Date: Aug 28, 2016 3:01 am Title: Chapter 13
Lol....i'm having too much fun reading this.
[Report This]Date: Aug 28, 2016 1:40 am Title: Chapter 13
Thank you for straightening out YumYum's sex. If she were a he he'd be KoKo. Love how Brian slipped out that Justin needed to soundproof 'our' room. He's already moved in. Love Anne. She's perfect. Most enjoyable.
[Report This]Date: Aug 28, 2016 12:27 am Title: Chapter 1
Ahh YumYum is too stuff to play with his new toys.
Lindsay did something nice for Mel and told the truth about Michael and his total b.s., not surprised she is moving in with Mommy and Daddy, wouldn't it be funny if Sam left Lindsay the car and it was the only thing of value she really had because he already has the house on the market and the locks have been changed with her stuff sent to her parents?? lol
I like Justin's idea of buying Michael and Ben's house and turning it into a half way house and Deb living there, just the thought makes me giggle and it would be so nice to help those pillars of the community help others who are less fortunate.
I wonder what Mel is going to do to Michael when she catches his whiny Ass, bet he will be wishing he was impotent *rofl*
I like Anne she is one smart lady and I think Simon should join this party he seems very interesting (Anybody who dislikes Craig is Okay to me lol).
Brian asking Justin out was so cute I especially like how Anne helped and told Justin she wanted details, I bet she and Emmett are going to love one another they sound like twins separated at birth lol
Can't wait to See what your Wicked Mind comes up with next :)
Date: Aug 27, 2016 4:17 pm Title: Chapter 12
The whole YumYum parts were hysterical!
Lindsay and Mikey remind me of the villains in Scooby Doo episodes....lol Although I can understand destroying the car.. But as Ivanna said "Don't get mad get everything" soon she probably should have fpught the prenup and slowed down marriage # 5.
Emmett is too much fun from the robbery to the kitty cat.
Brian and Justin we've got the heat now we need the love... ahh love... Lol
Thanks for writing!
Date: Aug 27, 2016 11:36 am Title: Chapter 12
Crazy train....plain and simple. I can't even with those two.
Date: Aug 27, 2016 10:16 am Title: Chapter 12
I don't want people to die but Michael and Lindsey are driving me nuts!!!
I do hope the Brian and Justin decide to try to have a relationship. It's obvious they still are attracted to each other. Love their little family unit.
Date: Aug 27, 2016 9:58 am Title: Chapter 9
I am loving this story. Michael and Lindsey are pathetic. I hate that Ben is involved too. He was always one of my favorite characters but I'm definitley on this journey with you.
Can't wait for some Britin loving!
Date: Aug 27, 2016 4:57 am Title: Chapter 12
Justin's reaction to Brian and Emmett's antics was hilarious!!! And then ever the PSA announcement, he proceeds to educate the adult children on the inner workings of Yum Yum!!! LOL Poor Kitty to be left at the mercy of those two for hours!
Michael and Lindsay were also hilarious!! Talk about fodder for the idiot mill! Lindsay is psycho but completely sane, which makes her pretty scary. Personally I would have done whatever I could to silence 'Michael's Whine Track' for the rest of my life too. It's amazing and tragic that whenever I read/write anything wth Michael Novotny in it, I hear his voice. Good God!! It STILL makes my ears bleed and is my eternal torment!
I wholeheartedly sanctions Deb's sentiments! 'Glad you didn't die but that's all I am.' The PITA Patrol has some serious explaining to do, especially with Lindsay reenacting the amusement park thrill of Bumper Cars on the way to the water! BITCH and MITCH deserve each other!
Can't wait for more! Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Aug 27, 2016 4:32 am Title: Chapter 1
Brian and Emmett fighting about the car is hilarious and just what I needed before I entered Stupid-Land with the Gruesome Twosome (I swear every time I get a glimpse into their small minds I lose IQ points)
Lindsay decides to crash Sam's car into a pond I hope she gets into trouble for that and that Sam sues her for a huge amount, I also hope there were reporters there to cover the story Mommy and Daddy Peterson will be so proud to read that and see the photos *evil smile*. (I hope all the people who's cars clipped sue her too, can Sam be named in the lawsuit since it was his car?)
Michael looking for Brian, Deb, Ted to give him any sympathy is typical him I just love the fact that they all walked away, glad they are alive but don't have time for stupid, whiny, pathetic losers.
The officers at the scene are going to wish they stayed home because these two are so busy yelling at each other that they aren't going to get a straight story, of course with both of them being so occupied by showing up the other a reporter might get a good story, just need a dictionary to defend stupid lingo lol
Thanks For Another Great Chapter.
I Swear You Slay Me With Your Wicked Mind :)
[Report This]Date: Aug 27, 2016 4:22 am Title: Chapter 12
So much fun. Now Yum Yum is a girl cat right? And yes food always makes me purr. Michael and Lindsay were hilarious. Lindsay just might have a chance if she follows Ben's lead. You write the best stories.
Date: Aug 27, 2016 4:06 am Title: Chapter 12
Hysterical. I cracked up at the antics with the cat.Michael and LIndsay deserve each other.
~Lorie
Date: Aug 27, 2016 4:04 am Title: Chapter 8
Thank you so much for the birthday wishes, and for putting me in the story that was very sweet.
Great chapter
~Lorie
Author's Response:
Thanks for being there anytime I get an idea.
[Report This]Date: Aug 27, 2016 1:50 am Title: Chapter 1
Brian pouting because he didn't get to wake up next to Justin and got Emmett instead was Hilarious, the text messages later were so cute (Sorry Brian) I really needed to laugh after reading about Michael having *gags* relations with Eli *shudders*.
I so can't wait for this block party it sounds like it is going to be so Awesome and will be talked about for years *roflmao*
Ben has almost redeemed himself in my eyes (Waiting for the video to come out) he is doing the right thing by giving Deb her house back, smart of him to put a camera in their bedroom to catch Whiny and The Two Fakes in their *gags* multiple relations with tricks and toys (I think I am going to be sick!!).
The Proud Models of Stepford Haven are about to go splat and I hope someone is recording it and posts it on YouTube.....Oooh Could the Media Be There? Sounds like everyone's secrets are getting ready to be broadcast.
All those after sex conversations about Minty and there neighbors will look and sound really good with loud speakers, plus a giant screen so everyone doesn't miss a thing.(Some of those kids are about to get quite an education lol).
I can't wait for that chapter to come up, I wish Sam had something like that for Lindsay it will give her just the attention she deserves.(Will Lindsay be at the party I would love to know what Michael said about her on those tapes??)
Ben giving the tapes to Mel is good he has finally realize that Brian is not the root of the problems in his marriage to Michael, Michael is a child pretending to be an adult who loves all attention focused on him and when he doesn't get his way he acts like a three year old throwing a tantrum. (See why he and Lindsay get along two peas in the same attention seeking pod)
Thanks for the chapter I needed the laugh :)
Author's Response:
I like to laugh, it help when I write Michael naked LOL
Date: Aug 27, 2016 1:28 am Title: Chapter 11
Brian and Emmett's convo cracked me UP!! That is so like them! Emmett's comments about explaining to the boys that Brian and Justin were exercising will only go so far. Justin may need to soundproof the house ASAP since I doubt last night will put an end to the Sexual Olympics! <smiling so hard my cheeks hurt>
Well, I understand Ben a bit better now. I would be hurt to if my PARTNER was fucking someone else in my bed and then proceeded to tell said trick all our personal business <again EDK, BLECH, UGH!! at the thought that Michael has sex AT ALL! YIKES!>. I don't agree with his all tactics because there are some innocent casualities from the war of the Novotny-Bruckners, but I can definitely understand why he has taken it so far. I'm glad that Blake had a major impact on his conscience in regards to Deb's house. That was the one thing she had; that she worked her ass off for to keep and it should have been returned to her the minute they acquired it. I swear Michael is such a WASTE of sperm!! I'm looking forward to Ben exposing the "paragons of the community" and all its backlash. Hell hath no fury like a woman OR an intelligent GAY BOY scorned which Michael and Eli are about to find out in spades! By the time Michael really looks around, he really won't have a pot to piss in or a window to throw it out of. Lindsay needs to make room for Michael cardboard box along the HO Stroll!
The texting between Brian and Justin was both HOT and adorable! I am glad that Brian remembered the details of their first 'morning after.' YumYum as the cat is simply the BEST!!! YAY! I will look forward to seeing what antics the Taylor-Kinney household gets into with a feline in the mix.
Can't wait for the next chapter! WRITE On, Star!!
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
I avoid sex scene not because I don't like them but I didn't want to screw it up.
Date: Aug 27, 2016 1:23 am Title: Chapter 11
Brian waking up to Emmett? That is just so wrong. Ben has redeemed himself to me by signing over Deb's house to Deb. Just when I thought Michael couldn't sink any lower, he did. Can't wait for everyone to see the video Ben's compiled. If Michael didn't have friends before, he's really going to have none now. Then you started with the text that Justin recieved from Brian and I fell over laughing. Thanks for naming the cat after me. Was there really a cat or is Brian smoking weed? So funnnnny.
Author's Response:
The cat is real poor baby.
Date: Aug 26, 2016 8:30 pm Title: Chapter 10
ROTFLMFAO at Lindsay.....that's what the hell she gets. As for Michael......*blows raspberries *
[Report This]Date: Aug 26, 2016 5:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
Naked Brian and Justin Time, Baked Brian and Justin Time Yeahhhh! *giggles*
I love Justin trying to get the boys to go to bed early so he could get Brian naked it just had me laughing, that scene with the popsicle was so hot but what happened later was incendiary I am surprised the sheets didn't go up in flames. *fans self*
Lindsay getting tossed to the curb by skeevy Sam is not surprising and hilarious I wonder how much he left her?
No surprise if she goes running to Mommy and Daddy when she gets tossed out on her fat ass.
I can't wait for the morning after and when Daphne and Natalie show up, every chapter just gets better and better can't wait for tonight :)
[Report This]Date: Aug 26, 2016 12:02 pm Title: Chapter 10
How can things get any better? Justin finally gets to have fun with Brian. Emmett helps Deb keep the kids occuppied. Lindsay goes crazy and Sam actually does something good and has left her ass. LMAO!
Date: Aug 26, 2016 11:55 am Title: Chapter 10
Loving the story can't wait for more..... 😊
Date: Aug 26, 2016 5:39 am Title: Chapter 10
WOW!!! WOWWWWWWWW!!!!!! What a fabulous chapter! First the food porn was just too damn hysterical. I could just imagine that having to explain the picture it made to those inquisitive young guys they have there! Deb and Brian's reactions were priceless and even more so to Justin eating the popsicle!
The SMUT was HOTTTTTT!!!!!! YES!!!! I think that by the time morning comes, both of them will be well-sated but exhausted and limping with some mighty sore parts. But I also think both will be happy! Emmett is too funny wanting the details but honestly, I can't blame not one bit! Hell I can't wait for the details myself, LOL
Lindsay is getting EXACTLY what she deserves!! YESSSSSSSS!!!!! Now that her money train and live-in dick has fled, what is the bitch to do? I'm glad that Sam will not help her try to ruin Justin. He knows what that would do to his career which is already pretty shaky at best. Somehow I don't think she will actually use the money for its intended purpose and wait...she doesn't have a job either!! Sydney FIRED that ass too! Guess it really goes to show how unattentive Sam really was! Looks like the tripe trollop is on her own but I know that we can't count her out. She'll be doing that HO stroll to HOMELESSNESS! She's already done the Whore dance to Worthlessness according to and by marrying Sam. But Evil never dies; it just reinvents itself. She'll think of some way to make a total and complete ass of herself. This was probably the opportunity Mindless Mikey was waiting for. After all, he is pretty much the ONLY friend she has left, which ain't saying a whole lot about her taste in companions. This is definitely bound to get interesting!
WRITE On, Star!!
~Nichelle
Date: Aug 26, 2016 4:00 am Title: Chapter 9
OMFG!!!!! This chapter was AMAZING! I'm so happy that Deb saw clear through Lindsay's attempt at manipulation! That shows growth since she has now realized that just because one had a baby, doesn't mean they're a real Mother....well Lindsay is but she's the kind with an extremely strong expletive behind it.
As far as Michael goes: Well I can't say that I am surprised that he will continue to try to 'help' Brian even though he has been told in no uncertain terms that Brian does NOT want to bother with the likes of him. Now he has told Lindsay that Brian has another son which means true mayhem is about to ensue. <in my announcer from the American Gladiators voice> Restraining orders readyyyyy? Can of Whoop Ass readyyyyy? SET IT OFF!!!
So Justin has a little brother, eh? I think provided that the mother is as open-minded as Jennifer, that could be a relationship worth building if she leaves Cunty Craig. I wonder if Craig knows just how successful Justin is and that his plan to humiliate Justin didn't work? That is a confrontation waiting to happen but not before all the others are in full swing, I suppose.
Which brings me to the Justin- Brian- Lindsay triangle! MY OH MY when Lindsay finds out that Cole and JJ are the same people as Justin Taylor, she is going to really flip out especially considering his parting shot to her. Both of their comments to her were CLASSIC and had me chuckling for real. I couldn't even fathom how she was calling Brian a whore when she's the one offering her box to anyone with or without something swinging between their legs. If ever there was a skanky skeezer it is Lindsay! Brian and Justin's kiss set my eyeballs on FIRE just reading that! I'm glad they are both of a mind to put the boys to bed and finish what was started 8 years prior. That said, I know they have an uphill battle and nothing worth having comes easy especially with the folks who will make trouble- or try to at any rate. It will be interesting to watch how they handle all of that while getting to know each other past the physical connection.
Looking forward to much more of this!!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
Poor Lorie, this story has so much I have to write, she’ll never see the end. Thank you for all the encouragement.
[Report This]Date: Aug 26, 2016 2:45 am Title: Chapter 9
My, my, my. Lindsay actually thought she could get Deb on her side. Mikey tried to get Lindsay to help him, but all the talk about Cole or Justin Taylor has her confused. But what's new. Interesting to learn that Craig had another son, who also goes to St. James. Alex sounds like a good guy. He makes an excellant addition to this story.
Author's Response:
I usually leave Craig out but it was time to mess with him.
[Report This]Date: Aug 26, 2016 2:34 am Title: Chapter 1
That kiss was so hot Lindsay should have been reduced to ashes after witnessing that! WOwwwwwwwwww *fans self*
Deb brushing off Lindsay was funny, Lindsay also feels like Michael that everyone should be grateful when they toss out a few crumbs and call it being nice or helpful.
You are really building up the tension now that the Gruesome Twosome know there are two kids standing in the way of them getting their hands on Brian's money, attention, affection.
Now we have been introduced to Alex and soon his mother I am actually looking forward to seeing Craig introduced to the story just so all of Justin's success can be rubbed into his face.
I hope Michael does go whining to Monty and Eli it would be fun to see how Justin handles those two fakes.
Bring On Tomorrow Night, I Need a New Chapter ;)
Author's Response:
How about tonight, just wanted to get Brian and Justin nakdd. LOL
Date: Aug 26, 2016 2:17 am Title: Chapter 9
You need to post the next chapter immediately!
Author's Response:
Done, thank you for reading.
Date: Aug 26, 2016 2:05 am Title: Chapter 8
This is an excellent way to say 'Happy Birthday'. Love that... Oh, and please, please, let him by Mikey's house out from under him.
Author's Response:
Brian is going to change the neighborhood. I wanted to thank Lorie for her hard work.