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Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2017 5:24 pm Title: Chapter 17

Mel is gonna explode when she will find out what Lindsey told Gus about Brian and her and also Justin and Daphne.

So happy Deb refuses to give money to Michael and called him on his toys' expenses.

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 15, 2017 7:11 pm Title: Chapter 17

Why would Lindsay lie about the way Gus was conceived? Everybody knows what happened. 

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 08, 2016 1:33 am Title: Chapter 17

I see the Gruesome Twosome are spreading the cheer around to everyone I would love to drop them both in shark infested waters but why give those magnificent creatures indigestion?

Michael buying more toys instead of saving his money and paying his debts is just so him, Mel is going to have to nip it in the bud before Michael tries to prevent Ben from seeing Jenny, or wait for him to try to put his foot down again to Jenny and wait for the fireworks to start, Jenny is going to make Michael go fetal and give Lindsay vapors when she tells them off. (Has the paperwork been filed for Ben to adopt Jenny?)

Nothing Mel says to Lindsay is going to compare to what Justin is going to do to her, she crossed a line to get her moment f victory over Emily, deception over Brian, Mel and Gus who thinks he was conceived the old-fashioned way, all her lies are coming out into the open and she has lost her last chance with everyone.

It is time for Lindsay to experience the full weight of vengeance on her head it has to be so bad that even Mommy and Daddy Peterson will walk away from her no soft cushion or safety net for her.

Michael and Lindsay have betrayed Brian for the last time after this there is no going back, he is officially done.

I wonder what Zee and Faal are going to do when they find out, Plus when everyone else finds out too??

Will Uncle Luc's information be the final nail in the coffin for Lindsay and Michael?

This is going to painful but it is needed these two Idiotic, Spoiled, Spiteful, Vindictive, Self-absorbed Brats are not learning there lesson so it is time for them to hit the road.

Can't Wait For More :)

 



Author's Response:

Oh yes you can always rely on the dimwit dumbasses to do their thang and to hell with everyone else.

But happily Michael gets nipped and then some and Zee is now officially pissed with Lindsay trying to sit on Faal's face.

However, there is darkness before the dawn but worry not when it comes down to the DDs "hitting them road"...it will be the road to hell they'll be walking.

Happy reading

MissMerlot

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 07, 2016 8:06 pm Title: Chapter 17

Lindsay's inability to see that she's brought about her own disgruntalness is amazing.  But then Mikey is in the same mindspace.  Sydney seems to be having a lot of fun messing with Lindsay.  Lydia is so different from Lindsay in that she makes Hunter feel good about what he's done.  She's the kind of boss everyone should have.  Loved learning that Ted knew Tobias, it seems like a natural thing.  I like how Brian and Justin are looking out for Ben's interest and realizing that Michael just might try to do something to keep Ben away from JR.  So Gus wasn't a product of Lindsay wanting a baby for her and Mel?  That's just plain wrong.  Lindsay was playing both sides against the middle and now it's catching up on her.  And she's upset Brian, Justin is not going to let that pass.  Michael actually thinking that his mom will give him money for his tax problems?  I'm glad to see that they had the locks changed and aren't giving him a key to come in and out.  And to think he's still buying toys.  Plus he's using Jenney's support payment as an excuse, which he wouldn't even be making if he wasn't forced to.   Gus is working on what his sexuality is?  Looking forward to the answers Mel comes up with in your next chapter.



Author's Response:

I haven't heard that phrase playing both sides against the middle in ages!  Need to work out who gets to say that and when!

And no-one plays the victim like the dimwit dumbasses...sadly more darkness before the dawn to come, but if it makes you feel better, Zee is now officially pissed!

Happy reading

MissMerlot

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 07, 2016 6:44 pm Title: Chapter 17

Poor Ben. While he may have thought all was done adn over with re: Michael, obviously that's not happening. I guess we'll have to wait and see how far Michael is going to try adn take this. Will he try to take Ben to court re: Jenny as well as the back taxes?

Heart is hurting for Brian. What a completel betrayal from Lindsey! Knowing what she did re: Emily, donating sperm for Lindsey etc..and to top it all off Lindsey having gus actually think he was conceived the old fasion way!!!!!! Holy crap! I mean really?!? YUCK! An poor Gus! the kid is so confused about it all. I get his confusion about his friend's sexuiality. good on him and good on the dads to give him such sage advise. He's got a road of disappontment ahead of him with regards to Lindsey. :(

Michael thinking that Deb would give him money......I seriously want to just wring his scrawny neck!! What a petulant fucking ingrate! Ungrateful little asshole!

Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!! Every chapter is exciting, and every chapter is fabulous!! (emmett's voice inserted here please! :) )

Cheers,

Elaine



Author's Response:

Michael will take it to where he wants to take it to, in order to get what he wants...little realising in doing so he gets what he deserves.

Poor Brian, he's devastated but he has his Sunshine, furballs and the family to help him through...and nobody but nobody hurts Brian where Sunshine is concerned.

Glad you are back!

Nicole

Reviewer: soirsagrey Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 07, 2016 6:29 pm Title: Chapter 17

Hiya,

I say again: My God you sure know how to write Anti Dumbwitted Duo. Every chapter again I'm waiting to see what Dumb and Dumberer come up with now.

By the way I love the way you use a smattering of Dutch in your story. I live in the Netherlands and am aware of how difficult Dutch is to some people. So thank you for using my native tongue.

Plese don't see this as a critisisme but Onwelriekende teef is a too nice an expression to use for a bitch like Lindsey. I personally would call her a: smerig rotwijf or a: achterbaks rotkreng. These expressions have a more vicious impact.  My reaction after reading about her was one of: Smerig akelig kutwijf. (filthy cunt).
I hate Lindsey from the bottom of my heart in this story. Such a conniving, filthy, backstabbing and egotistical bitch.

Michael? He just has to take his head out of his arse and start growing up. If he keeps up this behaviour he will end up pennyless, homeless and totally alone.

Thank you for this wonderful story. Every time an update appears my heart skips a beat. Please keep up writing for you make my world a whole lot brighter

XOXO

Soirsa 



Author's Response:

Soirsa,

Thank you, thank you!  First for the praise and secondly for the translation of the exact phrase I was looking for.  Akelig kutwjf, describes her perfectly!

Hope you still enjoy the rest...there will be darkest before the dawn but what a dawn it will be.

Happy reading

Nicole xx

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 07, 2016 4:35 pm Title: Chapter 17

I can't believe Lindsay telling Gus about Daph and Justin as if it was them both interested... and to say her and Brian conceived Gus the Old Fashioned way... ewwwww

 

I really am hoping Mel gets smart soon and kicks Lindsay to the curb... I know she loves her, but does she even like her anymore?



Author's Response:

I know right...double yuck!

Sadly, there's a saying, it's always darkest before the dawn...

Hope you stay for the rest

Happy reading

MissMerlot

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 07, 2016 4:04 pm Title: Chapter 17

So happy to see another great chapter! Omg the shucks is hitting the fan with the Dynamic Dimwits!

I actually let out a 'WHOOP' while reading Michael's confrontation with Deb & Carl! LAWD HAM TURKEY am I PROUD of her! The nerve of that ignorant ingrate to think that Deb and Carl should use their retirement fund to bail him out instead of paying his own damn bills.I wanted to punch him in his face when he tried to guilt them into by using Jenny support as a cover-up. But Deb is finally wise to her foolish offspring and new that he had some bids out there for collectibles! What an ASSHOLE! I wish I would ask my mother to do something like that. She would still be introducing her foot to my ass every time she thought about it...and my mother has a LOOOOoooong memory! I swear Mitch needs a fist doused in Holy Water to exorcise that demon of Selfishness! 

And speaking of selfish demons we have the 'mother' of them all called Lilth...oh I mean Lindsay! What a jealous, manipulative, lying, schemeing, malicious, delusional, damaged, derranged PAIN IN THE ASS!! Like seriously! I was happy when Hunter's review came out and she could see his success in plain black and white. All the 'art training' in the world couldn't give her grace and ingenuity. I laughed at both Sidney and Martine rubbing it in. If I were them I would do it every single day of the work week so she would leave early and cut her paycheck by half. 

As for the situation with Emily: she ought to really be ashamed of herself but bitches like her have none. There has to be a way to make Lindsay pay for perfidy. My heart really went out to both Mel and Brian. No matter what they've done, they don't deserve a Lindsay or Michael in their lives. Poor Gus too! Lindsay lying to him telling him that she and Brian conceived him the old-fashioned way was just plain mean. Now when he actually learns the truth, it's going to hurt. Triple L has a whole lot to answer for. Every word she utters has a LIE somewhere in it. 

Thank goodness that Brian and Justin will have the support of the family-their true family- to see them through all of this as more mischief and mayhem comes at them from the PITA Association. I'm looking forward to cheering as Justin hides the bodies! LOL

GREAT JOB getting my blood boiling while I'm sitting here at work. I was almost ready to bang my head on the desk until I got the email saying TBOTW was updated! You made my morning, Nicole!

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle



Author's Response:

Dear Nichelle,

I aim to please so glad that I hit the mark. I'm so enjoying writing this.

Happy reading and hugs

Nicole

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