Date: May 21, 2017 9:33 pm Title: Chapter 18
I hope someone saw Michael give money to Rita.
I can't wait to see how Lindsey will try to explain why she lied to Gus about his conception; as if he misunderstood...
I loved how Brian gave the week off after signing the huge contract.
Date: Jan 15, 2017 10:09 pm Title: Chapter 18
The reaction to Jenny dating Hank was soooo ... normal. I wonder if that is all. I would have loved to have seen Michael and Lindsay after the lunch. They must have looked like a baby that didn't wear a bib.
Date: Nov 10, 2016 3:24 am Title: Chapter 18
lots of good stuff here- hard to pinpoint all of them- surprised that Michael was ok with Hank- I think he's hiding something
Author's Response:
Thank you. He's not, he is and it's going to backfire big time.
Happy reading
MissMerlot
Date: Nov 09, 2016 2:24 pm Title: Chapter 18
Brilliant update!
Thanks for sharing.
Author's Response:
You're welcome, thanks for reading, hope you stay with me
MissMerlot
[Report This]Date: Nov 09, 2016 1:17 am Title: Chapter 18
I was not expecting Hunter's birth mother to show but I am not surprised Michael did it to hurt Hunter and try to look like a hero so everyone will help him and he can believe that everything will go back to the way it was before. (Thankfully everyone isn't as stupid as Michael hopes they are)
Lindsay pouting because no one is paying any attention to her (Still?) and her normal machinations aren't working, I hope Sydney flaunted Hunter's achievement every chance he got just to make her grind her teeth.
It seems that crown Lindsay adorned herself with is going to be use to suffocate the glorified entitlement out of her.
I guess she must enjoy getting smacked down because she just keeps opening her mouth and making an Ass out of herself, you don't tell Faal and Zee what to do in Their Home when you don't even have the right to grace it without their permission.
She is trying to alienate Matt in his home then she goes over to the Treehouse for a Messy Fest trying to flaunt herself yet again, that Lady of the Manor Crown only works when it's your manor and you have earned the right to wear it.
She is lucky Brian was holding Justin back or he would have been ripping out that lovely hair she enjoys flipping so much whenever she is trying to act superior, forcing her to admit to the lie doesn't change the fact that she shouldn't have said it to Gus in the first place.
Unless Brian is drunk out of his mind he wouldn't go near that smelly diseased harpy again and not even if he was passed out drunk.
She just keeps burying herself under more lies pretty soon she won't have a way to dig out anymore.
I don't trust Michael being okay about Jenny dating Hank Cameron just like I don't trust Lindsay, those two are going to try to break them up sooner or later.
There must be a show down on the horizon gotta know what the paperwork says and what Uncle Luc finds out about these two brats.
I am Breathlessly Anticipating What Is Going to Happen Next:)
Author's Response:
I have no idea where I pulled her from but I can assure you that not only will she not be back but Michael does really think that people bought his "Captain Astro flies to the rescue" routine.
Lindsay's constant underestimationn of Zee because she's not reacting to what she's doing outwardly, is going to bite her in her saggy ass hard. She still doesn't 'know' who Zee is and what she's capable of, nor that as far as she is concerned Hunter is her boy!
Of course Michael's not happy with Jenny dating Hank but he wants in...and sees no harm in playing nice for now.
The showdown won't come for a few more chapters...evil cackle...but when it comes it will be a doozie!
Happy reading
MissMerlot
Date: Nov 08, 2016 5:42 pm Title: Chapter 18
Deb had better stick to her guns and not help Michael!! she will be in teh dog house in a major way if she does. Michael seems to think she needs to help her "child" however, he seems to have forgotten that he's a freaking adult and no longer a child. At least not in a chronological sense. Maturity wise, we all know he's still 14.
Ben's feeling of dread is obviously spot on. Hopefully people figure out exactly what Michael really did. He in no way shape of form redeemed himself and they should all be aware. Oh I hope he doesn't get away with it for too long. Perhaps just long enough to start redeeming himself a bit more then BANG! He can drop once again only it can be a much higher drop. (I'm a bit of a bitch aren't I?? lol)
What's happening on Thursday????
HA! No one fell for Lindsey's BS about how Gus was really conceived. The truth will cone out eventually to Gus and he'll once again be faced with what his mother is really like.
Finally get what the "tell" was. I'll have to pay more attention in the future. That was bugging me. LOL.
EXCELLENT chapter!!
Cheers
Elaine
Author's Response:
Now where would be the fun in that, he's her son after all...
Ooh Elaine you and I are of the same mind...he wheedles his way in of course but the cards are stacked against him but he doesn't know it yet.
As for Lindsay she gets worse on poor Gus, much, much worse.
Sorry about the 'tell' I had meant to put in an explanation in the chapter notes but in my enthusiasm to get on to the next ones I forgot. It's a poker term, and poker comes to play in a way nobody expects.
Thursday...hmm...you'll have to read C20 to find out...
Off to write
Thanks for being back again
Nicole
[Report This]Date: Nov 08, 2016 4:12 pm Title: Chapter 18
I'm not sure how Mikey managed to get away with calling Rita and sicing her on Hunter, but it appears he did. Lindsay seems to have gotten away with telling Gus he was concieved the natural way. Of course they could always ask Gus to repeat what she said word for word. Other then that we had a lovely Messy Feast, with Mikey and Lindsay getting very messy. lol. Justin giving lessons to Zee and Emmett was an interesting turn. The whole chapter was a work of art. Well done.
Author's Response:
Yay thank you!
Appearances can be deceptive...after all I have an evil mind where those two are concerned...snicker-snicker.
Happy reading
MissMerlot
Date: Nov 08, 2016 3:58 pm Title: Chapter 18
what happens Thursday??? I wanna know!!!!
Lindsay is just digging her grave more and more... and Michael was actually on good behavior today... I'm ALMOST impressed! lol
Author's Response:
Thursday...hmm...oh I know, answers in C20.
Yep digging and digging hard...as for Michael, well he's almost got everyone fooled! Just remember Uncle Luc and what he did for a living...
Happy reading
MissMerlot