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Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 11, 2017 2:34 pm Title: Chapter 9

I knew David was up to no good. I adore Matt. He and Hunter seem to be perfect for each other. 

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 11, 2017 11:31 am Title: Chapter 8

Nope, not getting better until Michael can honestly admit to himself what an ass he is. 

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 11, 2017 11:10 am Title: Chapter 7

I like Matt. He can stay. What the hell is Michaels problem? 

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 11, 2017 10:53 am Title: Chapter 6

Who ordered the food? Michael? But he doesn't even know how to use cutlery properly. Zaden sounds like an amazing woman. 

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 11, 2017 10:26 am Title: Chapter 5

It's good to know that Hunter and Ben are better now. Michael really needs to get in gear if he wants to keep his family. 

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 11, 2017 6:41 am Title: Chapter 4

I'm really glad Ben is better. Why wouldn't Michael even try to get them to test for something else? It's like he didn't really care what happens to Ben. Also good for Mel for standing up to Lindsay and Michael like that. 

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 10, 2017 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 3

Michael is such an ass. I hope he doesn't find a way to come between Brian and Justin. 

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 10, 2017 9:30 pm Title: Chapter 2

Michael is just so stupid. Why doesn't anybody ask where all the money went? I guess they will ask soon. I have a feeling that David doesn't have Michaels best interest in mind. 

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 10, 2017 3:58 pm Title: Chapter 1

From the beginning I had the feeling that Michael was the one who put Jenny up to it. What does he expect? I really like Hunter in this story. 

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 02, 2017 4:49 pm Title: Chapter 1

I finally sat down and read this whole story from start to finish. Great job! I especially like your original characters - that's always a challenge for me personally. Very nice effort for your first story. Thanks for writing! TAG

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 06, 2016 4:25 am Title: Chapter 1

Congrats on winning the Readers' Choice Poll! Way to go! TAG

Author's Response:

Thank you, way beyond chuffed!

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 23, 2016 10:32 pm Title: Chapter 4

I was afraid for Ben; I just hope Michael has nothing to do with what happened.

I loved how Mel put Michael and Lindsay in their places.

Author's Response:

No it was just pure bad luck on Ben and Hunter's part...but it gets better, especially for Hunter.

Oh yes the Marcus smackdown was given...and she's passed that trait onto Jenny.


Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 23, 2016 9:36 pm Title: Chapter 3

What a disaster of a Thanksgiving! So well written though.

The part in the studio was heartbreaking, hot and tender. They are so good together!

Michael is such a stupid, jealous, mean and dumb guy...

Author's Response:

Thank you.

I have to admit I did wibbble and squirm, in a good way, whilst writing the studio scene.

He is and he doesn't get better.


Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 23, 2016 8:06 pm Title: Chapter 2

The scene under the table at Woody's was so fun and hot; Ben is cool in this story as well as Emmett and Hunter.

I love how Brian is with Hunter and how Hunter is with Gus.

I hope Gus and Jenny will continue to share their feelings.


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Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 23, 2016 6:27 pm Title: Chapter 1

Great beginning with lots of angst from Gus, love from Brian and Justin, mean things from Michael and the girls.

Sounds very promising.

Author's Response:

Dear SNO,

Glad you're reading.  Hang on in there, please it get worse, better, worse and then smackdown!

Happy reading


Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 17, 2016 4:50 pm Title: Chapter 17

I can't believe this is the end! what and AMAZING job you've doen. YOu left it perfectly and and so looking forward to the sequel.

I couldn't believe when I saw 2 chapters in a row! thrilled to bits!! this will be 4 both chapters.

Glad that justin is ok, adn that he's with Faal and Zee. Between them, Emmett and well, everyone else, he'll be well looked after. lol. He gave everyone quitea a scare.

I had to laugh when Michael thought David leaving was all a bad dream!! HAHAH! Reality sucks in his world. His efforts to get in touch with Brian and Ted were funny too. I mean Alice!?!?! WOW! That was so amazing! Had my pom poms out again cheering. GO ALICE!!

Lindsey is showing her colours once again. Sticking her nose in where it doesn't belong. I couldn't believe when she was flirting wiht Faal! I mean holy shitballs!. she certainly has a rather healthy ego doesn't she? 

Mel is a great mom! she gets to the bottom of things, (once she's in the know that is) she didn't just go off on Hunter or Gus, she got the info and went from there. Straight to the diner apparently. LOL! Oh what I wouldn't do to have seen that! 

Total Moron!! BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Frigging hilarious!!

My heart broke for Jenny. She finally sees her dad for what he truly is. the blinders are off now. While the vindictive bitch in me is thrillled that finally everyone see him for who and what he really is, teh parent in me wants to gather her up and protect her. mind you, she has a ton of family to do that.

I love how close they all are. How these Sunday family days have extended to this now. That when they don't have it it's so greatly missed. 

I'm curious as to where michael's sense of entitlement has come from. I sort of get Lindsey, but not Michael. It's seems like it's entitlement, that bor=n from extreme bitterness. Such unattractive qualities. While I get Lindsey a little bit, I by no means think it's allowable. I mean really...going to Brian's office and thinking she has any kind of input? that whatever Brian makes is "gus's inheritence"?  Then to top it off she seems to think she deserves mention in Justin' speech. Just wanna slap the bitch. Again, Mel putting up with the same thing that Ben has been. I don't get it.

LOVED the proposal!! So very typically Brian to do it off handed like that. I think more realistic tbh. Much more Brian. How they announced it at the party was perfect too. Everyone was shocked and thrilled! nice touch bringing Daphne into it again with the phone! :) 

Michael got his just rewards. Jenny disowning him...while I wasn't surprised, I don't feel sorry for him at all, but I'm curious as to how he's going to react over that in the long term. 

His assumption that thee was something between Justin and Ted finally coming to a head as well was a bit of a "clusterfuck" to use Zee's terms. Brian finally letting him know where tings stand. That it's over. fianlly. what Michael said about jack just proves my point of his level of bitterness. that Lindsey is still trying to defend him is unreal, but I suppose she's looking after herself , not him. she needs a partner in crime.

Well my dear, what a terrific story. I enjoyed it thoroughly and will go now and read the 1st chapter to the sequel. Very excited to see it so quickly. 

thank you for sharing this with us!!





Author's Response:

Elaine, I am so glad you enjoyed it.  Michael in this story gets his sense of entitlement out of his ass quite far as he's concerned he provided shelter for Brian when he was being abused and now he's due.  What he's due is a kick upside the head but there you go...and he's still not taking it on board.  Jenny is a little pitbull but of course Michael and Lindsay underestimate her determination and tenacity.  

Lindsay has also made a huge mistake in dissing Zee...because of course she doesn't see her as any threat whatsoever.  After all she's not picked up on the fact that it's Zee's house...and just like Justin she can decide who comes and who goes...!

Hopefully you will enjoy Buzz of the Wasp as much.


Reviewer: April_Danielle Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 17, 2016 4:29 am Title: Chapter 1

I always liked the gang interact with  other characters and for adding Matt's family is just amazing add to the story..and the way our boys acts toward each other,their chemistry just  never gets old..oh i titally enjoyed what character you got Jenny into for not being blindsided by her so-called father..i'm chearing for how you put the whiny brat to his rightful place,but i guess he still didn't get the clue bcoz your having a sequel but i'm looking forward to it..i want to see what he's planning to do to get back with the gang and i think with the help of an obnoxious Lindsay it could be fun watching them in action..Goodluck for the sequel but think you don't need it,you're already a brilliant writer..

Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed it.  Yes indeed Michael is in the Land of Denialsville population him and so to be Lindsey.  

And thanks for the praise of my writing *blushes" first time fic and all!

Happy reading.


Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 17, 2016 2:39 am Title: Chapter 17

I Love That Line. 

It Takes a Wasp to Kill a Wasp I hope you incorporate it into your story it would be the perfect thing for Jennifer to say right before she faces Lindsay head-on.

I just love this story and the image of Daphne knocking down Michael with just her intellect alone makes me want to laugh.

I see these two women doing the most damage to The Gruesome Twosome and their lame plans.


Author's Response:

Oh yeah that line is definitely going in there and only Jennifer can say that!  Now Daphne's arrival heralds a whole lot of hurt for Michael.

Hope you enjoy the sequel Buzz of the Wasp as much


Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 16, 2016 1:57 pm Title: Chapter 16

I'm getting an error message on Ch 17 and was only able to view it in ePub. So this is a ch 17 review -- spoiler free.

Loved it! Love you!! Can't wait to read more of your work!!!

Author's Response:

Thanks!  Am a little happy fanficker!

A few people have said that about the last two chapters, have reported it to admin, hopefully it will be sorted soon.

The Buzz of the Wasp...sequel...will be up soon.

Hope you enjoy that too.


Reviewer: krussell87 Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 16, 2016 1:27 pm Title: Chapter 1

I love this story!!!  I am having trouble getting the last two chapters to load.... Not sure if it's just me.... But I can't wait to see how it ends!!

Author's Response:

I am glad you like it.  

A few people have said that about C16 and C17, have sent an email to admin, hopefully it will be sorted soon.


Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 16, 2016 12:53 pm Title: Chapter 15

Wow, just wow, Michael is gosh I have no pc words for him - he's ugh! 

This story should be a read as a lesson on different relationships (w/a leaning toward G/L) in college English classes or even awareness classes.  The sweet dynamics and interactions are so touching and telling.  Nicely done.

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Hope you enjoy The Buzz of the Wasp as much


Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 15, 2016 1:46 pm Title: Chapter 17

Looking forward to the sequel... and I have a feeling Lindsay can't stay quiet for long.  I'm sure Michael thinks he has more he can do as well!


Thank you for this story!

Author's Response:

Thanks Cookiebun,

Of course she can't, she's a WASP and a spoilt one, once she saees something she wants she goes after it, but sadly for her [but great, I hope, for readers] she underestimates a certain someone.  And ding-ding-ding about Michael...

Hope you enjoy The Buzz of the Wasp as much.


Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 15, 2016 1:25 pm Title: Chapter 17

Wow! Amazing! I still think Michael should have gone to jail. lol Looking forward to the sequel!

Author's Response:

Thanks and I might just do that...if only for one night.

Hope you enjoy The Buzz of the Wasp as much.


Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 15, 2016 1:07 pm Title: Chapter 16

Can't believe I'm actually rooting for David to work things out with his son, but I do hope it works for him lol


Can't wait for Mikey to get his due... loved seeing Mel show up to slap him and was ready to leave after doing just that! haha

Reviewer: 7Wildwaysup Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 15, 2016 1:06 pm Title: Chapter 17

Wow! That was one hell of a smack-down! Brian is finally Justin's muse, his confidant, husband and his forever and ever! Squeals! I loved this fic, and I'm sad to see it coming to an end...

Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen

Author's Response:

Oh my!  Thanks Kathleen!

Yep, Justin finally gets his man where he should get him, to himself!  



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