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Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 23, 2017 7:25 pm Title: Chapter 20

Some more lies from both Lindsey and Michael...

This time, Mel has enough, and I bet Brian is waiting for the fallout. Deb is also very determined.

I can't wait to read about the renovation results and the party that Emmett will throw.

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 16, 2017 5:34 pm Title: Chapter 20

What has Zee found? I need to know. 

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 14, 2016 4:46 pm Title: Chapter 20

I'm so glad that Mel has finally had her last straw... also Deb it seems FINALLY

 

Can't wait until we get more details revealed :) 

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 11, 2016 7:09 pm Title: Chapter 20

That Conniving Two Ton Heifer!! She has been pocketing some of the support payments and keeping Brian from getting his parental rights back, that was her safety net all along that means she has been doing this for years, That Mangy Lowdown Flea bag Bitch!!

No wonder she has been acting like Queen of the Manor and trying to run things at Britin (Doesn't explain her act at the Treehouse upon first being invited??), she thinks because she has custody to Gus that she is entitled to act superior than Justin, while taking his share of the support to fill her coffers. That Lying, Two-Faced Whore!!

She planned to spend the next three years building up her bank account while continuing to lie to her everyone.

I hope Zee has a way to get that money back so it can go to Gus like it is suppose to and I am hoping her humiliation will be painful.

Mel is doing the right thing to prevent Lindsay from getting another dime or having any control over Brian and Gus, this was the final straw Lindsay is so out she is going to need a map to find her way back. Freaking Cow!!!

Michael sucking up to Deb to get her to help him pay his support for Jenny is so pathetic, I agree with Carl if his daughter is so important then why doesn't he sell his toys??

Why Doesn't He Also Get A Job?!?!

Michael enjoys the title of Daddy but he doesn't want to put in the effort to take care of his daughter, he wants to lay on his Ass (Like Lindsay) while everyone else pays for everything and he can whine that he is underappreciated (Just Like Lindsay).

I see that Playtime is over these two get no more chances for redemption they blew them all, it is time to get rid of the dead weight and move forward not back.

Wow you have Amazed Me Again :)

 

 



Author's Response:

#bluemystismadatLindz!

And MissMerlot is stealing mangy lowdown fleabag bitch...just so you know...after all Uncle Luc has already called her a hound but this sounds so much better

I'm so pleased you have responded the way you did, exactly the reaction I was hoping for.

Happy reading

MissMerlot

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 11, 2016 5:56 am Title: Chapter 20

Boy do I have questions.  Zee was the one who bought the gallery and the two building next to it?  It's perfect for Emmett and her and cooking.  That Zee, she cooks, she blows glass, she's a computer wiz. Just what is it she's found out about Lindsay?  Or Emily?

Michael thinks he's pulled one over on Charles and Joshua, not to mention his mother.   Just how much has he been paying in support?

Now for Mel's phone calls.  Was the 1st on to Lindsay?  I know the second one was to JR.

So the main character meet at Britin.  What exactly are they looking for?  They don't seem to be finding it.  My guess though would be that Lindsay has been banking all the support she's conned everyone into giving and pulling to by her personal shit.  That's fraud.

Mel's willing to give up her parental rights to Brian and Justin.  How sweet. 

Why is Joshua smiling?

Love Carl's discision via Mikey.  Is Debbie finding out that Mikey isn't paying support has made her reconsider giving him any money?  I hope so.

Who is lying and about what?

So they take them down at the family meal? 

Of course we have to have our peek into what Brian and Justin are up to.

Joshua needs a statement from Emily and Brian, darn you know why and what for but your making us wait to find out!  <pout>  or should I cross my arms and stomp my foot. 

Can't wait to see your next chapter.



Author's Response:

Just because its you...I'll answer some in the order you gave them:

She's found something out about Emily which will lead them somewhere good...but not saying any more yet

Michael was paying a grand for Jenny...Ben is paying a grand too

Yep that was to Lindsay so if the kids mentioned that Mel was out there would be no drama

They did find it, its the letter but Brian and his lawyer have never seen it

Reason for Joshua's smile...not telling yet

Yep re Debs

As Lindsay didn't tell Mel about the extra support payments from Justin, she's lied by omission 

As for the take down, their lying ass castle ain't high enough yet...more lies, stupidity and hair flicking to come

Happy reading

MissMerlot

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