Date: Aug 30, 2016 7:44 am Title: Chapter 18
So glad Brian contacted his lawyer; very smart move!
I hope Brian was able to keep his food down after lunching with Michael.
Poor Mikey. You would think after all the conversation at dinner that he would realize the world doesn’t revolve around him. I was kind of surprised Mikey’s head didn’t explode when Justin mentioned that he and Brian have a son together. LOL! But I’m glad it didn’t because I can’t wait to see what happens at Babylon!
*“Sorry you must just look alike because of your long monogamous marriage.” Brian jokes.* Ha! Classic Brian!
Ohhhhh! Is there a pregnant Justin in the near future? :)
Well, I’ll be…! Lindsay finally does the right thing! But you know, I have to wonder what mad Sam change his mind.
Deb
Date: Aug 30, 2016 7:06 am Title: Chapter 17
These 2 boys are way too cute! Love them playing matchmakers and trying to involve Jen.
*“Emmett don’t make me picture that, I want to be able to keep my food down.” Justin tells him.* I agree with Justin!
Daphne and Natalie’s first meeting Ben is hilarious! I can understand their confusion on how Ben ended up with Mikey. That always confounded me in the series, too!
Poor Deb! I’m not surprised in the least that she had to leave the room. I would have been right there with her.
*“Next time wait until you're not in my driveway.” Mom tells Brian with a smile.* I love Jen!
This is building up nicely!
Deb
Date: Aug 30, 2016 6:48 am Title: Chapter 16
I have to say I love Natalie even more in this chapter! LOL
Poor Brian having to make nice to Mikey! I can really empathize with him!
Hey, Ben’s a really good liar. I wonder how he managed to keep a straight face. LOL
I bet Brian had to throw up after that spiel he gave Mikey on the phone.
Mikey is so gullible!
The anticipation is building nicely!
Deb
Date: Aug 30, 2016 6:25 am Title: Chapter 15
I love Justin reprimanding Brian and Emmett when they seem to encourage Jackson’s experiments. :)
Yay! Jealous Brian! Love how you had him keep himself in control and not throw Simon out the door.
WooHoo! B/J shower sex! Very, very hot!
Damn! Gotta say I love Natalie! And Daphne is great as ever, too! They make one hell of a combination. Look out anyone who gets in their way!
Love Brian wanting to take care of Deb. That is so Brian.
This story is getting sooooo exciting!
Deb
Date: Aug 30, 2016 5:59 am Title: Chapter 14
So proud of Gus for standing up to Lindsay and knowing his dad wouldn’t lie to him like she does. That whole scene with Lindsay, Gus and Brian had me tearing up.
And then Jackson standing up to Craig! These are 2 great kids with amazing fathers!
*“Justin, it isn’t right to raise my grandson around a bunch of deviants.” He just had to say it.
“Why do you think I keep him away from you?” I tell him.* - Way to go, Justin!
Wow! Ben can be devious! Well, both Mikey and Eli deserve it!
Awww! Brian succumbs to the ‘golden arches’ for his boys! :)
Deb
Date: Aug 30, 2016 5:07 am Title: Chapter 13
I love Justin trying to explain to Emmett and Brian that Yum Yum is a girl and then Emmett’s response was perfect – “But we were calling him a good boy.” Well, then the cat must be a boy! That’s perfectly logical, Em! LOL!
I do have to applaud Lindsay for squealing on Michael to Mel. That’s only one good thing she’s done though. Maybe Mikey will learn not to piss off a lesbian, or anyone else for that matter. Ha!
The halfway house is a fantastic idea! Love it!
I’m thinking Craig must have a split personality. He seems to be able to charm women in to a relationship and then flips to the other personality once they’re married. He really needs his head examined!
Certainly loving Anne! And her mother is extremely smart and gives excellent advice!
*“Brian, since I’m Justin’s stepmother, I’m telling you to find a better way to ask my son on a date. I’ll tell Jen if you don’t.” Anne warns Brian.* Ha! Perfect!
*“Justin, as your stepmother I’m ordering you to tell him yes, and give me details.” Anne tells me.* She just won Stepmother of the Year! LOL!
Deb
Date: Aug 30, 2016 4:52 am Title: Chapter 12
The guys with the cat - so adorable.
WOW! I must say, when Lindsay loses her shit, she really loses her shit! LOL!
Ha! Emmett and Brian at the pet store – so much fun! Then after picking up the kids – “I told them both my cat was going designer all the way.” That is so Brian Kinney. :)
Mikey trying to get sympathy because Lindsay tried to kill him – hell he’s lucky she didn’t hold him under the water just so she wouldn’t have to hear him whine!
Loved this chapter, too!
Deb
Date: Aug 30, 2016 4:44 am Title: Chapter 19
This was so good....more soon please. Btw, I think a trip to the doctor is in order for Justin.
Date: Aug 30, 2016 4:30 am Title: Chapter 11
I absolutely love the opening line on this chapter! It’s perfection!
Ha! Brian waking up next to Emmett instead of the ball of fire known as Justin Taylor. That's great!
“…Mr. Crankypants.” Gotta love Emmett!
Now that Ben has pulled his head out of Mikey’s ass he seems to be redeeming himself a bit. Don’t know if it will be enough for everyone yet, but it’s a good start signing Deb's house back over to her.
Eww! Mikey had sex! UGH! Brain bleach, brain bleach!
The texting at the end of the chapter is perfection once again! I’m still laughing! I can see Brian’s expressions with each text, as well as Justin’s confusion when he responds!
Deb
Date: Aug 30, 2016 4:20 am Title: Chapter 10
Ohhhh! Food porn! Yay! Although a bit risky with the kids. LOL! But of course Deb handled that perfectly. And then so did Brian! LOL
Poor Brian; trying to keep up with Justin after 8 yrs of no sex, I’m sure it was very HARD on him. ;)
Wow! Lindsay should have realized that she married the male version of herself… self-absorbed, egotistical, self-centered… when she married Sam. Poor delusional Lindsay. Ha!
Deb
Date: Aug 30, 2016 4:07 am Title: Chapter 19
I LOVE YOU!!!!! OMG!!!! This was HILARIOUS!! That Benny Hill inspired video was completely appropriate for the CLOWNS named Michael and Eli! I could just see their faces as they heard their own voices spewing that venom about their soon-to-be-former mates and neighbors. And though the idea of Michael screwing anything but a lightbulb still disturbs my spirit, I have to say you have more than made me want to read this chapter again! My sides hurt so freaking bad from laughing. Daphne was also funny and I sure enough wanted her to deck the whiny worm. Stepford Fagville will surely be in an uproar for many MANY days to come!
WRITE On, Star!!
Date: Aug 30, 2016 4:02 am Title: Chapter 9
Way to go, Deb! She knows what Lindsay’s up to.
Lindsay and Michael are both so slimy! Ugh!
Awww! I love that Alex wants to get to know Justin! He seems like such a sweetheart. Justin sure is having one hell of a day! :)
Love that Justin and Brian both handled Lindsay with finesse.
Uh-oh! A very horny Justin waiting at home! Look out, Brian! :)
Deb
[Report This]Date: Aug 30, 2016 3:50 am Title: Chapter 1
OMG!!! It went better than I imagine it would!!!
Michael and Eli might want to start running because I do believe their upstanding neighbors might just kill them *roflmao*
I so wanted to see Daphne kick Michael's Ass I do love that girl, she and Natalie are the kind of people I so want in my corner.
Ben walking away from Michael was perfect but what clenched it was Deb walking up to Michael and him thinking after everything he put her through that she would help him and Deb letting him know that the locks have been changed, drops the mic and walks away.
Man I hope they raised a lot of money for A New Start
Can't wait for them all to find out what their money help to raise.
:)
[Report This]Date: Aug 30, 2016 3:40 am Title: Chapter 19
You did yourself proud. The benefit was better than I could have expected. Brian and Justin and the kids are family. Natalie, Daphen and Emmett are included. I'm not sure that Michael caught what's happened. <chuckle>
Date: Aug 29, 2016 7:57 pm Title: Chapter 18
Okay.... So although this will serve as a multi-chapter review, I just have to make this comment! It looks like Brian and Justin will be remembering that FORGOTTEN object from a previous chapter for a long time to come....LOL
That said, it's time to backtrack....
I really love Jackson, Gus and Anne! Jennifer just puts the icing on the cake. I'm glad that Lindsay has come to her senses and gave up on trying to use Gus to befriend Jackson. Both of his Nanas (Anne and Jenn) may have caught criminal charges for whipping her ass if she continued. Two women who could survive and thrive after life with Craig Taylor are not the type of women, Lindsay would want to mess with!
Operation: "SAVE MY BRAIN" is in FULL swing. First Ben was smart to advise Brian and company what he had planned because now he has a team. I LOVE Natalie and her diabolical mind! I can just about imagine the mischief she, Justin and Daphne would get into if they were still teenagers. Incidentally, I laughed so hard when they walked in on Brian and Justin- definitely a classic comedic moment. Add Deb and Em to the mix along with Justin's wicked sense of humor coupled with his impulsiveness and you have written a fabulous scene which will be listed amongst my favorites. Anyway, Justin's entourage consists of Brett Keller? SWEET! They have each made sure that if Ben is going to bow out his marriage gracefully, he will also do it with STYLE!!
Justin and Brian played their audience with the usual Taylor-Kinney flare as Michael looked on fuming. I absolutely loved that all of his intentions (which were FAR from good) are paving his road to HELL and I'm loving the journey. LOL He really thought that Brian was going to be romantically interested in anyone he endorsed? OH HELL NO! Psychotic and delusional much, Mikey?? Wait though.... he's been fantasizing about being Brian and having threesomes with him?? WHAT LMAOOOOOOOO!!! I can't with this fool! ROFLMAO! I just can't!! I'm so glad that Brian has Justin to add some semblence of sanity to Brian's life. With Michael and Lindsay gone off the deep end (even if Lindsay is being pulled back for now), goodness knows Brian needs it!
Speaking of Lindsay....Glad to see that she has endangered Gus multiple times in her quest for being Mrs. Brian Kinney. Perhaps she and Sam will make a real go of it in Paris away from her obsession. Gus' life will definitely be much BETTER for her absence. And now with the smell of bacon (I mean come on BACON?! How tragic!!) upsetting his stomach, I doubt that he will miss his 'mother' at all.
SOOOOOoooooo looking forward to MORE of this!! I especially can't wait for the 'charity' event which will actually be an event to put both Ben and Brian out of their collective misery. Charity begins at Home INDEED! After this is over, I think I will nickname Natalie the "Clean-up Woman!"
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Aug 29, 2016 3:52 pm Title: Chapter 18
So I've finally caught up after the busy weekend and can now review. I guess it will be a few chapters at once, so it will be pretty much an overall thought of it.
Ben is redeeming himself now. I was really thrown at how awful he was, being compicinet intaking Deb's house, even putting it in his name. At least now he's making amends in giving the house back. Teh revenge part is ajust an added bonus. And Can I say I'm really looking forward to reading about that !!
Lindsey. Well. I hae to say I laughed my ass off at your description of some of her antics. I was a bit concerned when she went to the school. I was worried that she was going to do more. Be more manipulative. I guss she was savign that fir Michael. LMAO! OMG.....that was frigging hilarious! Lindsey screaming down the road with Michael. dumping the car...Funny as hell! She was so on with her description of him. Glad she was able to get her shit together finally in the end. Even if she and Sam don't make it, she's done what's best for Gus. She became a mother at the last moment.
I can't even catagorize the other really cause they all seem to be living under the same roof. :) Daphne and Nat are a hoot. They will keep us and them entertained that's for sure. Boy, did they ever paln that benefit quickly! Again, looking forward to it.
B&J....lovely!! They want it, the young'uns want it, Jenn wants it...finalize it already! :) I'm guessing Justin is preggers again?
The cat........YumYum?.O...M...G!! Perfect! that was so funny! I could perfectly envision Brian and Emmett with this little kitten. all descriptions were spit on.
I was going to try to avoid the whole Michael and eli thing.....yish.........brain bleach needed. Michael just can't seem to get anythign right, or anything he wants. He's so delusional that he thinks everythign is going to go they way he plans. One more erason to want to watch his downfall.
Brillaint updates and thank you!!
Elaine
[Report This]Date: Aug 29, 2016 4:54 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow Monty and Eli really are good at sucking up to someone important they were nauseating that I wanted to puke, those three bring a new meaning to kiss ass, I can't wait for the big premiere it sounds like Babylon is going to be full to capacity come Friday.
Natalie took Ben's small act of revenge and has now turned it to a media event that everyone will want to attend and she guaranteed that people will be talking about this for years. *roflmao*
I see Michael got shoved to the kiddies table and wasn't allowed anytime with Brian His Best Friend In The Whole Wide World.
Lindsay actually did the right thing by signing away her rights to Gus until he is old enough to make his own decisions and she is leaving the country to act like somebody in Paris where no one knows what a cow she is, about time she finally realize that she never was going to get Brian and that she needs to stop hurting Gus.
Well Justin is pregnant and Brian, Gus and Jackson are going to love that just as soon as Justin gets over the shock. :)
[Report This]Date: Aug 29, 2016 4:22 am Title: Chapter 18
An amazing chapter. The meal with Mikey and friends went better than I thought it would. Mikey still doesn't have a clue and come Friday, he won't have any friends. LOL. Lindsay actually did a 180 and it looks like she's getting back with Sam. Ok, Justin thinking bacon smells bad can only mean one thing.
[Report This]Date: Aug 29, 2016 12:45 am Title: Chapter 17
Natalie's my kind of girl. She has the best ideas. It wasn't surprising to find out that Gus and Jackson want their dad's to get together. Having Jen help would have been bonus, though it's obvious her help isn't needed. She should still talk to Gus' moms, since they talk about Brian and his Trix. lol.
[Report This]Date: Aug 28, 2016 8:48 pm Title: Chapter 16
Boy, Natalie is on the ball. Mikey's in for a big surprise. So when does this charity event take place? Before or after the dinner Brian is having with Mikey? This story is so much fun and I can't wait for more.
[Report This]Date: Aug 28, 2016 5:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oooh a Personal Invite to The first showing of Ben's movie I wonder if there will be popcorn?
Brian and Emmett are too cute about YumYum that cat is going to be so spoiled and well loved by everyone.
Brian getting jealous because Simon is paying so much attention to Justin makes me laugh, I always loved when Brian or Justin got jealous cause it always makes the sex hotter, just loved when Justin said "Simon Who?".
Daphne and Natalie have arrived and have more than made their presence known, I am surprised they didn't stick around when Brian and Justin started to get hot and heavy again lol
Jennifer and Anne getting along is not surprising they both can swap stories about what an Ass Craig is, loved Jennifer embracing Gus as her grandson that was just beautiful.
I wonder if Ben invited Melanie, Leda, Ted Blake and Lindsay to the movie premiere too?
You are killing me with this build up to the next chapter and I Love It!;)
[Report This]Date: Aug 28, 2016 12:09 pm Title: Chapter 15
It looks like I'm going to end up with a big belly. Oh wait I do have one. lol. I love Brian and Emmett. Their hearts are in the right place. Jackson is the one to watch out for. He gets ideas. Going to stay with Nana along with Gus, what kind of trouble can they get into? Simon says 'Let's go to Babylon'. Brian does not want that. He's very happy when Justin says 'Simon who?' Maybe Emmett can run interferance? Daphne and Natalie already have Emmett and Deb on their side. Now what to do about Deb's house? Bet Ben is calling to invite Brian to his film opening. That's gonna be a hoot.
Date: Aug 28, 2016 10:21 am Title: Chapter 15
Howling in Woolwich - London - at this cliffie! Loving this story another one I start from the beginning when another chapter is posted...subtle hint clang - new chapter posting soon?????????
[Report This]Date: Aug 28, 2016 4:24 am Title: Chapter 1
Lindsay trying to play doting parent is so laughable she really needs to understand that she has no power here and that Brian is not playing her stupid games anymore, All she cares about is social standing, money and trying to be Mrs. Brian Kinney, I know she won't listen so look forward to see what stupid thing she tries next.
Craig is still as full of himself as ever and he is still a lying, cheating snake who has as much morals as Lindsay, Michael, Monty or Eli lol
Hope Anne makes him suffer cause I doubt he is getting custody of Alex unless Judge Roy is hearing the case and wants to get his Ass glued to a toilet seat.
Oooh the the block party is starting and Ben has a movie he wants the neighbors to see (Glad the kids won't have to be subjected to such grossness, I mean Michael naked gives me nightmares, little kids don't need that *shivers*) I can't wait to read about it just the thought about what is about to be seen has me doing a happy dance and laughing.
I'm Breathless With Anticipation
[Report This]Date: Aug 28, 2016 3:40 am Title: Chapter 14
Nice job. Brian told Lindsay off. Justin and Jackson told Craig off. Two for two. Then to top it all off Brian took everyone to McDonalds. The sacrifices a dad makes for his kids. lol.