Date: Aug 03, 2017 5:14 pm Title: Chapter 42
What a chapter! Hell is showering Lindsay and Michael and it won't go away in a few days.
Date: Jan 21, 2017 6:59 pm Title: Chapter 42
That must have been a huge stack of paper they were carrying home.
Date: Dec 09, 2016 1:43 pm Title: Chapter 42
OHHHHHH I KNOW what 'power' Lindsay is talking about..... I finally figured it out. It's called WONDER DUMB POWER and its usually activated by the WONDER TWIT Michael by her side. That was going to tear my brain up until I figured it out. I wonder if Debbie can make them costumes, preferably Orange and Blue ones with a green brain in the middle with the red circle and a slash in the middle...LOL
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
Wonder dumb power! Mine, all mine, no idea who is going to say it but say it they will!
Happy reading
Hugs
Niciole
Date: Dec 09, 2016 1:29 pm Title: Chapter 42
FINALLY getting a chance to read and review!!!! OMFG! WHAT A CHAPTER!!!!!! Thank you for allowing me to deliver the big can of BITCH PLEASE!!!!! I couldn't even stop laughing!!! That 'No pass for yo' ass' sounded so much like me I thought 'OMG Have we met?' And Hunter was the nail in the coffin reminding them of their orange and blue states, LMAO! He's been around Brian too long...LOL
Now onto the chapter itself: Gus, Jenny and Hunter were AMAZING! So strong and independent when dealing with Orangeade and Dummy Smurf!! Michael and Lindsay truly have some big shit with them. I think they really thought that nothing they ever did to the family would have consequences.
Daphne....WHOOOOOOO-WEEEEEE!!!! I actually cheered aloud and fist pumped when my girl got through with the two of them. I could just see their faces when getting those papers...ALL of the papers really!
Mel: YESSSSS!!!! YES! YES! YES!!!!!!!! She is FINALLY free of the entitled, spoiled, wannabe-rich-bitch that is Lindsay. I guess that WASP training will be keeping her warm at night. Thank goodness again for Ellen who had the forethought to videotape the contretemps between Grace and Lindsay! The best part is that Lindsay doesn't even know Mel, Gus and Jenny have officially moved from the Brownstone.
As for Dopey: I'm so glad that Hunter called him on sending Rita to the gallery. I'm especially glad that Zee had him followed so that he couldn't backpeddle and whine his way out of taking responsibility for his viciousness. Charles showing up was just plain BRILLIANT!!
Lindsay feeling that she can threaten Brian and Zee with her power was just fucking HILARIOUS!! Exactly what is it she thinks she can do? Her mother and father are barely tolerated because of Nancy's uppity attitude and Ron is a Sissified straight man. Besides, the two of them are also fed up with Lindsay's entitled and thoughtless behavior which embarrasses them to no end. I'm so looking forward when everything regarding Emily hits the public as well as Justin firing the trollop.BTW Justin..... LAWD I LOVE a strong and forceful Justin Taylor! That young man has spunk in more ways than one and I absolutely adore reading and writing about him that way! As for Zee's parting shot: LMFAO, LMFAO, ROFLMAOOOOOOOoooooo! OMG what a scene stealer she was pointing out the fact that Lindsay's ignorant ass shall be strutting down the street in high heels looking for a way back to the Pitts with her Sidekick in Whine beside her. They can't even call a cab and wait outside since Justin wants them off his property. LOL! What a way to oust the Inglorious Bastards!!
WRITE On Star!!!! HUGS, ~Nichelle
Author's Response:
Oh you had to be in there, nobody could deliver those lines but you!
I'm so glad that I'm doing you proud...you are going to love what happens in the driveway
Happy reading
Hugs
Nicole
Date: Dec 09, 2016 3:45 am Title: Chapter 42
After all that the idiot duo still thinks threats will help them???? Lol
Author's Response:
Of course, naturally they think they are untouchable court wise too...!
Happy reading
MissMerlot
[Report This]Date: Dec 08, 2016 8:46 pm Title: Chapter 42
WOWwwww!!!
Michael and Lindsay came to lunch at Britin expecting everything to be forgiven and returned back to normal instead what they got served was a Shit Storm of their own making.
Daphne got the ball rolling but before the meal was over Michael and Lindsay felt like they got KO'd in the first round.
The Family handled the situation beautifully cause now it is up to Michael and Lindsay to prove their case in a court of law. (That should be funny a judge will probably ask for a psych evolution lol)
Who they should be more afraid of is Zee she was quiet through the whole tirade which is never good, that means she is plotting and planning Zee is about to rain Wholly Hell on these two Slimeballs.
Hope they enjoyed the walk back cause they are going to need to get use to them.
Michael and Lindsay are now Persona Non Grata.
Not even Mommy and Daddy Peterson can help they would be wise to stay away and let Lindsay handle this herself.
This is a fight that is best watched from the sidelines with plenty of alcohol and snacks lol
That pea inside their heads must be running for cover cause this is about to become a blood path (Figuratively Speaking?), Lindsay and Michael plotting revenge is Hilarious, these two idiots couldn't catch a cold without screwing it up.
Can't Wait for the next chapter should be very amusing :)
Author's Response:
Of course they expectd forgiveness after all they are his oldest and best friends the mother of Gus the father of Jenny and everyone always forgives them...well that bullcrap was stopped cold wasn't it.
Hope you enjoy the beginning of C43!
And Ma and Pa Peterson aren't wise, not wise at all.
Happy reading
MissMerlot
Date: Dec 08, 2016 7:14 pm Title: Chapter 42
I think I'd almost give my right boob just to see L&M looking like Oompa Loompas!! LMFAO! Oh what a vision I had in my head. Utterly friggin brilliant. Gave me so much joy to know that apparently was caught on tape, or police pictures so that the gang could see it. So deserved!
I can't believe those 2 still think so highly of themselves. It truly boggles the mind. Even while Jenny is sick, I don't believe for a second that they have any true concerrn in their attempts to see her (or Gus). They're concerned only with their immage. How they need to SEEM concerned. That they feel entitled to any adn all information. So much so that they run everywhere rather than calling and leaving even a message to ask about them. I want to smack them both. HARD!
Lunch was the most incredibly awesomest brilliant affair ever! I pissed myself lughing through it all just imagining the stunned and outraged looks on their faces. Loved that Daph even surprised the gang with her suits as well. The band of 2 idiots got nailed from all sides, and kicked out to boot! Even Hunter got his bits in as well. He'll very happily be a Bruckner, and Ben will be thrilled as well. Everyone has had enough. But really.......it is just SO much fun reading about all their downfalls adn shit that happens to them, all because they think so highly of themselves.
I must admit, my jaw dropped to the floor when Lindsey had teh audasity to threaten Zee. Zee's reaction.well....scared the shit out of me. Yikes! I really laughed out loud however when Lindsey went on about "You have no idea how much power I have" she has NONE! Zip, zilch...nadda. Her parents may have some influence, but it's not like they're going to help, at least not willingly.
I swear I say it every single chapter....repeatedly...but this was frigging brilliant! Wowza! Every new chapter is my new favorite. lol.
Looking forward ot what happens next.
Cheers,
Elaine
Author's Response:
Hmmm, I do believe I see a compilation video of their best bits in the future...you know a nice wedding present for Brian and Justin.
Thanks so much for the praise Elaine, I am having great fun sending them to hell.
I think you will like the beginning of C43
Happy reading
Nicole
Date: Dec 08, 2016 4:31 pm Title: Chapter 42
Oh sweet baby jeebus this was soooooo delicious! Lindsay and Mikey are finally going down for good. I'm not sure what Lindz thinks she has the power to do but it's all in her delusions.
Author's Response:
Yep their slow and painful descent to hell begins...hee hee!
MissMerlot
Date: Dec 08, 2016 8:10 am Title: Chapter 42
OMG, so good, so good, could cont. on with the praises.
I know you have been updating updating quickly, but pleasssssse.
Thanks for sharing!
JoAnn
Author's Response:
Thank you thank you.
C43 being tip tapped out...hope to post tomorrow.
Happy reading
Nicole
Date: Dec 08, 2016 6:28 am Title: Chapter 42
"Open a can of, bitch please?" Love it!
Also, Lindsay bringing all her wrath down! Ha fucking ha! And what power? I love seeing her try to WASP her way out of an embarrassing situation. She just ends up looking more ignorant and like the classy wannabe that she is.
Oooh...I'd just love a scene where they all form a line just to smack the shit out of her...one.by.one.!!!
Keep posting girlfriend!
Author's Response:
I did enjoy that line it has to be said, something that Nichelle would definitely say.
I shall keep posting...C43 being tip-tapped out, hope to post tomorrow.
Happy reading
MissMerlot
[Report This]Date: Dec 08, 2016 6:15 am Title: Chapter 42
Okay, maybe I need to reread the last chapter, but why are Brian and Justin crying? Opps I forgot about Brian's surprise for Justin, that was ruined. So everyone is helping with moving them to Squirrel Hill now, what about the food? Poor little Jenny coming down with a cold. Oh I just read Nichelle's part - so cool and sounds just like her. Orangeade and Dummy Smurf! Hahaha. Trying to contact the kids? Unaware that the kids are going for emancipation. Jenny and Gus aren't the only ones not sure what has happened, but it looked like fun. Looks like the emancipations went through. Love all the lawsuit section. Yahoo, Justin threw them out. But why does Lindsay think she can still best Zee?
Author's Response:
Because she's a WASP and she screams a lot, and thinks shouting equals power...but she does have a brief glimpse of hope.
Happy reading
MissMerlot
[Report This]Date: Dec 08, 2016 5:47 am Title: Chapter 42
Will Give a longer review tomorrow cause I gotta read it again, all I will say though is:
BOOM, GOES THE DYNAMITE!!!
Author's Response:
Look forward to reading it.
More kabooms to come...!
Happy reading
MissMerlot