Date: May 04, 2017 7:52 pm Title: Chapter 12
TalonMotor is back! I don't know how Ted and Brian didn't explode from laughter!
Blake owning the comic book store will be a knife in Michael's heart (and balls as well). The vengeance of the other twink...
Date: Jan 14, 2017 11:20 pm Title: Chapter 12
Michael would have to go to Blake for the store? That's genius. I hope Brian and Justin find what they need to get rid of Lindsay while looking through the papers.
Date: Oct 30, 2016 11:43 pm Title: Chapter 12
Fantastic update, love this verse.
Thanks for sharing.
Author's Response:
Glad you like it.
Happy reading
MissMerlot
[Report This]Date: Oct 30, 2016 7:25 pm Title: Chapter 12
If Lindsay promised Emily sperm so she could have a baby then Lindsay trying to get back into Britin explains so much, she carries the baby for Emily and Brian pays support to Lindsay?
That Sneaky Cow plans to make sure that while Emily gets the baby she gets all the money since Gus will be eighteen soon. (I wonder if Emily paid her?)
I want to know the lawyer who would be stupid enough to go behind Brian's back because they are going to pay.
I can't wait for the look on Michael's face to be wiped off when his broker tells him the stocks aren't worth the paper they were printed on.
How could Michael have no room set up for Jenny when he moved into Shadyside he got his office set up but no bedroom for his daughter???
I am waiting for Lindsay to tell Matt off for disrespecting her home so we can get some Zee and Lindsay action lol (Emmett can bring snacks)
Lindsay still doesn't really know who Zee is yet and it is time she met Zaden the powerful business woman and the tigeress mom.
Can't Wait For More. 2015 is going to be quite interesting for everyone :)
Author's Response:
BlueMyst.
Glad you are still enjoying it. I'm not going to say a word about the Emily/Lindsay/Baby thing for now...wouldn't want to give away spoilers, but can say you are on the money with one thing.
Michael gets his face ground into the dirt in C13 and Zee and Lindsay action starts to heat up bit time from C14, you're right she doesn't know who Zee is. Nor does she realise exactly how protective of her and Faal, Zee's family is...yes we get more new characters!
Happy reading
MissMerlot
Date: Oct 30, 2016 6:22 pm Title: Chapter 12
What a WONDERFUL chapter! Michael is so smug in his supposed victory! I nearly fell out of my chair when Brian and Ted told him that Blake owned the store and all its contents. I can't wait to see how the meeting goes with Michael's broker...LMAOOOOOoooo Not only that but Ben has filed the petition for the divorce! YAY! 99-1 that Michael just tosses the court summons aside and Ben is granted his divorce posthaste without having to give Michael's needy, greedy ass one damn dime. Can't wait for the BIG THUNK at the end of Michael's fall!
As for Trifiling Trick Lindsay: Yeah there is definitely something rotten in the milk in the Emily quarter. I wouldn't doubt that Lindsay promised her Brian or Justin's sperm in order for Emily to have a kid of her own. Or to carry the baby herself. I would have needled her too seeing another set of Lindsay's promises falling through albeit with the help of some disgruntle party guests. I'm glad that Brian, Jusitn and Mel have agreed to take a look at the contract more closely. Lindsay is up to something and they need to know what it is to stop her. I wouldn't have put it passed her to have had some clause added after the original agreement by screwing the lawyer who drew it up. She's that desperate!
Anyway and moving on, I'm glad that Mel is restoring her friendship with Leda. Anyone including Lilth-Satan's wife, would make a much better partner than Lindsay. At least their agenda and motives would be clear cut and transparent. But aside from all that, Leda is just a much better fit than Lindsay. She knows how to call Mel on her shit but that the same time allow Mel to be who she is. I definitely can't wait to see what happens in that quarter. As for Daph and Vince: they are another great fit. Both are down-to-earth and huge supporters of Brian and Justin so there would never be any argument of loyalty there. But aside from that, their interactions are just too damn cute and reminds me of those notes little boys and girls used to pass around in class: Do you like me? Check yes or no....LOL Adorable to say the least!
These are just a few of the moments that made this chapter Loveworthy! Looking forward to so much more!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
Nichelle,
Thanks again for your wonderful words. A moment of Jenny matchmaking and Vince and Daph schmoopiness in C13.
You are so "close" with you Trifling Trick Lindsay comment...seriously have you been reading my mind.
Happy reading and hugs
Nicole
Date: Oct 30, 2016 5:57 pm Title: Chapter 12
I can't wait to find out what Lindsay's end game is ... I want to know what happened with Emily.
Looking forward to Michael finding out about his BIG stock portfolio LOL
Author's Response:
Oh you are going to love the BIG stock portfolio that Michael has...snicker-snicker.
Lindsay and Emily are to come in future chapters...
Hope you stay with me.
Happy reading.
MissMerlot
Date: Oct 30, 2016 5:16 pm Title: Chapter 12
I've been wondering...where exactly will Michael & Lindz be at the end of this fabulous fic? Out in the cold? In mental institutions? In jail? All points are definitely leading to the end of the road for these two. How many chapters do you think you have left in you? lol
Author's Response:
Hi Glo,
Not sure but you can bet it will be on the road to hell or purgatory without a proverbial pot to p**s in!
Chapter wise it is definitely going to be longer than WAALAAS as there is a lot to fit in...
Hope you stay with me.
Happy reading
Nicole
[Report This]Date: Oct 30, 2016 3:01 pm Title: Chapter 12
I can't get over how easy it was for Emmett, Jen and Daphne to spoil poor Lindsay's fun. Well done. So many unanswered questions. Let's start with Emily. Exactly how did Lindz promise to help her have a kid? What paperwork is it that Justin and Brian need to look over? What was it that Carl saw in the kitchen? What is it that Debbie has to explain to Faal? When does Micheal find out about his stocks? He told Ted he'd checked them out on the computer. So Blake now owns the comic book store. That's what I call justice. No way is he letting it go for a measly 40K after all the renovations that were put in. I missed out on the 3way with Leda, but then I was more interested in B/J moments. The cancel partnership? Was that Zee's birthday gift to Em? Would love to see a copy of the video from the party. What did Hunter find in the background? Lindz making out with a waiter? Glad to see that Ben is going ahead with the divorce. So looking forward to your next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you. it is easy to fool a fool when you are fighting the wrong enemy. Okay here's the answers, well most of them:
Emily and her kid request...that's to come sorry no spoilers
The paperwork is the support agreement between Mel, Lindz and Brian over Gus.
Carl saw Mel's reaction to Emily's baby comment...but he doesn't know what she was reacting to.
Faal wants an explanation from Debbie as to why she hurt Zee the way she did
Michael and the stocks are in C13
3way with Leda was from the actual series, can't remember what episode it was from, it wasn't in this story I just referenced it
The partnership was Zee's Christmas present to Em...he had been badgering her to do it and she kept refusing.
Hope you enjoy the next chapter.
Happy reading.
MissMerlot