Date: Jun 04, 2017 6:06 pm Title: Chapter 23
I love Deb in this story: she sees how her son is behaving and acts on it. Ben is cool too; no more a fool.
The moment everyone knows what Blake told Michael is hilarious.
Date: Jan 16, 2017 10:27 pm Title: Chapter 23
I like the name for the company. I would have loved to see Zee taking down Michael.
[Report This]Date: Nov 15, 2016 3:17 pm Title: Chapter 23
Blake is really coming into his own. He's managed to get Faal choking. lol. Which brought about a request for the change in subject. Gun oil. Which Michael stupidly interpited as lube. Really this obsession about guns, these are responsible people and have been trained in the use of weapons. A fact that Michael seems to not care. If he'd gone after Zee to try and take a way her weapon he'd soon be looking down the point of her gun and shitting his pants. That would have been fun. He's down on strike on the trip to Portland. BTW- when he was on the phone was he ordering more toys?
Loved the running theme of the coffee maker. I know I have to have a simple coffee machine myself. Deb and Carl are besides themselves about the makeover. Lunch ought to be amazing. Everyone manages to make it to Deb's on time, except Michael. Talk about a sense of intitlement. He expected a car to be sent for him? Now I'm not sure what the problem with the phone was but it made for some unique moments. Did it need new batteries? That lovely porch and nobody realized they forgot to turn on the heat! Poor Justin, how sweet of everyone to be so concerned, except Michael. He's decided to be a pain, but Tucker's got his number.
Then you have the kids naming Zee and Emmett's new business. I like M & Z House of Delight. Everyone gets in on it. Brian does advertizing. Justin does design. Zee picks the colors. Blake the background.
Then we had the chaise lounge and everyone ended up ordering it. Different colors though.
Author's Response:
Re Michael on the phone question...he was indeed but Jenny soon put a stop to that, albeit a temporary one. As for the other phone question, the house phone wasn't hanging up correctly so would be constantly engaged...had the joys of one of those phones so annoying! And also had a "space ship" of a coffee machine to operate at work once...still have nightmares sometimes and put me right off coffee.
Ah yes Tucker, there's another rumble with Michael to come. And for Blake too.
Happy reading
MissMerlot
Date: Nov 15, 2016 3:33 am Title: Chapter 23
Two Terrific updates. Love this fic.
Thanks for sharing.
JoAnn
Author's Response:
You're welcome.
Happy reading
Nicole
Date: Nov 15, 2016 3:10 am Title: Chapter 23
You just cannot write this fast enough for me... I love it!
Author's Response:
Good to hear off to make you happy!
MissMerlot
[Report This]Date: Nov 15, 2016 3:00 am Title: Chapter 23
Holy Stupidity!!!! Captain Asshat and his sidekick Stuck-up Heifer just don't know when to keep their mouths shut.
They are both skating on thin ice and yet they still try to throw their weight around like anyone is going to listen to them or jump to do their bidding just so they can avoid a tantrum, the days of them pouting, whining, silent treatments, needling, or sweet talking to get their way is over.
Tucker threatening Michael was so cool and so unexpected that I hope it happens again, I dare Michael and Lindsay to tell Jenny she can't see Zee anymore than I would stand back and wait for Jenny to go off.
That moment with the gun oil was funny because it was at Michael's expense, Zee knocking down Lindsay was funny too seriously they should really just shut up but every time they open their mouths its another moment of lies and stupidity to come flowing out. (You can get angry and laugh when they are wrong)
Justin having that really bad cramped in his hand was awful thankfully Faal and Zee were able to help so now Brian will know what to do the next time that happens along with the kids.
Can't wait for the launch it will be another opportunity for Michael and Lindsay to make complete Asses out of themselves again, I wonder if Emily and Francine will be there to get in a few digs too?
Michael has one strike against him so far Lindsay should be up to bat again soon let's see her get a strike.
I wish Deb hadn't interrupted Michael trying to goad Zee it would have been hilarious to see her kick his Ass, bet it would have made Lindsay a bit more cautious about continuing to hit on Faal lol
Another Great Chapter :)
Author's Response:
Oh I think I can arrrange for another Tucker/Michael showdown...since you asked so nicely.
Captain Asshat and Stuck-Up Heifer...hilarious
Happy reading.
MissMerlot
Date: Nov 15, 2016 2:51 am Title: Chapter 23
I sense the boiling point is near.....
Author's Response:
There is the odd bubble starting to come to the surface.
MissMerlot