Date: Aug 02, 2017 4:25 am Title: Chapter 40
Lindsey out "her home" without the new key... Feels like Mel took a major decision!
As for Michael, he will feel less cocky when he will discover who is his landlord!
Date: Jan 21, 2017 11:30 am Title: Chapter 40
That's a great turn of events.
[Report This]Date: Dec 06, 2016 4:02 am Title: Chapter 40
Love how Aunt Dee takes things in hand. Jenny was going to apologise? No way. It doesn't pay to make Vince mad, but Aunt D has a point, Daphne will make Mikey's life miserable. Oh boy, Lindz and Michael actually think they can win this? I was wondering what you had planned. Changing the locks is a nice start. Love that everyone learns that Zee is Mikey's new landlord. Talk about evil intentions. Okay who's contact photo is going around and how did they manage it? Oh no, Lindsay did not just sic Caswell on Hunter. Justin will have something to say about that I'm sure. Another question. What is it about rats that involve Melanie, Leda, Faal and Zee? Oh this chapter ended on a charming note. Can't wait to see the shit hitting the fan.
Author's Response:
Hey,
Sorry forgot to answer the Gardner Vance question in your previous review. Zee knew him because his company did their advertising and she and Cynthia conspired to get Stark Industries to sign Kinnetic, think it was chapter 6 that happened in. As for the rat thing, in this story, Leda has a phobia about rats and used that as a way to lure Mel up to the house to 'rescue her' but it was a ruse to introduce her to Butch and Sundance the malamutes, Jenny and Gus really want dogs...
The contact photo is of Michael and Patrice making out...mercifully I am not IT savvy enough to knock that up, the thought is enough!
Ah yes Hurricane Daphne is coming!
Happy reading
MissMerlot
Date: Dec 06, 2016 3:30 am Title: Chapter 40
Lindsay NEVER learns. She lies even to herself that she has any REAL influence over anything at this point... and Grace is going to be fun!!!
Author's Response:
Nope she never does...and that's what makes it fun!
Happy reading
MissMerlot
Date: Dec 06, 2016 2:03 am Title: Chapter 40
And for the latest episode in Chronicles of BITCH and MITCH:
Holy Shucks Montgomery!!!! Robert Craswell!!! That fucking BITCH Lindsay called the same Art Critic who set Justin up?!!!!!! I definitely want to punch her in the face now! I'm glad Marek called Lydia who in turn called Melody! That trick is trying to sabotage Hunter the way she tried to do Justin.
Incidentally, I'm so damn HAPPY that Lindz and Michael found out that all Lindsay tried to do to Brian and Justin's tear their relationship apart failed and there wasn't a damn thing they could do to stop it. Justin was about to dig a new asshole for Michael while jamming his foot up the one he's already got. And Jenny.... WHOO LAWD Lindsay and Michael done pissed off the wrong two! I cheered aloud when Leda threw their too entitled, too mouthy, too dumb asses OUT of her house!
The confrontation between Dee and Lindsay was HILARIOUS!!! Did that little harridan really think she was any match for Mrs. Deidre Starks? HA! When she called Lindsay's bluff that the coat was hers, Honey! I nearly choked on my Jim Beam!! Talk about too damn funny for words! Then to have Michael almost become roadkill because of his reckless mouth!!! OMG!!!! Vince is the MAN! But Dee's right...Daphne is going to have a field day kicking Michael's ass proper!
As for Mel, I'm so HAPPY she is sticking to her resolve regarding Lindsay. It would be better though if she packs up all of her shit and send Lindsay her things via FedEx to Michael's place. Time to officially Ditch the Bitch in my opinion!
Zee.... well what can I say that hasn't already been said about that incredible, forward thinking woman. I'm so happy that she let the family in on the fact that she now own Shadyside!! The entertainment value of Michael's downfall alone is worth the price of admission but when Lindsay finds out....Lawd love a FOOL because that will be worth the entire fall Armani collection!! Head spinning and green shit flying out the mouth anyone?? LMAO! I can't wait!
As for the last scene: WHOO-HOO I knew the Celeste situation would resurface to bite Lindsay in her flat ass!! Grace... lawd AND she's a lawyer..... AND she's friends with Mel....AND she's got an axe to grind with the Tricking Trollop!! WHOOOO-WEEEEE Hello a revenge plot worthy of Puccini <in my Ted voice>
Lindsay and Michael are just racking up the points in the Dumbass Duo Tournament in which they are the only players. Whatever Joshua is sitting on will probably be the 8-ball that sinks them into the corner pocket of obscurity! Did I mention that I can't wait?!!! WELL I CAN'T!! I'm wriggling around in my chair like a puppy that's gotta pee, I'm so freaking excited!!
WRITE On Nicole,
HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
Oh yes, she's a determined but she's underestimates the depth of protection of Lydia for her little urchin cub and Melody doesn't like being used...
Ah there is more pitbull pissed of Jenny to come very soon.
I love your reviews and so glad that you are enjoying the story.
Off to write C41 where things get interesting.
Happy reading
Hugs
Nicole
[Report This]Date: Dec 06, 2016 12:51 am Title: Chapter 40
HOLY GUACAMOLE!! Michael and Lindsay are Dumber Than A Sack Of Hair!
That moment between Lindsay and D was funny I especially liked when she had Lindsay try on the coat then proceeded to insult her, honey your Ass is not made for designer clothes.
There are pictures of Michael making out with Patrice Ewww and Hilarious (Feel Sorry for Patrice)
Michael should be scared cause when Daphne gets back It Is On!!
Lindsay told that Robert guy she was related to Melody?
Trying to control Hunter's life doesn't make you his mentor, lying and using deceit is not going to guarantee that Melody won't destroy her. (I swear they are going to need t-shirts and a secret code for this club, already have mascots lol)
Mel has to stay strong and keep Lindsay out of the Brownstone time for her to learn her words and actions have severe consequences.
So Leda has pets huh?
Grace and Celeste are married and she knows about the affair?!? Is Grace there to tell Mel? Will the secret about the house come out now or in court?
Lindsay is so dead they are going to have to bury her twice!
Captain Asshat and Stuck-up Heifer Wow...Just Wowwww!
Author's Response:
Dumber than a sack of hair? Brilliant!
Indeed there are, but I'm not IT savvy enough to knock one up, I thought the idea was enough a visual would be too much for my delicate nature.
She will deny she said that...she simply didn't correct his assumption...completely different in Lindsay's mind and the perfect 'get out' for her.
Loving the 'bury her twice' comment, so good!
Happy reading
MissMerlot
Date: Dec 05, 2016 11:16 pm Title: Chapter 40
Wow, things just get better and better for Linz!?
Fantastic, thanks for sharing!
JoAnn
Author's Response:
Never has a woman reaped such a whirlwind of fun right?!
You're more than welcome
Nicole
Date: Dec 05, 2016 11:00 pm Title: Chapter 40
WHOLLY HANNA! Linz's perfect little world is about to crash and burn spectacularly.
Waiting on the reaction when Mikey finds out that Zee is his landlord and is kicking his ass out.
Keep on writing!!!
Author's Response:
It is indeed!
Oh and the reason he's being kicked out is so schweet!
Your wish is my command...off to do C41!
Happy reading
MissMerlot