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Reviewer: kellydeer Signed [Report This]
Date: May 28, 2017 3:42 pm Title: Chapter 13

Ah, gotcha...Thanks for clearing that up. Must have missed the reference somewhere.

Reviewer: kellydeer Signed [Report This]
Date: May 28, 2017 1:54 am Title: Chapter 13

Brietling? Is this a British thing or am I just that old and don't get it?



Author's Response:

No this is a MissMerlot thing.  Basically, Zee did something so sexually amazing to Faal that he bought her a Brietling watch in gratitude, so any time she says that to him, he knows he's in for a good time.

MissMerlot

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 20, 2017 1:34 pm Title: Chapter 13

Michael and Jenny's relation is not gonna last long if he really wants her to stop roller derby. And once he will find out about Hank, it will explode.

What has Lindsay in mind with her champagne? It's certainly not only because she has a job.

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 14, 2017 11:39 pm Title: Chapter 13

Can Michael do anything right? Probably not. 

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 02, 2016 3:32 pm Title: Chapter 13

I can't find one redeeming quality to Michael or Lindsay... they just NEVER learn... and Lindsay is so easily swayed, Emmy Lou? ugh first it's awful she says, then she adopts it quickly...

 

 



Author's Response:

Oh I can, they are so much fun to write and place in scenarios that make them look completely stupid!

And yet she accuses Mel of being a sheep when it came to using that nickname...baaa Lindz...baaah!

Happy reading

MissMerlot

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 02, 2016 12:46 pm Title: Chapter 13

OMG if my mom told me to remember lube I'd probably die, even in at my older than Matt age.  Lol

Jenny, your Dad is gonna have fit!  

Mikey is delusional.  I assume he was going to steal Honeybuns money.  Just sad.

Lindsay better be smart she's losing Brian and Mel.  Oh, she's so jealous of the wardrobe , the wedding and well she sure hates Zee.  



Author's Response:

Can you imagine...hey my son likes popping candy and stimulating lube, make sure to stock up...mortifying.

Oh yes he sure is and it is going to be fun to write.  

No he wasn't going to steal it he was going to invest it...as you know he is an expert in the stock market...cough!

She has plans for that wardrobe and her hatred of Zee blinds her to exactly how powerful an enemy she is making...

Happy reading

MissMerlot

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 02, 2016 5:14 am Title: Chapter 13

I don't bit more believe that Trickalicious called Emmy Lou than she called the man in the moon. Loose-lipped Lying Lindz is what she should be called!! But all that aside I can't wait for the tramp to go nuclear first when she sees Mel's clothes and secondly when she finds out that Justin's show has been moved to the place where Hunter works. I hope she isn't stupid enough to tamper with the gallery or Justin Taylor. She ain't ready for that particular ass whupping! I'm also happy that Mel didn't buy the Bitch one stitch or shoe to add to her 'School Marm' wardrobe. I have a feeling Sidney is going to regret hiring the harridan back sooner or later. If Mel is tired of her, I can only imagine what someone who doesn't have the patience of Job will be once in the presence of the Whirlwind Wonder! 

As for Trickilicious' faithful lap dog Mitch! Michael really is intelligent-deficient on sooooo many levels. I cried laughing during his meeting at the Wells office!! 'Total Moron' is RIGHT!! And the best part is that he can't seek retribution from anyone because he was both arrogant and ignorant. Then there is the entire episode with Jenny. For him to think she isn't smart enough not to trust him with her money is laughable. She's already proven that she is her mother's daughter when she read him the riot act. Now he thinks she is gullible enough to put money in his hand that'a supposed to be for her? Mitch GET REAL! Jenny needs to find something a little less physical to do? Please! His real problem is that she's not malleable to his whims and can drop kick him faster than she drop a hot potato. Not THAT is something I would pay good money to see! As far as the school episode, he proved himself totally inept which is what Ben and Mel told him he would do in the first place. Now mayne Michael and Lindsay will shut up about it. As far as getting back in Brian's good graces  huh I'm singing DREAM ON again in my Steven Tyler voice! He and Lindsay can stay stuck in meutral all they would like, Brian has and is MOVING ON! I can't wait for him to find out that by trying to delay Ben his inevitable divorce, he has shot himself in the foot by being petulant and stupid. I look forward to that ip and coming eviction notice that will be forthcoming when he no longer has the ability to pay his rent....LOL

Vince and Daphne are so completely adorable! Good job Jenny! I hope Melanie tells Michael to but out of Jenny's budding lovelife. If he had his way, I'm sure she would end up being Sister Honeybun of the St. Mary's Convent for Sheltered Daughters where Chasity Belts and bowls of dry wheat are standard fare. Inept Idiot!

Looking forward to MORE!

Happy Writing and HUGS, 

~Nichelle



Author's Response:

Nichelle.

Oh you are going to like what happens to Trickalicious Loose Lipped Lying Lindz with and without her knowing about it...snicker.

Hope you enjoy C14 especially the end.

Happy reading and hugs

Nicole

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 02, 2016 3:34 am Title: Chapter 13

I see Michael knows a lot about stocks he is just rolling in the dough now the idiot weasel, he needs to have his head examined but I think the doctor might start laughing cause the hamster went on strike and just left a note that says 'Moron in Charge'

He completely planned out a schedule to get Jenny to and from school that is why her first week was so Marvelous <insert sarcasm button here>

Ben as usual is behaving like a father while Michael continues to be the spoiled child pouting in the corner, nice that he is ignoring the paperwork from the courts Ben will be divorced faster than Michael's Marblehead could spin.

Lindsay being at The Bloom Gallery is going to be a disaster just as soon as Lindsay finds out where Justin's show is going to be.

This is going to make Hunter look good Justin will help him sort it out and the show will be Fabulous (channeling Emmett here lol)

I seriously doubt Lindsay actually apologize to Emmett that would require her to completely believe she did anything wrong and like Michael she loves to blame others.

Lindsay still trying to get some of Mel's clothes but I doubt her flat Ass can fit anything since they were specially tailored for Mel who doesn't not want Lindsay's entitlement germs.

Glad Jenny got money for the wonder woman doll and that she made sure the money was placed in her hands not daddy's.

Wonder how much money Michael has left over with all he spent on the Christmas presents?

Can't wait for the next chapter :)



Author's Response:

Yo do realise i am going to be stealing the end o that first paragraph...no seriously I am!

I have pretty much answered most of your questions in C14 but more questions have arisen since.

Happy reading.

MissMerlot

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 02, 2016 3:02 am Title: Chapter 13

Mikey has once again made a mess - of everything.  Especially Jenny Rebecca and school.  How cool to get 400 for that stupid doll and to think that Michael tried to get them to give him the money!  Lindsay unfortunately got a job at the Bloom Gallery, which I think Sidney is going to regret and made up with Emmett.  Or did she?  We only have her word for it.  Daphne and Vince are on the way to becoming a couple!  Faal and Zee always in on the action.  So looking forward to your next posting.



Author's Response:

We can always rely on Michael to stuff up royally.  

Hope you enjoy C14 as much.

Happy reading

MissMerlot

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