Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 06, 2017 4:09 pm Title: Chapter 25

Each chapter is a delight for the taste buds! It's another way to make us salivate.

Jenny is becoming a master mind when it comes to counter her father.

Reviewer: blossomlegs Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 18, 2016 11:43 pm Title: Chapter 25

Fabulous, Fabulous updates!  So love the bashing Mikey and Linz are getting,please keep it up.

Thanks for sharing.

JoAnn

Author's Response:

JoAnn, it is with greet pleasure that your wish is my command.

Happy reading

Nicole

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 17, 2016 6:16 pm Title: Chapter 25

Hmmmmmmm Mutton curry. Haven't had that in forever! ;) My mom made that once upon a time. 

Glad that everyone is looking after Zee and Em. Pampering day is perfect and cooking take over as well. Good for them adn well deserved.

Anyway...Loved how Lindsey and Michael were set up by Jenny. hehehe. She really is shart as a whip isn't she. Loving her more and more. What a difference in her between now and the beginning of Whispers. Shows you how a person, especially a child can change depending on their level of security. she's more secure in the affections of everyone around her. She understands now about Lindsey and Michael and all their machinations and levels of BS. Have to admit though....the little reminder of the furnase room was funny as hell!

I cannot believe Michael!! His behavior towards Stuart is unconsionable!! Makes me all the happier that he was left out of the entire event with Lee and Byrne, and is now also banned for life. To make matters even more frustrating for our pathetic loser but all his little toys are sold. Sounds to me like Kip realized the error of his ways before. Hopefully he won't lapse and help Michael.

Ted is a wonder! What a brilliant accountant. He has all the bases covered when it came to Linsey's $ from teh boys.

Now let's just hope they can't come up with the funds. At least for the gang's sake. For us, the readers...could make from some very enjoyable angst filled reading!! LOL.

Was a joy  to read this update this morning as always.

Thanks you!!

Cheers,

Elaine

 

Author's Response:

Elaine,

Thanks for the comment on Jenny, I wanted to show how she progressed from being her father's daughter in Whispers to her mother's daughter now.  

Yeah had to do the furnace thing...Lindsay just can't understand what Faal sees in Zee, that he doesn't see in her...so I thought a little reminder of part of what he sees was called for.

When I wrote the Michael/Stuart scenario I was in a particularly bad mood but I had to give the final closing of the door to Blake and of course remember Lucas is now on the scene, let's just say it doesn't get any better for Michael.

Ah Kip...well what can I say.

Glad you are still with me.

MissMerlot

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 17, 2016 4:05 pm Title: Chapter 25

Pedicures and massages, Zee and Emmett deserve after their successful launch.  I'm surprised that Justin is not as big as a house, what with everything he eats.  Guess Brian works it off him.  Dear, sweet, adorable Jenny is as devious as they come.  She had it all planned out, pure Marcus.  Not that Michael can't be devious, but let's face it he doesn't plan well.  It's a Novotney trait.  Blake and Teddy have earned my undying love.  Blake for making the comic place a success and $75,000 is way too cheap.  He also called Mikey on his behavior.  And Teddy for fixing things that put a spike into Lindsay being able to go on the weekend retreat.  Lindsay's days are numbered.  Whenever Mikey gets that creepy smile I cringe.  Just what is he planning in regard to Kip?