Date: Jun 05, 2017 8:49 pm Title: Chapter 24
The tension is getting high between Michael and Jenny, as well as between Mel and Lindsay. Now that she's fired, it will become more as she won't have any income and will depend on Mel and Brian.
The chess part was interesting: Gus, as his father, doesn't say a lot, but it's sharp and smart.
Date: Jan 17, 2017 8:36 pm Title: Chapter 24
And again they have been put in their place. Will they learn out of that? Noooooooo
Date: Nov 16, 2016 3:30 pm Title: Chapter 24
absolutely perfect that Michael and Lindsay get to miss the pampering weekend... they deserve so much worse. and so glad Sidney finally fired Linds
things are working so well, can't wait for the hammers to drop on both of the weasels!
Author's Response:
They do deserve much worse, they get much worse...thanks to a little pitbull.
Happy reading
MissMerlot
Date: Nov 16, 2016 3:07 pm Title: Chapter 24
Hiya,
I can't tell you enough how much I love this story,
They way you are building up the tension is really nerve wracking,
Sooooo looking forward to the moment Blondie and Whiney are getting their come uppance.
As the saying goes in the Netherlands: Wraak is zoet! (google it and feel free to borrow)
Eagerly awaiting the next update.
XOXO
Soirsa
Author's Response:
Blondie and Whiney get theirs in dribs and drabs and then kapow...is there a word for kapow in Dutch, I've tried google translate but it just puts it in English.
Yep I'm borrowing no problem
Working on C26 now...so glad you are still enjoying it
Happy reading.
MissMerlot
[Report This]Date: Nov 16, 2016 2:31 pm Title: Chapter 24
The weekend is coming and so much going on. It looks like all the kids are at the treehouse. A welcome respite for Gus and Jenny. No arguing. Though I do get hungry everytime I read one of your chapters. Lobster?! Lindsay is still trying to get into Mel's closet? The bickering! It appears the weekend party is at the Treehouse this week. Jenny has an urgent need to talk to Daphne, which Justin has to be in on. That weekend retreat for the wedding party sounds fantastic. I'm so jealous. It's Sunday and everyone is there, Emmett, Lindsay and Mikey, who is already making a pain of himself. Demanding to see Jenny's phone! This will not turn out well. Gus explaining chess to Michael, now that was funny. In a way Gus and Jenny's lives are like a chess game, with sacrifices to be made. What exactly is Michael up to wanting to know about Kip Thomas? He's delusional if he thinks Brian will pick him over Justin. Lindsay has pulled another sick day too many. When Hunter was explaining why she was too sick, someone else was there. My guess is Sidney though it only occured to me later. She's too sick to go into work, but not to go to the launch party? She'll be even sicker once Emily is finished with her.
The Launch Party itself - how could you start it off with losing Zee? Thank goodness Carl was there, you needed a detective to locate her. The menu is really out-of-sight! The main courses, the sides, the deserts! And don't get me started on the drinks. I gained ten pounds just reading the menu. I'd say the E and Z hod is off to a good start. Remind me, what does EPOS mean?
Author's Response:
I know that was mean to have Zee be missing, albeit briefly!
EPOS is electronic point of sale.
There's more mendacity from my mind to come.
Happy reading
MissMerlot
[Report This]Date: Nov 16, 2016 5:19 am Title: Chapter 24
Michael trying to bring up the Kip Thomas Debacle why should anyone care about that after all these years, he was a small blimp on Brian's screen that faded to obscurity just like all the other meaningless tricks, man this is so idiotic and pathetic it must hurt Michael's head trying to come up with a plan, if he brings in Craig, Joan or Claire I want Drew to get some of his teammates to beat the stuffing out of Michael.
Lindsay got put in her place about Mel's clothes and about how she is letting Michael get away with going half on his support payments, being less involved with Jenny and paying back Brian and Justin, now if the situation was reversed she would be all over Brian's Ass (And not in a Life Affirming Way) if he missed a payment, ignored Gus or if Justin didn't pay Michael back and on time.
You don't get to be a parent when it is convenient for you or helps you score points, you are a parent for the rest of your life and with that comes responsibility, you can't pick and choose what you want to supply your child and when you want to do it, the moment that little life comes into the world you are responsible every second of every minute of every day until your last breath.
Lindsay would rather plot with Michael make snide comments about Zee and Justin, pursue people who don't want them, lie, cheat, steal and buy toysp instead of being parents and setting good examples for their children.
Everyone must be so happy that they won't be with them when they go to that gorgeous spa in New York for a weekend of pampering, shopping and fun?
Well Lindsay can't afford to go anyway since she just got fired for being a lying, selfish cow and will soon be served court papers from Emily's attorney (She is going to need an application for The Big Q lol)
The launch went beautifully Zee and Emmett are going to be very busy with all these big events, the food sounded delicious and I wish I could have been there to sample it all.
You are So Wicked:)
Author's Response:
I know and I get even wickeder!
Happy reading
MissMerlot