Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 04, 2017 11:27 am Title: Chapter 22

There are so many good lines in your story that it's difficult to point only few. Those ones, I loved:

“Ma, I’m not a dog…”

“No you’re not, a dog learns.  Now sit.”

"Yes that’s correct one penny"

"Captain Twink and his Mighty Ass"

The analysis of Blake about Michael and his addiction to Brian is so accurate.

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 14, 2016 7:06 pm Title: Chapter 22

Sooooo much happening in these 2 previous chapters. I barely know where to begin.

I am really anticipating everything that's going to go down with Lindsey. I forsee a bitchslap like nothing she's ever experienced before. Both she and Michael have such high opinions of themselves. It's unbelievable. Glad that Zee said what she did to Linndz. Long time coming. Everyone sees her drooling over Faal. does she think she's being descreet or something? Feel bad for Mel having to put up with her shit for so long. She's only holding out for all these legal ramifications to come and bite Lindz in the ass. All of hers, Josh, Brian and Justin's plans are coming to fruition and I for 1 can't wait! How much longer?!? :)

And oh my goodness. Jenny being able to read lips! Poor girl. 

Deb...snorted with laughter over the 1 penny thing. HA! that's gonna be a hoot when he figures it out. Thrilled for her and her new reno. she so deserves it. How exciting. Papa Bear and his queen are deserving of such a showing of respect, gratitude and love from everyone.

Loved Zee's backstory. Of course it was heartbreaking, but she showed such strength and conviction.

All in all, an incredible read. I just re-read the first in the series and will go back and start this one over again as well. 

Cheers

Elaine

Author's Response:

I think another 4 chapters and an epilogue maybe.  

And I'm now bursting with pride!

Happy reading

Nicole

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 14, 2016 8:37 am Title: Chapter 22

If I  said it once, I've said it a million times Mikey is a ding bat. Lindsay is a nut job too.  

Thanks for the updates!

Author's Response:

And that's being kind to the pair of them.

Glad you are enjoying it

Happy reading

MissMerlot

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 14, 2016 1:08 am Title: Chapter 22

I always have to read your chapters twice.  Once because I can't wait to see who and how you've messed with Michael and Lindsay then again to leave comments on the parts that stood out.  Which is most of the chapter.

I should have realized that someone was keeping an eye on the deplorable twosome.  That it was Matt and Jenny was surprising.  But it makes perfect since.  Matt because he lipreads and Jenny because she needed to learn just how dispicable her dad really is.  But it wasn't only them Zee and Faal also caught it.  Jenny was all for cutting her losses shes given up on both her dad and Lindsay, but Zee seems to have something planned.  Jenny also seems to be able to lie on a dime. 

I was surprised to learn that Zee's father refused to consider Zee marrying Faal.  But it the end it was his loss.  He lost his wife, his daughter, and his own father.  Michael, who is on thin ice to begin with, loses points with his griping.  He's lucky he wasn't thrown out right then and there.   It was very intense hearing what Zee had to go through, seeing how she's capable of doing anything she sets her mind to.

Matt on the other hand has earned a new aunt and uncle in the form of Debbie and Carl.  They have truly become the stable influence in the family.

Love, love, love Emmett telling Mikey he probably won't be getting an invite to the wedding and told him he'd acted like a total cunt.  Truer words were never spoken. That should bring Mikey down from his high horse of thinking that he's got the goods on Charles.

Mikey tends to use Jenny a lot, but he has yet to give her a key, he doesn't read her schedule, and the only times he talks with her is when she initiates it or he wants to tell her no you can't do - fill in blank.  Ben's a much better father then he. 

Zee let Lindz have right between the eyes.  Especially as Lindsay tried to compare her life with Zee's. But all is not lost, Daphne is there to help lighten the mood.

Now, about Michael trying to con his mother into giving him money.  She's smarter than that and I can't wait for him to find out just how little he's going to get.  LOL.  He thinks he can have his cake or in this case collectibles and eat it too.  Not going to happen. 

Joshua has the goods on Lindsay and once everything comes out she's going to be up the creek without a paddle.

Debbie is in for a surprise when she sees the redu.  Evidently everyone chipped in, except for her son.  Now she has plenty of room to host her Sunday dinners.

We even have Teddy doing what he does best.  Protecting the important peoples money so they are not taken advantage of.

Then we have Justin distraught over what Brian's 'best friends' have done.  But we have Milo giving aide and comfort, not to mention Brian, Zee, and Faal giving him a chance to let it all out.

Love how Blake put Michael in his place and called him on his addiction. Now that was the best ending.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much, it was another favourite chapter of mine to write.  I had to give Blake that slapdown for Michael

Happy reading

MissMerlot