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Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2017 4:53 pm Title: Chapter 21

Michael and Lindsey really choose to put a damper on anything they can!

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 16, 2017 7:20 pm Title: Chapter 21

Now they want to sabotage the wedding? As if they could. They have no chance against all the others. 

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 14, 2016 5:21 pm Title: Chapter 21

Oh Linds and Michael... will you never learn... you two are two idiotic to see you aren't fooling anyone!!!!

Reviewer: blossomlegs Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 13, 2016 6:25 am Title: Chapter 21

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Fantastic update.  Mikey and Linz still conniving as ever, anxious to see where it will lead.

Thanks for sharing.

JoAnn

 

 

 

 

 

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Author's Response:

JoAnn,

Thanks for sticking with me and reviewing.

Got a few more chapters to go.

Happy reading

MissMerlot

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 12, 2016 8:04 pm Title: Chapter 21

So Joshua is Brian and Justin's lawyer and he is the neighbor Michael thinks is cheating with Charles, my goodness Michael is stacking up enemies just like Lindsay can't wait for him to act out his moment of triumph so Charles can have a chance boy tell him off. 

Deb telling off Michael was long overdue and just what he needed though I don't his pea brain retained any of it, he whines that Deb won't help him but he still hasn't learned that as an adult he is suppose to help himself and take care of his daughter, if everyone else is paying for Jenny than they should have a say in how she is brought up.

Finally sees what Michael actually values and holds dear to his heart and it isn't Jenny, he places more value on his toys than the well-being of his only daughter.

Like Lindsay he loves the title of parent but the responsibility is someone else's problem while they both sit on their throne lording over everyone what they are entitled to.

That fake apology Lindsay gave to Gus just made her look like it is more important to look right than to ever admit she is wrong.

Mel tried yet again to to put her in her place concerning Zee and Faal but like Michael she hears and sees what she wants, after this I wouldn't warn her anymore she wants to face Zee so let her stand up and face her, the showdown between them should be epic and make Lindsay regret her every action.

Deb gets a new range and a remodeled kitchen from Zee and probably some other stuff from everyone else, why Michael will just bring whine and Lindsay will bring her cheesy attempts at flirting.

My these two are getting into a lot of trouble and we haven't even reached February yet, Michael who.is barely a father does not get to tell Gus what he can or cannot do, Brian told him off good but Michael won't listen.

Why is Lindsay being so nice and what is the papers Emily verified for Josh?

Way to go Ted for putting Lindsay in her place about the gallery, Emmett and Zee's cooking talents it also was a dig about her lack of talent in anything.

I don't want them to be at the Portland house for Valentine's weekend but then again their performances should be hilarious.

Let them try to stop Brian and Justin from getting married Jennifer will stomp a mud hole in both their Asses before everyone else forms a line to the left to get their turn.

I see Joshua and Carrie will soon be joining the Anti Dumbass Club perhaps they should make t-shirts? lol

Can't wait for Leda to show up again perhaps Valentine's weekend could be it by then Mel should be in the mood for some friendship and a little romance;)

Looking forward to the launch party and all that delicious food :)

 



Author's Response:

Oh yes apart from Joshua and Carrie, the Anti Dumbass club - loving that - have got a new member, a not so surprising one but one nevertheless.

Hark is that the sound of a motorbike in the distance, pots and pans clanging in the new test kitchen and I do believe, yes a...ooh almost a spoiler!

Happy reading

MissMerlot

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 12, 2016 1:59 pm Title: Chapter 21

Thank you so much for the answers to my last questions.  Ben's poker night almost got ruined.  Does Michael actually think anything he could say would effect Jenny and Hank?  He is such a dweeb.  Okay this is going to sound stupid, but is Joshua a lawyer?  Love the information about Emily.  Can't wait to find out what the correspondence said.  It must have been good judging from Joshua's reaction.  What's with Lindsay?  She trying to get on everyone's good side.  She might think it's working, but I doubt it.  Em and the kitchens.  He's picked pink for Zee making her day.  It will make Deb's day too, since she ends up with Zee's old range.  Nothing to be sneezed at.  We get another delicous lunch at Zee and Faal's place.  Michael should consider him lucky to have been invited.  If Jenny said no he'd be outa there.  I do believe Deb and Carl are eyeing his collectibles for resale.  Deb finally told Mikey how much a best friend to Brian he is not!  Darn now I'm hungry for an eggy bread sandwith.  Daphne's in town that means lot's of good stuff for the next chapter!  Teddy let Lindsay have it when she criticised Zee's buying Fienman Gallery!  Go Teddy.  Something will have to be done soon to counteract Michael and Lindsay trying to stop Brian and Justin from getting married.  I know you will have something deliciously evil planned.  Another delicious chapter.

 



Author's Response:

You are welcome lovely!

He is indeed, he looks after the personal stuff for Brian and Justin.

Oh you clever YumYumPM, you, have you been reading my mind, they are indeed.  She really let him have it didn't she, well most of it, there's more to come.

Of course I have deliciously evil things to come...ooh do I hear the sound of a motorbike in the distance...

Happy reading

MissMerlot

 

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