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Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 30, 2016 9:32 pm Title: Chapter 69

Wow...Lindz is seriously delusional. So glad they caught the bombers! 

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 30, 2016 11:27 am Title: Chapter 69

I just love this story.  I know I say it every chapter but it is so true.  I'm so excited to see where their future goes. 

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 30, 2016 2:29 am Title: Chapter 69

YES! I cheered as Mel handed Mitch the paper revoking his rights. Michael would kill a cactus, so I can only imagine how he would screw up a child. His threat of making enough money someday to sue Mel for custody was laughable. The first question that popped into my head was 'Doing what?' I doubt Red Cape makes enough to pay for itself much less provide a substantial income. Hell he's such a mama's boy that Debbie is STILL supporting him! If I was Carl, I would have gotten up and left the room too to keep from knocking the bastard off the chair. Trying to knock sense into Michael would be the equivalent of swimming in lava- absolutely impossible!

As for Lindsay: call me a heartless bitch but I don't feel sorry for the drugged-up idiot at all. She shouldn't have made that deal in the first place. And with Cunty Claire of all people? I think she would have stood a better chance of making a deal with Jack instead and we all know he's burning in hell. 'Why can't I go back to purgatory' indeed!! This is a classic case of reaping what one sows and the 'Three strikes' rule. Lindsay has to pay the piper and it's about time!

Loved the fact that no one was injured because of a bomb this time! All of those hypocritical heretics should receive long prison sentences for conspiring to commit a hate crime. Also loved the fact that Brandon tried for Justin and got shut DOWN! He's not even in Justin or Brian's league, thinking he can play with the King and Crowned Prince of Liberty Avenue. Boy Toy please!! Have several seats and pay attention...SMH!

 

WRITE On Star!

~Nichelle

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 30, 2016 1:37 am Title: Chapter 69

Michael found out he had to actually pay support and couldn't wait to sign his rights away, Mel has nothing to worry about when it comes to Michael cause he will never have the money to support Jenny, he couldn't even support himself.

Glad they were able to prevent the bombing so no one had to die due to others hate.

Lindsay wasted her chance to change her history so this time she has to deal with the consequences, Claire is sending visions of Hell to Lindsay to provoke her to help change her destiny but that will never change.

Deb got out of purgatory she finally admitted that she was wrong so now she and Vic are both out.

Will Lindsay try again?

Will Michael ever get a clue?

 

Reviewer: ConnieMelissa Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 30, 2016 1:14 am Title: Chapter 69

I hate saying this, but poor Lindsay. Michael will never change. I love that it was just some random wacko bombing Babylon. This is a very sweet story. 

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