Date: Oct 20, 2016 12:24 am Title: Chapter 51
Good luck to David trying to mold Michael into something he would want to align himself with permanently. YIKES!! I think he would have more luck trying to rebuild Frankenstein.
Chris really needs to get a damn grip already! I used to think that he was strictly a closet case but now I'm leaning more towards Bi. Either way though, he's still an asshole!
Date: Oct 11, 2016 8:56 pm Title: Chapter 51
So...David thinks he can help with Michael's issues does he? I think he's in for a rude awakening. Brian is so far ingrained into Michael's life and psyche, that there really isn't much he could possibly do. Will David stick it out and if not, what happens when Michaell doesn't leave like he's supposed to?
There are so many things I've forgotten about that happened in canon, like when David cheated. another interesting turn of events. Rather than Brian & justin catching David, David confesses. Also odd that Justin was able to help Michael in his thoughts. A bit spooky if you ask me. Michael is so up adn down. 1 minute wanting justin dead, the next hugging him, or before, when he offered his mom to help with Jen. Makes you wonder if he has psychiatric problems doesn't it? It's strange....
Ok...things with chris are getting even weirder. and Scarier to be honest! Yanking justin into the men looks suspicious to say the least. why can't he just leave sell enough alone? If he were to really think about it, the more he reacts, the more trouble he could possibly get into. I get he's having personal problems re: his own sexuality, or at least that's what's hinted at. But he's a bit off the charts in his behaviour this time as well as last.
and now Jack is dead. Hard to have any kind of sypathy.
cheers,
Elaine
Date: Oct 10, 2016 7:43 pm Title: Chapter 51
I really enjoy this story- the alternate reality where they both remember but try to make it better this time. This is only teh first season- are you going to rewrite the entire series until Justin leaves?
Author's Response:
I'm still debating how to do that without this becoming too long. Nothing is going to be the same because it changes with how they change. Maybe I'll turn this into a series, and work it from that.
[Report This]Date: Oct 10, 2016 3:53 am Title: Chapter 51
Michael trying to get pity isn't going to work if Emmett has anything to say about it. The Mikey and David show seems to be running it's course. That Michael has to go to Brian to figure out what to do is par for the course. That he still thinks that Brian is the one for him is delusional. Love Ted in all this. That Michael is all buddy buddy with Justin after saying he wished him dead is signs of bipolar. Now we have a problem with Chris. Pulling Justin into a bathroom? Come on, if anything says he's a fellow fag that probably did. Daphne is having too much fun with screwing with Hobbs. Love what you've done with this recycle.
Author's Response:
I always wondered about Chris, I mean what straight guy let's another guy give him a hand job. All the guys I know would have freaked the minute another guy tried, but he didn't until someone could have found out?
[Report This]Date: Oct 10, 2016 2:49 am Title: Chapter 51
Michael running to Brian to fix his problems with David and to finally say the words he has been longing to hear since he was fourteen.
I am surprised he can get up in the morning without calling Brian to find out what he should wear? (Would help him look like an adult instead of questions child pretending to be one), he really is a child who feels everyone should just fix the problem while he plays with his action figures.
Proud of Brian for facing his father's death with Justin by his side instead of Michael, I always felt Justin should have been there cause the kiss in the bowling alley made me cringe and it helped Michael hold on to that myth that he was more important than Justin and that Brian would choose him one day.
I do wonder if Chris will actually stand before the school and speak or will have chicken out like, he also needs to figure out himself maybe this time he will figure it out so everyone can avoid the bashing.
Hope Michael leaves with David even a few months peace is worth the whining if he stays and his constant chasing after Brian.
Another Great Update, Can't Wait To Find Out What Happens Next :)
Author's Response:
I think with the changes Brian would have cringed too. Thanks for your review.
Date: Oct 10, 2016 2:24 am Title: Chapter 51
Wow another chapter...yay. ty so much. Looking forward to more of this great story.