Date: Apr 19, 2017 6:30 pm Title: Chapter 16
Brian and Blake exchange: hilarious!
Emmett is such a warm, funny and true friend and Mel is way too patient with Lindsey.
Brian is a fair boss: I loved the way he informed the whole building.
Jenny's and Michael's future: what about Hunter's? Michael has already written him off.
Mel's arrival at the diner!!! Yeah, well done and so deserved! After that, Alice will have to tell what happened. Michael will be in big trouble very soon if everybody has something against him.
The last laugh was the Total Moron! So funny!
[Report This]Date: Apr 07, 2017 9:34 pm Title: Chapter 16
Michael's rudeness knows no bounds. And he still is totally delusional about being the entitled 'best friend.'
Poor Jenny. Go Mel for giving Michael another smack! Unbelievable that he'd then invite himself to use the brownstone!
High-five to Hank for screwing over Mikey!
Date: Jan 12, 2017 6:28 pm Title: Chapter 16
A 12-year old cheated Michael out of money? That's hilarious. But what's up with the pills?
Date: Oct 16, 2016 1:57 pm Title: Chapter 16
I'm getting an error message on Ch 17 and was only able to view it in ePub. So this is a ch 17 review -- spoiler free.
Loved it! Love you!! Can't wait to read more of your work!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks! Am a little happy fanficker!
A few people have said that about the last two chapters, have reported it to admin, hopefully it will be sorted soon.
The Buzz of the Wasp...sequel...will be up soon.
Hope you enjoy that too.
MissMerlot
Date: Oct 15, 2016 1:07 pm Title: Chapter 16
Can't believe I'm actually rooting for David to work things out with his son, but I do hope it works for him lol
Can't wait for Mikey to get his due... loved seeing Mel show up to slap him and was ready to leave after doing just that! haha
Date: Oct 14, 2016 9:57 pm Title: Chapter 16
OMG!!!! I so loved this chapter! Go Nicole!!!! Michael is indeed a Total Moron, LMAO! I'm too elated that everything is crashing down around him. Strangely, I am also glad that David has gotten of 'Mikey's train of Destruction.'
Alice is one tough cookie! I think if Vince hadn't shown up and Michael tried to make himself at home, she would have killed the jackass in his sleep. This way was much better though.
WTG Kinnetik!! Landing a $60 mil account! Cynthia's reaction was priceless. Hell Brian's 'celebration' was also The TOPS in every sense of the word. Poor Justin! He probably is having a tough time walking, sitting and lying down, LOL Ride of his life, INDEED!
Lindsay really needs to get a fucking grip!! Mel needed to also deliver a fist doused in Holy water to that shrew she's married to....UGH! I will not even deny that I not only laughed loud and long at Mel delivery a mind-numbing, sense-inducing SLAP to Michael but I also got up from this here computer and applauded! A retaliation for his mistreatment of Jenny and Hunter well-deserved.
I can't wait until the next chapter!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
I loved writing the "from the way back front and back slap" he got rom Mel. Crashing down on wittle Mikey is an understatement!
I am so glad you loved it!
Hugs
Nicole
[Report This]Date: Oct 14, 2016 9:28 pm Title: Chapter 16
Gosh this was so funny. Justin, Zee and Emmett in one bed? Brian's reaction to getting a 60 million dollar account. And Mikey. Total Moron indeed. David seems to be in the dark about who was investigating him. Mikey is about to be screwed big time. The only sad part was Jenny and Mikey was responsible for that. I hope she never forgives him.
Author's Response:
Thank you. I did feel a bit for Justin after Brian's, um, enthusiastic response! Justin, Zee and Emmett's friendship goes from strength to strength. To say that Michael gets screwed without lube is an understatement. Our little J is a very supportive little sister of our Littlest!
Happy reading.
Nicole