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Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed

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Date: Jan 28, 2023 11:37 am Title: Chapter 2 ~ The More Things Change the More They Stay the Sameâ€¦

Deb blaming Brian for Michael ruining his relationship with Ben is so shocking.

Deb really is an emotional bully who loves pointing others faults but the moment they start pointing out her own she gets louder and points her fake finger nail at them.

It is easy to point a finger when you ignore you own way is at fault for how your child turned out, blaming Brian for Michael not growing up and facing responsibility is laughing since her way of handling life is avoiding the problems or foisting it on Brian to carry.

Everyone spends way too much time placating Michael instead of forcing him to face his own mistakes, he isn't a child anymore and it way past time he grew up.

Justin wanting to go back to school is a good thing he has too much talent to waste on just a comic book.

Brian and Justin looking for a home that is just them is good for too long the loft has been like Grand Central Station for some people, they need a place that is just them and not for certain members of the family to invade whenever they want.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed

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Date: Jan 28, 2023 11:05 am Title: Chapter 1 ~ The Offer Still Standsâ€¦

Started reading it over again.

Michael acting like a Jealous Housewife?

For Real?

Well color me surprised he has been acting that way since Justin showed up and it hasn't actually stopped.

He us so jealous that Justin was able to do what he couldn't get Brian Siren Kinney to fall in love.

Ben should Gey out now next Michael will never stop pursuing or waiting for Brian to fall in love with him, besides Ben can do much better that Michael and who wants to be a placeholder for a man who still lives for a hand job that will never be completed.

Brian having a nightmare and coming to realize who is really important to him is just the wake up he needed.

Brian finally ready to be with Justin is the best start for both of them.

Reviewer: Gcleft77 Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 20, 2022 4:22 pm Title: Chapter 27 ~ Gorgeous Men and Sandy Beachesâ€¦

Just re-reading. Is this abandoned?

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: May 24, 2021 3:53 am Title: Chapter 27 ~ Gorgeous Men and Sandy Beachesâ€¦

love it. cant wait for next chapter

Reviewer: lizw102 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 04, 2020 5:32 pm Title: Chapter 27 ~ Gorgeous Men and Sandy Beachesâ€¦

Just read this one again and was so in hopes it was finished. Great story and great writing.

Any chance if this one getting finished? Would love to see further punishment of the the idiots (Michael and Lynds).

Would also be great to see Brian and Justin expand the family.

Looking forward to more chapters and a finale.

Liz

Reviewer: nickknack Signed

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Date: May 19, 2020 11:09 am Title: Chapter 27 ~ Gorgeous Men and Sandy Beachesâ€¦

I have taken the opportunity during lockdown to revisit some favourite stories. I love this story but am sad to see it is still incomplete. Any chance this will ever be updated? I would so love to read of more punishment for Michael and Lindsay - justice needs to be served to the full extent of the law with these two morons! So many possibilities await I'm sure :-)

Reviewer: bec2224 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 06, 2018 6:30 am Title: Chapter 22 ~ Please Donâ€™t Judge Meâ€¦

Lindsay would NEVER be around my son again, she was willing to sell him, nope no way. Brian is just asking to have her betray him again.

Author's Response: Lindsay... What can I say, run, run away as fast as you can! Hugs Hon ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star

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Date: Sep 11, 2016 4:24 am Title: Chapter 7 ~ Try A Little Help From My Friendsâ€¦

Deb in some way is to blame for this happening if she had just learned to let Michael grow up, instead of cleaning his messes, then turning around and blaming Brian for everything Michael did then this wouldn't have happened.

She and Michael put conditions on their relationship with Brian and because he was so desperate to loved he allowed them to get away with their whiny behavior, and how does his best friend repay everything Brian has done for him?

He trashes the loft to the point that it isn't even livable and ruins Brian's ring for Justin out of shear spite, jealousy, pettiness and envy, no surprise he actually expects Brian to forgive, forget and bail him out just like always.

Lindsay is another person who is being petty because Justin is getting what she never will from Brian, I am surprised Daphne didn't try to put Lindsay in her place I bet it would have been funny.

Back into the story I go ;)

Author's Response: Yes, Debbie being the overprotective mother, always smothering Michael and making excuses has turned him into a weak, whiny, insecure weasel. Brian was willing to protect Michael in exchange for a safe haven growing up, but like all children he needs to cut the apron strings showing his independence. Michael acting out with his childish jealousy of Justin, will haunt him for years to come. But we all know, he's never been one to think before he acts... Oh I like the idea of a cat fight between Daphne and Lindsay, but it's probably a little late for this fic, but maybe it will work perfectly in 'Just Kiss Me'... Yep, I like that idea... Hugs Sweetheart ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star

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Date: Sep 11, 2016 1:21 am Title: Chapter 4 ~ Sweet Home Chicagoâ€¦

Michael is such an idiot and he is so abusive to Brian when he doesn't get his way, just happy that Brian and Justin got to have some fun away from the drama for a few days.

I would like to see Justin standing up more for Brian not letting Michael and Deb continue to run roughshod so much.

Author's Response: Brian's patience is wearing thin... The look out! Hugs Hon ~ Kathleen