Date: Mar 03, 2017 2:35 am Title: Only you can make the darkness bright
what a set up... GREAT first chapter... seems so not like Justin, I'm sure there is a bigger story, and I can't wait to read it!
Author's Response:
Thanks for all the comments, they are much appreciated:)
Date: Oct 01, 2016 9:45 am Title: Only you can make the darkness bright
Wonderful beginning!
I thought it was Drew coming back. Great surprise!
Author's Response:
Haha, no, it was our sunshine! Thank you:)
Date: Sep 30, 2016 11:39 am Title: Only you can make the darkness bright
Unbelievably emotional ending to a beautiful story. I am lying here after midnight with tears running down my face. Thank you for taking us on this journey of everlasting love with our favourite boys.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked it:)
Date: Sep 29, 2016 6:37 am Title: Only you can make the darkness bright
Follow your heart on your writing. It's the only way it will seem true to you. And I hope you hurry back with the ending. :)
Author's Response:
Hey, thank you so much for the encouragement, I truly appreciate it.
I'll post the last chapter as soon as I received it from my beta. Thanks again:)
Date: Sep 22, 2016 6:17 pm Title: Only you can make the darkness bright
Yeah! Now I'm a happy girl!
I just get so emotionally involved with Brian and Justin, it's unbearable to me to see them hurting...
Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen
Author's Response:
Yay! I'm so glad you're happy!
Thank you:)
Date: Sep 20, 2016 8:02 pm Title: Only you can make the darkness bright
Hi Nadine, no need to apologize. Really. While I'm a bit disappointed I can't imagine what it's like to write fanfic's and it wasn't my intention to make you feel bad! I know this is your first qaf fic and I think you write very well. I am not going to stop reading. I really would like to see how it develops and ultimately ends.
Author's Response:
Hey, that's okay, I understand why you were upset and I take full responsibility for it. Thank you for deciding to stick with it till the end, hope you're going to like it:)
Date: Sep 09, 2016 12:19 am Title: Only you can make the darkness bright
Welcome to KD, Nadine!! And what a welcome it is! This is already shaping up to be a great story and I'm looking forward to the next update. You have done a wonderful job capturing Brian during that period in time and provided us with a realistic possibe outcome of the Brian-Justin-Ethan triangle. Keep up the great work!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I hope you will like it til the end. Hugs you back! N
[Report This]Date: Sep 08, 2016 8:37 pm Title: Only you can make the darkness bright
We've learned what everyone's been up to. Will Brian admit that he cares? I liked how you had Jennifer's past change, it made the story very interesting and unlike anything I remember reading.
Author's Response:
Yeah, I changed just a little bit from canon- I thought it was needed for my future chapters. Thanks for reading, really appreciate it:)
Date: Sep 08, 2016 5:30 pm Title: Only you can make the darkness bright
great build up to a climactic chapter end. While slightly off canon in ways, it still stuck to teh emotions of it. I really liked how you got deeper into Brian's psyche. His inner reflections. The seemed very true to form to me. Very realistic and touched on all the levels of...well mourning really. He's mourning the loss of Justin and has gone thorugh the diefferent levels of the mourning process.
I'm already hooked, so will eagerly anticipate you bringing more to teh table with this one.
cheers,
Elaine
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked it and I hope you will still like it til the end. Thank you:)
Date: Sep 08, 2016 4:39 pm Title: Only you can make the darkness bright
Welcome to Kinnetik Dreams, Nadine! Thanks for posting your story with us! TAG
Author's Response:
Thanks for the warm welcome:)