[Report This]Date: Aug 03, 2023 11:21 am Title: CHAPTER 49: THERE'S SOME HOES IN THIS HOUSE/I'LL BEAT THAT B*TCH WIT' A BAT
Deb choking out Lindsay was worthy of applause but it doesn't absolve het of the her own sins she perpetrated against those she supposedly loved especially Brat who she hurt the most .
Getting Lindsay to out herself was good that audio will be very useful at her trials, but Deb did a lot of stuff to Brian before Lindsay was even a blimp on her radar, just so Michael
could look innocent in her eyes, despite how Spoiled, Selfish, Inconsiderate, Whiny, Stupid, Ignorant, Petulant, Self-Absorbed, Thoughtless, Lazy, Soul-Sucking, Child she raised.
She raised Michael to believe if her whined loud enough and long enough he could get Whatever He Wants or Desires, then when that doesn't work he turns his tear stained face towards Mommy and she becomes an avenging Loud Harpy charging in to save her baby without getting all the facts.
While also blaming Brian for anything that goes wrong even if it is Michael's fault to begin with.
Deb can apologize until the world ends but it doesn't mean anything because she will walk it back if it means saving Michael.
Cause even though Michael had a hand in this mess along with Lindsay, Craig and Joan Deb was still trying to figure out how to get him out while also secretly looking for a way to blame Brian. (That Is Her MO After All!!!!)
[Report This]Date: Jul 20, 2023 7:07 pm Title: CHAPTER 49: THERE'S SOME HOES IN THIS HOUSE/I'LL BEAT THAT B*TCH WIT' A BAT
AHA! I got this one reread. It’s strange how I can remember certain aspects of these stories, and then there’s a HUGE plot, and it will be the one thing I’ve forgotten. But it’s all back now. And I had missed reading the last two chapters, so that was a big positive.
You know, Debbie and Nancy are both characters that can be written either way, and when the story is executed right, both are very believable. Case in point, Before I Let Go vs All In 2. Although you hardly ever see Claire written as a positive, with this story you’ve done a very good and believable job. And the true defining moment was when Brian really looked at her, before asking, How long have you been sober? I wanted to cheer. And when they decide to confront Joan, that united front was very positive.
Debbie… I just loved it when she went in to visit Michael and heard all the scathing remarks coming from him. Good enough. When something like that happens, I would hope that she would realize she has acted that same way when speaking to the others, especially Brian. Can she blame them for not wanting anything to do with Michael, and in turn, her? I was a little surprised she didn’t push Michael for more info when he mentioned Chris Hobbs, and admitting to giving Chris Hobbs some money for… a few things. I would have thought the first thing would’ve been the bashing.
The fact that Deb’s first thought when visiting Lindsay, she curbs her tongue, thinking: I need to light a fire under Edwards’ ass in defending my son. So yeah, still trying to help Michael. But then, Lindsay just had to let everything out. LOL... and maybe Debbie got a little carried away (as far as the law is concerned) but it’s also a very good cause – even if she has to get in a little trouble. I mentally tried adding all of Lindsay and Michael’s sins, but I think I’m falling short. One thing is for certain – I think Lindsay’s case will be worse than Michael’s. (at least he isn’t facing a statutory rape charge.) And just maybe, Lindsay will have a permanent spot with no hair. LOL…
The Little Einstein B name almost brought tears to my eyes. Oh if only Brian had known him from the start of his teen years, his life would have been so much fuller and richer. I’m surprised that John never contacted Joan about Brian. Hopefully, that gets explained. Maybe it’s because of WHO he is, and just WHO Brian is… UGH! PLEASE EXPLAIN! My brain doesn’t have a clue!
Whatever comes next, Joan, Craig, Lindsay, and Michael will deserve any and all punishment. I have to wonder if Joan gave Lindsay some pills, or something, so she could get Brian to sleep with her. And I was so proud of John saying what he did to Joan. I hope she’s spend-thrifty, because when the 10k is gone, there will be no more. Maybe when she ventures out to the liquor store, she’ll become acquainted with a nice big tree. (Lordy, that sounds awful. Shame on me!)
The names: Garrett vs Galveston – after reading it all at one time, I caught how I had mixed those names, what with both starting with GA… LOL… It really doesn’t take much sometimes. ????
I hope all is well in your corner of the world.
Hugs,
Cathy
[Report This]Date: Jan 11, 2023 6:04 am Title: CHAPTER 49: THERE'S SOME HOES IN THIS HOUSE/I'LL BEAT THAT B*TCH WIT' A BAT
Unlike many..I never liked Deb. She’s a bossy, nosy, entitled bitch who thinks everyone owes her to take care of the spoiled whiney weasel she raised as a man child. I think she should get exactly what she deserves. Please, please, please update.
Date: Jul 23, 2020 6:11 am Title: CHAPTER 49: THERE'S SOME HOES IN THIS HOUSE/I'LL BEAT THAT B*TCH WIT' A BAT
did read it again. cant wait for update. Love it. stay safw
Date: May 25, 2020 10:34 am Title: CHAPTER 49: THERE'S SOME HOES IN THIS HOUSE/I'LL BEAT THAT B*TCH WIT' A BAT
Oh dear Deb is always reactionary and it doesn't serve her well. Let's hope she can come back from here and win back some of her family
[Report This]Date: May 22, 2020 10:00 pm Title: CHAPTER 49: THERE'S SOME HOES IN THIS HOUSE/I'LL BEAT THAT B*TCH WIT' A BAT
Read all chapters to get caught up. Wonderful story. Fantstic writing. Hope all is well with you.
[Report This]Date: May 22, 2020 8:18 am Title: CHAPTER 49: THERE'S SOME HOES IN THIS HOUSE/I'LL BEAT THAT B*TCH WIT' A BAT
Debbie is finally seeing the light!
Hilarious how Lindsay reacted when she heard that one baby was Justin's.
[Report This]Date: May 22, 2020 7:36 am Title: CHAPTER 49: THERE'S SOME HOES IN THIS HOUSE/I'LL BEAT THAT B*TCH WIT' A BAT
It seems that Deb finally realizes the crazy acts committed by Lindsay and Michael but I am not sure that she deserves to integrate into the new life of Brian and Justin.
[Report This]Date: May 22, 2020 12:59 am Title: CHAPTER 49: THERE'S SOME HOES IN THIS HOUSE/I'LL BEAT THAT B*TCH WIT' A BAT
Deb's finally learned a lesson. Hope they don't go too hard on her. She'll be a hero in the woman's wing.
[Report This]Date: May 22, 2020 12:08 am Title: CHAPTER 49: THERE'S SOME HOES IN THIS HOUSE/I'LL BEAT THAT B*TCH WIT' A BAT
As much as Deb ticks me off I kinda want to shake her hand for attempting to choke Lindsay out and getting her to admit what she was planning by using Gus and the twins to entrap Brian, though she still isn't off the list of needing her Ass Kicked repeatedly and the line forms to the left.
Deb may be ready to let Michael pay for his actions but she her actions have always spoken louder than her words which is surprising considering her loud she is verbally.
And plus her insistence that everyone forgive and forget Michael's behavior so she can have babysitters always on hand for her whiny baby is not going to be easy to forget.
The ties that bind has already been severed to Joan and Craig a d Deb has hurt too Brian way too many times for it not to be the same with Brian.
And Brian is about to get to know the father he saw as an uncle does he really need Deb anymore?
Thanks For the Update 😃