Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 11, 2017 2:42 pm Title: Chapter 10

That was their perfect first time. I think it's absolutely adorable that Hunter went to Brian for advice. 

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 11, 2017 11:31 am Title: Chapter 8

Nope, not getting better until Michael can honestly admit to himself what an ass he is. 

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 11, 2017 10:53 am Title: Chapter 6

Who ordered the food? Michael? But he doesn't even know how to use cutlery properly. Zaden sounds like an amazing woman. 

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 11, 2017 6:41 am Title: Chapter 4

I'm really glad Ben is better. Why wouldn't Michael even try to get them to test for something else? It's like he didn't really care what happens to Ben. Also good for Mel for standing up to Lindsay and Michael like that. 

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 10, 2017 9:30 pm Title: Chapter 2

Michael is just so stupid. Why doesn't anybody ask where all the money went? I guess they will ask soon. I have a feeling that David doesn't have Michaels best interest in mind. 

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 02, 2017 4:49 pm Title: Chapter 1

I finally sat down and read this whole story from start to finish. Great job! I especially like your original characters - that's always a challenge for me personally. Very nice effort for your first story. Thanks for writing! TAG

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 23, 2016 10:32 pm Title: Chapter 4

I was afraid for Ben; I just hope Michael has nothing to do with what happened.

I loved how Mel put Michael and Lindsay in their places.

Author's Response:

No it was just pure bad luck on Ben and Hunter's part...but it gets better, especially for Hunter.

Oh yes the Marcus smackdown was given...and she's passed that trait onto Jenny.

MissMerlot

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 23, 2016 8:06 pm Title: Chapter 2

The scene under the table at Woody's was so fun and hot; Ben is cool in this story as well as Emmett and Hunter.

I love how Brian is with Hunter and how Hunter is with Gus.

I hope Gus and Jenny will continue to share their feelings.

 

Author's Response:

Thanks

MissMerlot

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 17, 2016 4:50 pm Title: Chapter 17

I can't believe this is the end! what and AMAZING job you've doen. YOu left it perfectly and and so looking forward to the sequel.

I couldn't believe when I saw 2 chapters in a row! thrilled to bits!! this will be 4 both chapters.

Glad that justin is ok, adn that he's with Faal and Zee. Between them, Emmett and well, everyone else, he'll be well looked after. lol. He gave everyone quitea a scare.

I had to laugh when Michael thought David leaving was all a bad dream!! HAHAH! Reality sucks in his world. His efforts to get in touch with Brian and Ted were funny too. I mean Alice!?!?! WOW! That was so amazing! Had my pom poms out again cheering. GO ALICE!!

Lindsey is showing her colours once again. Sticking her nose in where it doesn't belong. I couldn't believe when she was flirting wiht Faal! I mean holy shitballs!. she certainly has a rather healthy ego doesn't she? 

Mel is a great mom! she gets to the bottom of things, (once she's in the know that is) she didn't just go off on Hunter or Gus, she got the info and went from there. Straight to the diner apparently. LOL! Oh what I wouldn't do to have seen that! 

Total Moron!! BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Frigging hilarious!!

My heart broke for Jenny. She finally sees her dad for what he truly is. the blinders are off now. While the vindictive bitch in me is thrillled that finally everyone see him for who and what he really is, teh parent in me wants to gather her up and protect her. mind you, she has a ton of family to do that.

I love how close they all are. How these Sunday family days have extended to this now. That when they don't have it it's so greatly missed. 

I'm curious as to where michael's sense of entitlement has come from. I sort of get Lindsey, but not Michael. It's seems like it's entitlement, that bor=n from extreme bitterness. Such unattractive qualities. While I get Lindsey a little bit, I by no means think it's allowable. I mean really...going to Brian's office and thinking she has any kind of input? that whatever Brian makes is "gus's inheritence"?  Then to top it off she seems to think she deserves mention in Justin' speech. Just wanna slap the bitch. Again, Mel putting up with the same thing that Ben has been. I don't get it.

LOVED the proposal!! So very typically Brian to do it off handed like that. I think more realistic tbh. Much more Brian. How they announced it at the party was perfect too. Everyone was shocked and thrilled! nice touch bringing Daphne into it again with the phone! :) 

Michael got his just rewards. Jenny disowning him...while I wasn't surprised, I don't feel sorry for him at all, but I'm curious as to how he's going to react over that in the long term. 

His assumption that thee was something between Justin and Ted finally coming to a head as well was a bit of a "clusterfuck" to use Zee's terms. Brian finally letting him know where tings stand. That it's over. fianlly. what Michael said about jack just proves my point of his level of bitterness. that Lindsey is still trying to defend him is unreal, but I suppose she's looking after herself , not him. she needs a partner in crime.

Well my dear, what a terrific story. I enjoyed it thoroughly and will go now and read the 1st chapter to the sequel. Very excited to see it so quickly. 

thank you for sharing this with us!!

Cheers,

Elaine

 

 

Author's Response:

Elaine, I am so glad you enjoyed it.  Michael in this story gets his sense of entitlement out of his ass quite frankly...as far as he's concerned he provided shelter for Brian when he was being abused and now he's due.  What he's due is a kick upside the head but there you go...and he's still not taking it on board.  Jenny is a little pitbull but of course Michael and Lindsay underestimate her determination and tenacity.  

Lindsay has also made a huge mistake in dissing Zee...because of course she doesn't see her as any threat whatsoever.  After all she's not picked up on the fact that it's Zee's house...and just like Justin she can decide who comes and who goes...!

Hopefully you will enjoy Buzz of the Wasp as much.

Nicole

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 17, 2016 2:39 am Title: Chapter 17

I Love That Line. 

It Takes a Wasp to Kill a Wasp I hope you incorporate it into your story it would be the perfect thing for Jennifer to say right before she faces Lindsay head-on.

I just love this story and the image of Daphne knocking down Michael with just her intellect alone makes me want to laugh.

I see these two women doing the most damage to The Gruesome Twosome and their lame plans.

:)

Author's Response:

Oh yeah that line is definitely going in there and only Jennifer can say that!  Now Daphne's arrival heralds a whole lot of hurt for Michael.

Hope you enjoy the sequel Buzz of the Wasp as much

Nicole

Reviewer: krussell87 Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 16, 2016 1:27 pm Title: Chapter 1

I love this story!!!  I am having trouble getting the last two chapters to load.... Not sure if it's just me.... But I can't wait to see how it ends!!

Author's Response:

I am glad you like it.  

A few people have said that about C16 and C17, have sent an email to admin, hopefully it will be sorted soon.

Nicole

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 15, 2016 1:46 pm Title: Chapter 17

Looking forward to the sequel... and I have a feeling Lindsay can't stay quiet for long.  I'm sure Michael thinks he has more he can do as well!

 

Thank you for this story!

Author's Response:

Thanks Cookiebun,

Of course she can't, she's a WASP and a spoilt one, once she saees something she wants she goes after it, but sadly for her [but great, I hope, for readers] she underestimates a certain someone.  And ding-ding-ding about Michael...

Hope you enjoy The Buzz of the Wasp as much.

Nicole

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 15, 2016 1:07 pm Title: Chapter 16

Can't believe I'm actually rooting for David to work things out with his son, but I do hope it works for him lol

 

Can't wait for Mikey to get his due... loved seeing Mel show up to slap him and was ready to leave after doing just that! haha