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Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 20, 2017 5:06 pm Title: Chapter 14

Yeah, Lindsey had an ulterior motive with her champagne: she wants Mel's clothes. She also wants to run the gallery and, too bad for her, Justin's show isn't going to be held where she wanted.

As for Justin, he should better go with Brian next time he travels; he will avoid panic attack and a good spanking... although, I'm not sure he didn't enjoy the last part...

 

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 15, 2017 9:19 am Title: Chapter 14

First love... How cute. Lindsay will lose her job if she continues acting like this. 

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 05, 2016 6:55 pm Title: Chapter 14

You have my permission to use it and put your own spin on it :) I am so flattered and pleased <does happy dance> No twerking for me not as brave as Mel lol 

On to chapter 15! :)



Author's Response:

Thank you, thank you, thank you!  I have written, what I hope is a kickass get lost speech for Mel, it will be in later chapters.  And it will be dedicated to you...exits stage left happy dancing!

MissMerlot

Reviewer: soirsagrey Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 04, 2016 11:34 am Title: Chapter 14

Hiya,

I just can't find the words to describe this story. 

This one and it's prequel Whispers take my breath away. I'm always jumping for y=joy when a new update is posted. 

You write the perfect Anti-Mickey and Anti-Lindsay stories. 

I love Zee and Faal. I love everything about these stories.

My new favorite stories. 

I hope you'll keep writing for you brighten up my dark and stressfull days. Your stories help me to keep a positive outlook on life.

Thank you so very much for your wonderful work.

XOXO

Soirsa



Author's Response:

Hey,

Glad I can make the dark days brighter.  I have already got a plot bunny bouncing for my next one and hope you enjoy that as well, but must be good and finish this one first.

Hope you continue to enjoy and if you love Zee and Faal just wait till you meet...oh wait spoiler alert!

Happy reading

Nicole xxxx

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 04, 2016 1:20 am Title: Chapter 14

Funny how Lindsay assumes she was the one who would be hosting Justin's show... even if she was available, not sure why she thinks she would deserve it...

 

Michael just doesn't think... absolutely collectibles are a much bigger priority than paying your debts... and he labels that paying Boy Wonder, because of course Brian would let him slide... good for Ted, because I think for the sake of easier, Brian would have let Michael slide... go get him Ted!!!!



Author's Response:

Hi Cookiebun,

Yeah their sense of entitlment and dumbness can be seen from outer space.

Ted gets some major payback and the gruesome twosome get some major surprises...

Happy reading

MissMerlot

Reviewer: Kinneysbitch Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 03, 2016 10:40 pm Title: Chapter 14

Love love love this story



Author's Response:

Hey there,

So glad you are reading and reviewing.

Hope you continue to enjoy.

MissMerlot

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 03, 2016 7:28 pm Title: Chapter 14

How you come up with such fabulous chapters so fast is beyond me.  Let me start with Mel since you did. 

Mel -She got a wonderful wardrobe, which Lindsay lusts after, and other special items that Faal was smart enough to have monigramed.  She won her first case and I have to admit to goggling Twerping.  Later we learn that Leda came back especially for Mel.  Will she or won't she?  And then to find out Lindsay offered Brian's sperms to Emily then backed out.  We know that Brian first refused but once Lindz started with the great gene's line, I'm certain she never once mentioned her friend and that line about Brian wanting only her to have his child is bogus.  Please say you'll have Brian find out about that. 

Gus -no fixing his new car due to snowing.  Love his plans for the car and Mel's agreeing to keep it secret.  Funny how Lindsay says no secrets in the family when she has all those things hanging over her head. 

Justin -missing Brian so much.  Even the cats want to comfort him.  Everybody cares so much and would have loved to keep him company.  Good thing Brian was back from Chicago!

Sydney -already he's regretting hiring Lindsay.  Ms. Smartass thinks she's above doing what's asked of her.  If only he hadn't been already booked he could of had Justin's show in his gallery. 

Michael -Mr. Screwup.  Shorting his obligations so he can bid on collectables.  Glad to see Ted wants to call him on it and can't wait to find out what the penalty for doing so will be.  Go Teddy. 

Jenny -schools going better now that she doesn't have to deal with her dad.  Hank's e-mails going into spam folder makes a difference.  At least she has Daphne to help her out. 

Faal -wants so much to know what Emmett and Zee have planned in the way of food.  Both he and Justin are just going to have to wait.

Hunter -So much good things are going his way. 

That being said, I look forward to whatever mischief you've come up with for dealing with the spoilt twosome.

 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for that, I have no idea where it comes from but I suspect that running QAF on a loop and sometimes skipping over to Strapped helps!

You are going to love Jenny when it comes to her mom's wardrobe, that is all I am saying...

And as for Sydney well he's had a secret up his sleeve...

I love creating mischief for the gruesome spoilt twosome and of course I had to give Ted some payback for the "contain your twink" comment...

Happy reading

MissMerlot

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 03, 2016 6:47 pm Title: Chapter 14

That Conniving Lowdown Lying Cold-hearted, Selfish Gutter Skank Whore, she didn't have Gus out of love it was all about her pride and bragging rights, if I was Emily I would punch her in her smug face, Brian paid so Lindsay could gloat and I think she should pay every last cent back with interest. (Oooooo I want to tear her hair out strand by strand)

I feel so bad for Emily all she wanted was a baby and would have been so happy to share custody with Brian if he had agreed, now she has no baby and Lindsay's smugness to deal with.

For a woman who can't stand secrets and lies she sure has a lot of both and that grave she dug for herself years ago is will soon be her only home.

Mel needs to tell Brian, Justin (So they can all figure out how to tell Gus and Jenny), Faal and Zee so they can figure out what to do and how to make that Witch Pay. (Lindsay is making it easier for Leda to come in)

I think Sydney is going to need to join in this club cause Lindsay is going to make him pull his own hair out, she is putting on her Lady of the Manor routine at the gallery, dismissing yet again that Sydney has the power to fire her Ass anytime he wants and he can blacklist her from other galleries too.

What did Lindsay actually say to Emmett I knew she didn't apologize (Stupid Cow, sorry cows you are worth more than Lindsay and actually provide a service), she doesn't even realize how many people she actually has gunning for her Ass.

Michael gets stupider by the second I am surprised he can function without help, he is soon going to be out of money and in the gutter along with Lindsay.

Lindsay is going to be at Justin's show and she will be an idiot as usual.

Thanks for answering all my questions and bringing up new ones.

You Are Truly Evil and I Like That About You lol

What New Surprises Do You Have For Chapter 15?



Author's Response:

BlueMyst,

Please, please please say I can use that entire first paragraph for Mel's goodbye speech to Lindz?  With some minor grammaticial adjustments.  Please?

Lindz basically grovelled her ass off to get back in Emmett's good books but what she said will be revealed later not sure if by Emmett or Mel but one of them will say something.

And there is a surprise in the Bloom Gallery for Lindz that she doesn't see coming in C15 for one...

Happy reading

MissMerlot

 

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 03, 2016 6:46 pm Title: Chapter 14

Michael is a damn FOOL messing with Brian, Justin and Ted! "Boy Wonder will get his money but just like with Ben and the divorce, in my time not his!" Well, I hope Ted burns his ass up so bad that he'll be afraid to sit down or touch one red cent for the rest of his life!! And Idiot Man is still bidding on collectibles?!!?!?!!?! With money that is NOT even his??!!!! OMG!!!! Ted please PLEASE BREAK that Arrogant puppy!!!!! 

As for Lindsay: My goodness she makes scotch tape look like duct tape- the bitch is so transparent! First I laughed right along with Mel at her sudden need to 'get in shape.' That green-eyed monster she has is about the size of the fabled Loch Ness Monster and everyone can see it. 

Secondly, I knew Lindsay's lies were mounting big! It's a crying shame what she did to Emily and I really don't blame the woman for being bitter. Lindsay is a low-down dog that really needs to be put to sleep. I'm inclined to believe that she wants into Britin so that she can have access to Brian's sperm to have a new kid. That definitely sounds accurate but how is she going to get one since Brian and Justin no longer use rubbers? I can't exactly remember from WAALAS but if I'm not mistaken, Lindsay wasn't in the room when that big reveal went forth but Mel was. I can just about imagine little Miss Wannabe Cum Receptacle searching around the manor- or even the Treehouse- looking for a filled condom from Brian or Faal resulting in another 18 year old cash cow for Lindsay. What a deperate dumbass!

Third, I really can't wait until Sydney fires her arrogant ass! Her insubordination about cataloguing alone was grounds for dismissal. Sydney would do well to let the useless idiot go and mentor/promote Martine himself. Lindsay really thinks more highly of herself than she ought to. "Yes I'm the reason Justin went to New York." Okay I'll giver her jealous ass that but she definitely is NOT the reason that Justin has been able to make his living as an artist! And she is certainly not in a position to question or criticize Hunter's rise to Curator Trainee which is something she is not and at this rate will never be. 

I cannot wait for the continued fall of this sorry Bitch or her whining, idiotic snivelling, stubborn counterpart Mitch sitting in Shadyside somewhere playing with himself! 

WRITE On Nicole,

~Nichelle



Author's Response:

Ah Michael, like most people, underestimate the mendacity of Ted, he has never has and never will forgive idiot boy for his "contain your twink" remark and is setting out his revenge...sometimes it pays to be a mild mannered accountant.

She was there during the big condom reveal in WAALAAS and that has led to her conniving.  And once again you had me wine spitting at wannabe cum receptacle!

Oh Sydney has plans for our Lindz...she's not going to be happy and will be sucking on some bitter lemons let me tell you.

Happy reading and I will write on

Nicole

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