Date: Sep 09, 2016 9:14 pm Title: Chapter 8
Wow, I didn't expect that; Justin's situation is getting more troubled now that he knows Brian intimately and didn't tell the truth.
Brian might explode once he finds out.
Author's Response:
It's time.
Date: Sep 08, 2016 6:19 pm Title: Chapter 7
Justin is in deep sh*t; at least he would have to marry Brian, which could be fun for both of them.
Can't wait to see how you will build that.
Author's Response:
I hope you enjoy the new chapter.
Date: Sep 08, 2016 4:38 pm Title: Chapter 7
Uh...Hello, Can I speak to Jesus? I would like to report some FOOLERY!! LAWD, HAM, TURKEY Could Justin's life be any more messed up right now?! Connor and Ethan/ Patrick need to be dropkicked into HELL! I can't even imagine what Justin is going to do at this point. Connor would be fairly easy to contain with a simple phone call and/or pictures to the right tabloid or person but Ethan is not so simple. The fact that both have a major vendetta against Brian will not work heavily in Justin's favor...unless he comes clean to someone, namely Joan. I think Connor and Ethan underestimate her or her influence and that she'll end up being Justin's secret weapon. I'm sure she will have ulterior motives BUT they will only be for the benefit of her family's wellbeing.
That said, PLEASE write quickly!! The suspense is driving me BONKERS!! LOL
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
LOL. I worked extra hard to get this chapter out before I go to work today. Connor is a egomanic. He isn't easily kicked aside. Ethan on the other hand just wants money. Together they are a mean team. Thanks for commenting.
Date: Sep 08, 2016 2:50 pm Title: Chapter 7
Again....I just can't. It's all becoming too much, I didn’t think that Ethan and Connor would work together to make Justin’s life hell. Justin really is getting a raw deal here, I sure hope that things start to look up soon.
Author's Response:
I'm sorry. It's about to get worse.
Date: Sep 07, 2016 10:39 pm Title: Chapter 6
I can't even.....
Author's Response:
lol
Date: Sep 07, 2016 8:30 pm Title: Chapter 6
I fear Justin is in big big trouble with Connor and maybe also with Michael if Nichelle's theory is correct. Not to mention Patrick.
Author's Response:
Yes, she was right.
[Report This]Date: Sep 07, 2016 2:54 pm Title: Chapter 6
So the truth may or may not come out. I don't like Connor at all.
Author's Response:
Not very soon though. I don't like him either.
Date: Sep 07, 2016 2:48 pm Title: Chapter 6
Wow what a chapter. Justin won't be able to keep on lying much longer
Author's Response:
Or lying about new things.
Date: Sep 07, 2016 1:14 pm Title: Chapter 6
Poor Justin! So many tangled webs he's weaving! Was Justin the trick David had been caught with? SMH!! And Connor!!!!! OH there is a special place in hell for people like him! I hope that Justin comes clean at least to Joan, Deb, Vic and Daph relatively soon. He's going to need all the HELP that he can get!
Looking forward to MORE!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
And it just got worse. Thank you.
Date: Sep 06, 2016 2:44 pm Title: Chapter 5
i can't wait for more. Debbie seemed to be thrwon at how he kept asking if Brian was gay. im guessing that Ardan knew the truth about his brother and because of that she figured that Justin would know too.
Author's Response:
Yes, Debbie was quite shocked that Brandon/Justin didn't know. It's like the biggest known secret. Like Gomer Pyle.
[Report This]Date: Sep 06, 2016 3:29 am Title: Chapter 5
P this is sooo good, when's the next chapter coming?!
Author's Response:
Thanks, B. Hope you like new chapter.
Date: Sep 05, 2016 5:37 pm Title: Chapter 5
Joan seems really a nice person in your story and if she's on Justin's side, he's quite safe.
Justin has some difficulties to realize that Brian isn't straight. The night out might be very interesting to follow... Can't wait for that.
Author's Response:
Nice Joan, it's like the end of the world. LOL. New chapter Justin learns some truths.
Date: Sep 05, 2016 5:36 pm Title: Chapter 5
OHHHHHhhh please write fast! Things are definitely heating up! Poor Justin, trapped in a lie with a baby. It's all about self-preservation for him and Ciaran. I really wonder if 'Patrick' is who I suspect he is. Whether he is or not, I'm sure that he will somehow make trouble for Justin because of the misconception that he had what Patrick couldn't get. Spoiled ass!!
Joan is surprisingly endearing in this fic! It's a nice change from the harridan we all know her as. Between her, Deb, Vic and Daph, Justin already has an awesome support system and allies that probably won't hesitate to keep his secret until it's time for the big reveal.
I'm looking forward to Justin's interaction with all the guys and his first trip to Babylon. It's genius thinking to get him out of the line of fire while exposing him to something new. Perhaps this will be the perfect opportunity to design a life worth living for himself!
Looking forward to MORE! I'm ENCHANTED!!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
I wrote pretty fast I think. I wanted Joan nice in something, I think all the hell Brian's gone through he can atleast get that in a AU story. LOL. Hope you like the new chapter.
[Report This]Date: Sep 05, 2016 3:53 pm Title: Chapter 5
So Deb is doing her best to hook Justin up with Brian? Can't wait to see what more you have planned.
Author's Response:
So far Deb just wants Brandon/Justin to get out more, not become a hermit. But she'll be on team Brian soon enough.
Date: Sep 05, 2016 12:22 pm Title: Chapter 5
Hmmm.....I think Justin is headed for disaster. It probably would have been better for him to have been honest from the start. But I guess if he had we wouldn’t be treated to all the lovely upcoming drama :)
Author's Response:
Lots of drama coming your way. LOL
[Report This]Date: Sep 03, 2016 7:10 pm Title: Chapter 4
Love what your doing with this. Mrs. Winterbourne was a favoritemovieof mine too. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
I'm so glad. I hope you enjoy the new chapter. I'm having so much fun with this one. Even with the death its not as dark as some of my other ones.
Date: Aug 26, 2016 8:06 pm Title: Chapter 4
Oh Brian doesn't realize his mother's love
Author's Response:
Nope, and he may not like it when she gets to really start meddling.
Date: Aug 26, 2016 7:51 pm Title: Chapter 3
Oh I love Joan
Author's Response:
Me too. If we can have anti normally nice people we can have pro normally mean people.
Date: Aug 26, 2016 7:33 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oh this was the summary if the other movie. Living it.
Author's Response:
Thank you.
Date: Aug 26, 2016 7:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh snap
Author's Response:
LOL
Date: Aug 24, 2016 3:14 am Title: Chapter 4
Wel, I was just wondering how you would connect the dots as regards Justin recovering his memory and all his past with his present and you started doing that. Hope that the white lie doesn't last longer for the sake of Justin, Brian and Ciaran. Good chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you. I was going to end it soon but then I changed my mind. Sorry, a few more chapters of lies. I'm glad you're enjoying the story.
[Report This]Date: Aug 24, 2016 1:04 am Title: Chapter 1
Were you the one in my head a few weeks ago when I was thinking how interesting it would be if Brian and Justin had a Mrs. Winterbourne story? lol
That movie is a favorite of mine and I really like your version of the story so far, I can't wait to see what happens next for Brian and Justin.
Ciaran is such a beautiful name I can understand why Brian would choose it, I like that Joan is doing some match making for Brian it brings a certain charm to the story.:)
Author's Response:
LOL. Great minds and all. I love Mrs. Winterbourne so much. After chapter one it veers way off from the movie because I didn't want it to be predictable. I like the name too. I'm trying to speed up what we all want Justin and Brian TOGETHER.
Date: Aug 23, 2016 11:29 pm Title: Chapter 4
Just read all four chapters and I see quite a bit of angst ahead. I'm just taking a guess here in saying Patrick is actually Ethan and will cause as much trouble as possible if he and Justin are in the same place at the same time.
Author's Response:
i think you may be right on both of those things. I'm so glad you're enjoying the story.
Date: Aug 23, 2016 10:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm already liking this fic! It's tragic what Justin has endured and now with the mistaken identity, who knows what it will lead to next! Brian a closet case and Joan has a heart?? Well stranger things have happened but this premise is no less engaging in this Alternate universe! Perhaps things will progress sooner than later between Brian and Justin with Joan in their corner- even if it's secretly for now. I can definitely see her in cahoots with Vic and Deb later down the line.
As expected, Craig and Chin-Rat Bastard are evil! Something tells me that we haven't seen the last of the former, and latter....well can't nothing good cone from his greedy ass. I wouldn't be surprised of two things: 1)That he is the mysterious 'Patrick' that was just lied on at the table or 2) Ether (I call him that because all of his boring pickup lines in canon were enough to put me to sleep) will try to blackmail Justin with the truth ahould he discover that Justin has taken Brandon's identity.
Definitely interesting twists and turns to be had here and I'm looking forward to the next updates of this and "Be Good to Him."
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're liking it. I know what in the world is going on with Brian and Joan, lol. The question of who Patrick is will be answered in the next chapter. I already wrote it down on my notepad now just have to type it up. After I do that I'm going to work on the next chapter of BGTH, it's mostly written but I pick apart every little bit like twelve times.
[Report This]Date: Aug 23, 2016 9:46 pm Title: Chapter 4
It's interesting to see where everyone shows up in this story. My thinking is Joanie hopes Brian will become attached to Justin because of the baby's name.
Author's Response:
I think you might be right on that.