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Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 09, 2017 2:21 pm Title: Chapter 9

Kaboom! The big reveal!!! Brian and Ben, plus Justin topping...wait for it...Brian! Take that Mikey and go crawl under a rock.

Reviewer: Angelhead Devilbed Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 07, 2017 6:06 am Title: Chapter 9

Thanks for the compliment about my handle, btw! It comes from a line in a Flickerstick song that goes "You could be the angel in my head. You could be the devil in my bed."

Hee hee, Brian with Lilah is too adorable. I'm a total cat person but, unfortunately, can't have any because the hubby is allergic.

Good for Alice in pointing out to Deb that Brian isn't an asshole.

I'm so happy you gave Hunter someone awesome. Matt's exactly what he needed.

Mikey seems to have a problem with deductive reasoning. He says he knows Brian nor Ben have ever bottomed, but he also knows they were together at the white party...

Heh, I have a hard time seeing Dr. Dave as dangerous. A pompous idiot, certainly, but not dangerous.

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 11, 2017 2:34 pm Title: Chapter 9

I knew David was up to no good. I adore Matt. He and Hunter seem to be perfect for each other. 

Reviewer: 7Wildwaysup Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 28, 2016 10:53 pm Title: Chapter 9

Poor little Mikey... Like Brian once said, "Are you jealous because I sleep with Ben, or are you jealous that Ben sleep with me?"

Great chapter ~ Kathleen

Author's Response:

Thank you!  He runs his mouth one time too many on this...happy reading.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 28, 2016 7:17 pm Title: Chapter 9

Brian and salmon and the cat.  As long as Justin isn't jealous.  Now we have Dr Dave back in the picture.  That should prove interesting,

Author's Response:

Ah little Lilah and Justin are fine, she can just control Brian more!

Yep he's on his way...but don't worry about Zee - she has Faal and he's very protective, it's Michael who needs saving but alas...

Reviewer: Sophie'smom Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Sep 28, 2016 7:10 pm Title: Chapter 9

Is Michael blind? There's something going on with Ben and Steve. Michael isn't going to win his "family" back.
He'll probably run into David, who it seems has been using Michael and his money for the stock market. Can't wait to see that blow up in Michael's face.

Still can't believe that Michael is expecting apologies from everyone he's hurt in some way.

Time for Drew to close the pool house. Summer is over.

Author's Response:

Yes Michael is blind, but to the behaviour of the wrong people especially himself!  He thinks David is his white knight...well this white knight has a black heart and the pool house door is starting to close.

Happy reading

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 28, 2016 5:14 pm Title: Chapter 9

Drew is understandably frustrated. Ok...pissed off. Emmett of course is left to smooth things over. Good that he spoke with Michael and tried to get his ass in gear. Called him on "trying" to work things out with Ben. He's right. A proper apology would work wonders. More importantly is realizing how wrong he was and making hismelf accountable. I always taught my daughter that an apology means nothing if you don't at least try to change the behaviour. I'm not sure that's a lesson that Michael ever learned. 

Steve is sweet. I'm glad that he and Ben are beginning a good solid friendship. Steve having Taylor send the card....too adorable. I just hope neither of them get in over their heads too quickly. I don't want to see him burned, especially with Michael involved. I know Michael is going to make every effort to keep Ben around, but I'm really wondering what hsi motivations are. Does he really love Ben or is it the financial stability he gets? I don't trust him as you can tell. :)

Faal and Zee, as usual are wonderful. I am completely in love with these 2. To have the passion and closeness they do after years together....still being in thehoneymoon stage is lovely to see. They still seem to have fun together. So important. They are each other's best friends. The way it should be. They've also done a great job of raising Matt! Good parents! Great kid! Have to say, Matt's "discomfort" was definitely giggle worthy. Good that Hunter was able to open up to Matt. He obviously felt teh weight of it being lifted. A heavy burden to carry for so long. I do think these 2 will be great for each other. Hopefully Michael will learn to keep his mouth shut. Might be too much to hope for mind you.

So Sunday dinner is upon us. Who knew Brian was going to be such a softy with his little Lilah. Loving how you are showing the softer side of him here. she certainly has him trained. ;)

hehehe. Drew is fed up. Mind you, it weems everyone is. The little dumbass just can't seem to keep his mouth shut and keep the little comments to himself. He sure got a dose of reality though. It's time he gets his head into the real world instead of the fantasy it's currently residing in. (and has for the past too many years)

So David is coming into teh picture finally. I was wondering when and how you were going to do that. Insider trading is serious and he sure got off with a slap on teh wrist. so how is he getting around dealing with the $150K that Michael gave him? I'm assuming Michael gave him at least part of it. He must have held some back as he's spending it pretty frivolously. I'm really intrigued with this aspect of teh stroy line. There's definitely something more there esp. between Zee and the good Dr. since he wasn't "stupid" enough to confront her. And what is her hunch?


Anticipating the next few chapters as we hopefully learn more there. As well as seeing Michael continue to be an idiot.



Author's Response:

Elaine, thanks.

Michael is so used to people not expecting him to apologise that being called out now sticks in his craw so he digs his heels in and then digs himself further into the muck and mire.

I do feel sorry for Drew but he loves Emmett and will grind his very expensive teeth for that reason alone.  

Steve and Ben do become very good friends as you can tell he's been firmly integrated in to the family.  Faal and Zee are firm but fair parents and have brought Matt up to be honest and treat people the way they would like to be treated.  I really enjoyed writing the budding romance between Hunter and Matt and don't get me started on the cuteness that is Lilah and her complete control of the Great God Kinney.

Dr David is going to make his presence felt but worry not for Zee, she has Faal after all.

Happy reading.


Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 28, 2016 3:21 pm Title: Chapter 9

I'm loving this more and MORE!! I'm so glad that Hunter was honest with Matt and that they are getting closer. Hunter deserves so much happiness! I'm also liking the fact that Steve and Ben seem to be on the upward mobility to a lasting, meaningful friendship and perhaps a relationship in the works. Lord knows Ben needs to file papers to officially kick Michael's ass out of his life!

As for Drew: Oh how I WISH he would have tossed Michael out after kicking his ass!! That idiot is detrimental for everyone's mental health. Why am I getting the feeling that Michael's 'investiments' are possibly going to land Brian and Justin in hot water? And Cretin Cameron is in the Pitts??!! Holy moly and shit and shinola!! The appearance of David anywhere near the realm of 'the family' is NOT going to bode well for anyone. And they all have Captain PITA to thank for that!

WRITE On, Nicole!!


Author's Response:

Thanks Nichelle.  There is a little surprise in store re Matt, but nothing bad, just showing his honesty towards Hunter.  Steve and Ben will become good friends, very good friends.

I did feel for Drew, he loves Emmett and is only suffering Michael because of that.  Yes Cretin Cameron [I am so stealing that] is back but don't worry Faal will keep his lig safe.

All hell that CC brings comes Michael's way rest assured.


Reviewer: tataniastorm Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 28, 2016 3:06 pm Title: Chapter 9

Yes! I love this chapter. Mikey is going to get a big kiis from Karma. Lol ty for another great chapter.

Author's Response:

Oh yes karma kicks his ass, breaks his tailbone and kics him again!

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 28, 2016 2:18 pm Title: Chapter 9

The best part was the 'Who's a top & who's bottomed' part! Hahahaha Oh Hunter, you are a bold one, I love it! 

I thought Michael already knew about Ben & this an AU fic? When Ben was telling Michael, on the show about it cuz, Jesus, he wanted the freaking details, lol, he told him about being tied up and how Brian had already came but Ben didn' he just kept on going until he did, that was the second time. lol Am I may mistaken?

Anyway...seems like Zee is going to get the scoop on David & Michael soon....hmmm that will be interesting. Clearly Mickey hasn't learned by now...

Author's Response:

No dear Glo, this is not completely AU, hence the lack of tag.  Whilst he did know about Ben & Brian all he knew is that Brian came twice he was never told that that Brian tied him up.  Michael said that Ben tied him up and we got flashbacks of Brian tying up Ben, and in this story they did it twice so maybe slightly AU, hand held up for that, but not methinks enough to warrant tagging.  

With Michael stoopid doesn't come close.

And man you read fast!

Reviewer: Jazzepoet Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 28, 2016 12:01 pm Title: Chapter 9

You awful little tease LOL....more very soon please.

Author's Response:

C10 being busted out...the bunny woke up!

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