want to start running because I do believe their upstanding neighbors might just kill them *roflmao*
I so wanted to see Daphne kick Michael's Ass I do love that girl, she and Natalie are the kind of people I so want in my corner.
Ben walking away from Michael was perfect but what clenched it was Deb walking up to Michael and him thinking after everything he put her through that she would help him and Deb letting him know that the locks have been changed, drops the mic and walks away.
Man I hope they raised a lot of money for A New Start
Can't wait for them all to find out what their money help to raise.
:)
[Report This]Date: Aug 29, 2016 4:54 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow Monty and Eli really are good at sucking up to someone important they were nauseating that I wanted to puke, those three bring a new meaning to kiss ass, I can't wait for the big premiere it sounds like Babylon is going to be full to capacity come Friday.
Natalie took Ben's small act of revenge and has now turned it to a media event that everyone will want to attend and she guaranteed that people will be talking about this for years. *roflmao*
I see Michael got shoved to the kiddies table and wasn't allowed anytime with Brian His Best Friend In The Whole Wide World.
Lindsay actually did the right thing by signing away her rights to Gus until he is old enough to make his own decisions and she is leaving the country to act like somebody in Paris where no one knows what a cow she is, about time she finally realize that she never was going to get Brian and that she needs to stop hurting Gus.
Well Justin is pregnant and Brian, Gus and Jackson are going to love that just as soon as Justin gets over the shock. :)
[Report This]Date: Aug 28, 2016 5:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oooh a Personal Invite to The first showing of Ben's movie I wonder if there will be popcorn?
Brian and Emmett are too cute about YumYum that cat is going to be so spoiled and well loved by everyone.
Brian getting jealous because Simon is paying so much attention to Justin makes me laugh, I always loved when Brian or Justin got jealous cause it always makes the sex hotter, just loved when Justin said "Simon Who?".
Daphne and Natalie have arrived and have more than made their presence known, I am surprised they didn't stick around when Brian and Justin started to get hot and heavy again lol
Jennifer and Anne getting along is not surprising they both can swap stories about what an Ass Craig is, loved Jennifer embracing Gus as her grandson that was just beautiful.
I wonder if Ben invited Melanie, Leda, Ted Blake and Lindsay to the movie premiere too?
You are killing me with this build up to the next chapter and I Love It!;)
[Report This]Date: Aug 28, 2016 4:24 am Title: Chapter 1
Lindsay trying to play doting parent is so laughable she really needs to understand that she has no power here and that Brian is not playing her stupid games anymore, All she cares about is social standing, money and trying to be Mrs. Brian Kinney, I know she won't listen so look forward to see what stupid thing she tries next.
Craig is still as full of himself as ever and he is still a lying, cheating snake who has as much morals as Lindsay, Michael, Monty or Eli lol
Hope Anne makes him suffer cause I doubt he is getting custody of Alex unless Judge Roy is hearing the case and wants to get his Ass glued to a toilet seat.
Oooh the the block party is starting and Ben has a movie he wants the neighbors to see (Glad the kids won't have to be subjected to such grossness, I mean Michael naked gives me nightmares, little kids don't need that *shivers*) I can't wait to read about it just the thought about what is about to be seen has me doing a happy dance and laughing.
I'm Breathless With Anticipation
[Report This]Date: Aug 28, 2016 12:27 am Title: Chapter 1
Ahh YumYum is too stuff to play with his new toys.
Lindsay did something nice for Mel and told the truth about Michael and his total b.s., not surprised she is moving in with Mommy and Daddy, wouldn't it be funny if Sam left Lindsay the car and it was the only thing of value she really had because he already has the house on the market and the locks have been changed with her stuff sent to her parents?? lol
I like Justin's idea of buying Michael and Ben's house and turning it into a half way house and Deb living there, just the thought makes me giggle and it would be so nice to help those pillars of the community help others who are less fortunate.
I wonder what Mel is going to do to Michael when she catches his whiny Ass, bet he will be wishing he was impotent *rofl*
I like Anne she is one smart lady and I think Simon should join this party he seems very interesting (Anybody who dislikes Craig is Okay to me lol).
Brian asking Justin out was so cute I especially like how Anne helped and told Justin she wanted details, I bet she and Emmett are going to love one another they sound like twins separated at birth lol
Can't wait to See what your Wicked Mind comes up with next :)
[Report This]Date: Aug 27, 2016 4:32 am Title: Chapter 1
Brian and Emmett fighting about the car is hilarious and just what I needed before I entered Stupid-Land with the Gruesome Twosome (I swear every time I get a glimpse into their small minds I lose IQ points)
Lindsay decides to crash Sam's car into a pond I hope she gets into trouble for that and that Sam sues her for a huge amount, I also hope there were reporters there to cover the story Mommy and Daddy Peterson will be so proud to read that and see the photos *evil smile*. (I hope all the people who's cars clipped sue her too, can Sam be named in the lawsuit since it was his car?)
Michael looking for Brian, Deb, Ted to give him any sympathy is typical him I just love the fact that they all walked away, glad they are alive but don't have time for stupid, whiny, pathetic losers.
The officers at the scene are going to wish they stayed home because these two are so busy yelling at each other that they aren't going to get a straight story, of course with both of them being so occupied by showing up the other a reporter might get a good story, just need a dictionary to defend stupid lingo lol
Thanks For Another Great Chapter.
I Swear You Slay Me With Your Wicked Mind :)
[Report This]Date: Aug 27, 2016 1:50 am Title: Chapter 1
Brian pouting because he didn't get to wake up next to Justin and got Emmett instead was Hilarious, the text messages later were so cute (Sorry Brian) I really needed to laugh after reading about Michael having *gags* relations with Eli *shudders*.
I so can't wait for this block party it sounds like it is going to be so Awesome and will be talked about for years *roflmao*
Ben has almost redeemed himself in my eyes (Waiting for the video to come out) he is doing the right thing by giving Deb her house back, smart of him to put a camera in their bedroom to catch Whiny and The Two Fakes in their *gags* multiple relations with tricks and toys (I think I am going to be sick!!).
The Proud Models of Stepford Haven are about to go splat and I hope someone is recording it and posts it on YouTube.....Oooh Could the Media Be There? Sounds like everyone's secrets are getting ready to be broadcast.
All those after sex conversations about Minty and there neighbors will look and sound really good with loud speakers, plus a giant screen so everyone doesn't miss a thing.(Some of those kids are about to get quite an education lol).
I can't wait for that chapter to come up, I wish Sam had something like that for Lindsay it will give her just the attention she deserves.(Will Lindsay be at the party I would love to know what Michael said about her on those tapes??)
Ben giving the tapes to Mel is good he has finally realize that Brian is not the root of the problems in his marriage to Michael, Michael is a child pretending to be an adult who loves all attention focused on him and when he doesn't get his way he acts like a three year old throwing a tantrum. (See why he and Lindsay get along two peas in the same attention seeking pod)
Thanks for the chapter I needed the laugh :)
Author's Response:
I like to laugh, it help when I write Michael naked LOL
[Report This]Date: Aug 26, 2016 5:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
Naked Brian and Justin Time, Baked Brian and Justin Time Yeahhhh! *giggles*
I love Justin trying to get the boys to go to bed early so he could get Brian naked it just had me laughing, that scene with the popsicle was so hot but what happened later was incendiary I am surprised the sheets didn't go up in flames. *fans self*
Lindsay getting tossed to the curb by skeevy Sam is not surprising and hilarious I wonder how much he left her?
No surprise if she goes running to Mommy and Daddy when she gets tossed out on her fat ass.
I can't wait for the morning after and when Daphne and Natalie show up, every chapter just gets better and better can't wait for tonight :)
[Report This]Date: Aug 26, 2016 2:34 am Title: Chapter 1
That kiss was so hot Lindsay should have been reduced to ashes after witnessing that! WOwwwwwwwwww *fans self*
Deb brushing off Lindsay was funny, Lindsay also feels like Michael that everyone should be grateful when they toss out a few crumbs and call it being nice or helpful.
You are really building up the tension now that the Gruesome Twosome know there are two kids standing in the way of them getting their hands on Brian's money, attention, affection.
Now we have been introduced to Alex and soon his mother I am actually looking forward to seeing Craig introduced to the story just so all of Justin's success can be rubbed into his face.
I hope Michael does go whining to Monty and Eli it would be fun to see how Justin handles those two fakes.
Bring On Tomorrow Night, I Need a New Chapter ;)
Author's Response:
How about tonight, just wanted to get Brian and Justin nakdd. LOL
[Report This]Date: Aug 25, 2016 4:08 am Title: Chapter 1
Happy Birthday Lorie:)
Now onto my rant about just how pathetic Michael is to actually believe he has any say in what happens to Gus or Brian, He chose Monty and Eli to be his new best friends and tossed his old friends to the curb when they didn't meet the standards of the two Stepford Idiots.
I think Brian should also look into buying Monty and Eli's house they seem to forget as they look down their noses and criticize Brian for not being the being the perfect gay/hetero, that he is very rich and while they give the illusion that they can buy and sell anyone Brian actually has the power to do it.
If I was Brian I would buy their house just to flex my power because Brian would never throw a child out in the street he can put the Fear Of God in Monty and Eli with just a little threat.
Now with Michael and Ben I would put their stuff out in the street for everyone to see and gossip about for days *Evil Laugh*
Lindsay is going to flip her dyed hair when she finds out Justin had a son with Brian and that both boys look alike, perhaps her head will explode? (One Could Only Hope).
This was a very good chapter, can't wait for tomorrow night! :)
Author's Response:
Don't you love ruining Lindsay’s day. I know I do. LOL
[Report This]Date: Aug 24, 2016 12:30 am Title: Chapter 1
Michael is such an idiot that he can think his way out if a wet paper bag when Mel finds out he is not really suing her he us going to wish he was never born!
Lindsay still trying to turn Brian straight? Get Real! Brian already had ya, didn't like it and had to cleanse himself by sleeping with a guy then he just kept on doing it, she is living in Delusional Land because Brian doesn't want to be with her he wants Justin.
I think it is good that Brian and Gus are staying with Justin it gives them a reprieve from the Gruesome Twosome (At least for a little while), I am actually looking forward to Justin's lawyer showing up I want to see what she does to Michael and Lindsay. (Also would like to see Sam, Monty, Eli and Ben get theirs too)
Why would Ben want custody of JR he barely wants to spend time with Michael and a small child would need a lot of supervision??
They are both being spiteful idiots and Mel is going to have help grinding their asses into dog meat!
Introducing Natalie and Daphne to Brian, Gus, Ted, Blake, Emmett, Deb, Melanie, JR, Leda is going to fun perhaps Jennifer and Molly would like to join this party too?
I can't wait to see what the Gruesome Twosome do next?:)
Date: Aug 22, 2016 1:52 am Title: Chapter 1
I just love me a good Mpreg. This one is going on my bookshelf so I don't forget to read it next. Thanks for writing! TAG
Author's Response:
Thank you I hope I don't disappoint the master of Mpreg.