[Report This]Date: Aug 11, 2019 5:06 am Title: CHAPTER 43: BABY MINE- FOREVER YOUNG Part 2
Well, after a much-needed seven-hour nap... I'm back...
Jennifer Renee and Jordan Raymond... both have the initials J.R. ... intentional, or not? So very happy they included Melanie as the mother to all the babies.
How Debbie thought anyone was going to let 'bygones be bygones' and welcome her with open arms, is beyond me. By them not acknowledging her as a grandparent, that should have told her that her words cut them to the core. The only reason for Brian's existence in her world was to cater to and love Michael. How can she expect to be a grandparent, when she didn't love and accept the way a mother should? And just how much money is Debbie shelling out for Galviston? She should have admitted to herself just what Michael was, and saved herself thousands of dollars! Idiot breeds Idiot. But her thinking they could have cut a deal with Michael, wouldn't have saved him from the state going after him.
I hope they will hand-deliver the DNA results to both Lindsay and Michael. Let them both stew, each for a different reason. I can hear Lindsay's screams, even now, that she provided Justin a son. And Michael's rant when he finds out Lindsay double-crossed him. How funny to think he thought he had the perfect tie to Brian, to learn he never had a chance. Michael just might start singing a different tune.
And did Debbie not catch what Mel said about Brian's actual father?!? I was waiting for a scream of "what are you talking about" from Debbie!
One thing I have to wonder is, the fact that the credit card had Justin's name on it, did Michael not realize that it was actually Brian's? It was, after all, in Brian's loft.
And OMG, wait until Brian finds out about the live video feed in his loft, and exactly how long that has been going. If it was a very long time ago, even before Justin, who even paid for that? And Debbie doesn't even know that yet!
HUGS ~Cathy
[Report This]Date: Feb 17, 2019 8:43 pm Title: CHAPTER 43: BABY MINE- FOREVER YOUNG Part 2
Re-reading the story over again I laughed cause Lindsay is going to blow a gasket when she finds out her parents are very accepting of Melanie, Brian, Justin and everyone else but not her.
And that Ronald, Nancy, Jennifer and Brian's real father will be grandparents to Jennifer Renee Taylor-Kinney, Jordan Raymond Taylor-Kinney and Gus Marcus Taylor-Kinney and Lynette will enjoy being Aunt to them.
Plus how Melanie will enjoy being Mommy to all three kids while Lindsay will be nothing but the incubator for Gus and the donor Little Jenn and Jordan.
Plus Michael's reaction when the finds out that he has no ties to the babies and the money he shelled out went to help Lindsay lol
Deb like Michael expects instant forgiveness for her her cruel behavior and hateful words but right now Brian and Justin are not in the mood to placate het, especially when like Michael she only means I'm sorry until the next crisis involving Michael pops up.
Deb is still trying to figure out out to save Michael while also keeping everyone under her thumb and until she really admits that everything she said and felt towards Brian and Justin is true she can't heal anything.
Her love like Michael's halo is fickle and only serves her and Michael that is why no one is coming to get rescue cause this time Deb has to save herself and she also has to learn that putting Michael's needs and demands above everyone else means that she had to face the consequences not bury her head in the sand.
Date: Jan 16, 2019 12:27 am Title: CHAPTER 43: BABY MINE- FOREVER YOUNG Part 2
Love it. Cant wait for update
Date: Oct 23, 2018 5:12 pm Title: CHAPTER 43: BABY MINE- FOREVER YOUNG Part 2
Yeah!!! They must feel ecstatic! Justin more than Brian who already has a kid. How a bad situation gives them so blinding smiles and knowing how Lindsay is going to be hysterical is the best reward.
Debbie is just too deep into Michael's protection that she can't help herself and has to find more excuses. She really needs to take some hours off and think of what Vic told her.
Date: Oct 23, 2018 4:06 am Title: CHAPTER 43: BABY MINE- FOREVER YOUNG Part 2
This my kind of soon WOOHOO! Yes Debbie finally truly seeing what an evil shit Mikey is and how much she's lost
Date: Oct 23, 2018 3:09 am Title: CHAPTER 43: BABY MINE- FOREVER YOUNG Part 2
So Brian has a girl and Justin has a boy. Instant family. Love that things are clearer as to the parentage of the children and that Craig will not be able to get to them. Should be an interesting continuation of the story with them raising them. ( hint, hint)- I like the perspective of Vic telling the story. Great that Mel is willing to help the guys and be the mom figure.
[Report This]Date: Oct 23, 2018 12:44 am Title: CHAPTER 43: BABY MINE- FOREVER YOUNG Part 2
Yes Brian, Justin and Melanie are going to be Great Parents to The Two Princes and Princess!!
Lindsay is going to be Pissed!!
Then she can get pissed on when they toss her flat Ass to the curb!
Deb like Michael and Lindsay expects everything to be the same but she refuses to earn it just like Michael and Lindsay.
No One is rushing to her side because the hurt she caused is not easily forgiven, she browbeat everyone she could to make Michael happy and that bullying cost her the only family she will ever have.
"Saying I Did It For Michael" is weak and excuses nothing Brian was a fourteen year old abused kid just trying to survive, he wasn't emotionally equipped to be Michael's suedo Father, Brother, Best Friend or Boyfriend.
Deb's actions lead to this because she showed Michael that no matter what you do 'Mommy 'will Fix It', and everyone else learned that same mantra or they were shoved out the door.
Justin was really the only one who didn't immediately bend down to please Michael and that really pissed him off lol
Apart of Deb wants to be free but another part still expects everything to stay the same smh
Deb didn't answer Vic or Brian's questions which just goes to show that she isn't ready to break the chains.
Brian and Justin will figure out a way to raise their kids and still be The Best Most Successful Homosexuals They Can Be!!
After All That's What Family Is For ;)
[Report This]Date: Oct 23, 2018 12:26 am Title: CHAPTER 43: BABY MINE- FOREVER YOUNG Part 2
Jennifer and Jordan what beautiful names. Melanie gets her J.R. after all. Looking forward to reading about Deb's talk with her son.
Date: Oct 23, 2018 12:26 am Title: CHAPTER 43: BABY MINE- FOREVER YOUNG Part 2
Wonderful chapter. Thank you for making the babies belong to Brian & Justin. Fantastic writing.
Date: Oct 22, 2018 11:39 pm Title: CHAPTER 43: BABY MINE- FOREVER YOUNG Part 2
Yay! Justin and Brian are parents of newborns! Lindsay is going to have a fit! So glad they asked Mel to be mom to the twins so that Gus gets to share all his parents with his brand new brother and sister.
I hope Vic's words will sink in with Deb and she won't forget them, but I guess we'll find out when she sees Michael. Looks like she's got a long way to go still, though. *sigh* Gotta wonder if she will ever learn. At least she understands that a lot of the problems were caused by her own actions.
Looking forward to more!
*HUGS*
Deb